Saturday, January 17, 2009

Revenge

- by KParthasarathi 06 Feb 2009

“Ravi, what you are doing is not right. You have been running around with Vinita when you are already engaged to Sarala.It is not fair once you have committed to marry someone else. Even though you are not yet married to Sarala, it is plain cheating. You must move away from Vinita for the good of both” said his friend Ram.
Ravi laughed and replied “Oh don’t be such a prude. My marriage is slated only three months hence. How does it matter to Sarala what I do till then. Vinita and I like each other. How does it bother you?’
“Didn’t you tell me that you had assured Vinita that you will marry her? She is trusting you and giving herself to you in the hope of both getting married. I would not approve of this” said Ram
Ravi with an impish smile said “Forget it. It is all common in love and if she is foolish she will have to pay the price.”
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“Sarala, you have been dating Mohan for almost three years and have gone very intimate with him going out with him now and then to holiday spots. How can you ditch him and settle for Ravi? Is it not a clear betrayal?” asked her friend.”
”Tell me what am I do when this Mohan is virtually a pauper and lives on his meagre monthly salary. He keeps counting money even when he takes me out to cheap joints. No doubt he keeps me happy. But I cannot imagine a life of want when all I need is luxury and a foolish husband who will shower money on me and allow me to do what pleases me most. Ravi is garishly rich with huge business interests and property. I will nevertheless be intimate with Mohan as hitherto even after my wedding to Ravi but will not marry him” replied Sarala
“You are not only an untrue lover but also a likely cheater.Fie on you” said her friend.
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“Vinita” called her roommate Sharanya.”I hear you are getting married to Ravi and that both of you are already going steady and intimate. Is it true?’
“Yeah, he is madly in love with me and has promised to marry me within three or four months. You know I need someone in the circumstances I am placed.”
Sharanya asked her “Did you not tell him that you tested positive for HIV? How can you spoil a young man’s life? What you are doing is totally unethical and dishonest.”
“He never asked me. Why should I volunteer information that would take him away from me?” said Vinita
--0--
In life God has His own mysterious ways to punish the wicked. None can cheat Him. People think they are clever only to be overtaken by revenge from unexpected quarters.

20 comments:

  1. Nice one..Makes me almost scared to do anything wrong..But it's true, one never gets away with doing bad stuff. One way or the other, life pays you back the same card that you dealt others!!

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  2. A very strong message of justice has been conveyed here. Excellent plot-construction as well. Thanks. Best wishes, KP.

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  3. Thank you Sheba and Ayesha for the nice comments.Cheers KP

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  4. Thats well said and a masterly plotted one as usual.

    As always the spark is in the ending lines :)
    cheers :P

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  5. Thanks,Shravan, for the kind comments

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  6. As you sow , so you you reap! The twist in the end not only shows a sense of justice it also a brings a smile on your face. It shows us that God is watching over us!

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  7. Good one with a strong message. What goes around comes around. Narrated extremely in a gripping manner that enables the viewers to keep their interest till the last line.

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  8. Wonderful message! True, we reap, what we sow. It is God's inevitable rule. Unaware of it, we keeping cheating others. You've well plotted the story, and clearly driven the strong message. Congrats!

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  9. Thanks Sweta and Manivannan for the kind comments. I am glad you liked the story

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  10. All I can say is excellent, hats off to you!

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  11. Thanks alot,Sana for the nice words

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  12. true and well written....
    god always have some thing in store equivalent to what we have done.....

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  13. You are right about retribution.Thanks for the kind words

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  14. Fantastic post Sir... Simply mind blowing... Hats off...

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  15. Hey, brilliant work! Such a simple story- but it carries such a strong message! :-)
    One of your best, I guess. :-)

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  16. Thanks,Ramaa.It is for you readers to judge

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