Tuesday, September 14, 2010

55 word fiction

Why?
She saw her ex-flame in mall
He dropped her at her place
‘Won’t you come in?’
‘Why not,I will’’
They sat in sofa with drinks.
He hugged her tight.She melted
Soon they locked lips passionately
She led him into bedroom and closed the doors
Next moment she rushed out screaming
Why?
Sorry, 55 words restrction!!

5 comments:

  1. lol-wonder if thats your funny bone or your sadistic streak at work??

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  2. Perhaps you can write another one, where you tell us why she screams.
    Best wishes :)

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  3. lol...make sure the sequel comes in the next 55 word story! ;)

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  4. Not fair!!! But we let our imagination finish the story for us.

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  5. Grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr.....:)still I loved its open endining style...

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