Sunday, September 12, 2010

55 word fiction

The dance
I was alone sipping beer in the restaurent.Band was on with people dancing
She walked towards me and asked ‘Care to dance?’
She was hot and danced with passion.’Meet me at 29, Carnaby road an hour later for some fun.’
‘This is 29 alright. No one lives here after the lady committed suicde ‘said watchman
Uncaring
Raju,you cannot send her away.She has been with you for years since her younger days
Sorry dad, she has become old and not meeting my expectations.I want an younger one to satisfy my needs.
You are cruelly insensitive as she is not protesting
I cannot help it,dad
The butcher led away the cow

10 comments:

  1. Nice story. There is a twist even in such a short story. Amazing.

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  2. Nice story. There is a twist even in such a short story. Amazing.

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  3. Wow! The ghost comes and dances! But, why did she kill herself?

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  4. Three or four lines but they say it all, thats called powerful writing and you have it in your control gp :)

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  5. Second one is very sad, I hate it when people send cows to butchers.

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  6. Tales of horror, eh? Interesting! In just 55 words, even better!

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  7. The two stories were fun! It is an art to write in such few words.

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  8. Wonder whats the significance of 55?

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