Tuesday, September 13, 2011

55 W fiction

1. Loyalty
As they were tying the knot at a temple, she asked “I have left my home behind forever. Will you be true and ever with me?”
”Why doubt me? Cheer up. Let us go to our hotel room after dinner and have fun” he said shutting the thought of his wife and child at home.

2. Talisman
He paid Rs.500 to the famous tantric for an unfailing talisman to attract woman. He came out and tried it on a young woman waiting at bus stop. Lo, she smiled at him and came near. He smiled back not seeing the talisman she also had in hand and trying on him. Talisman seemed working.

3. The will
He hated his dad who made his wayward son’s life miserable. He threw him out when he was into drugs and whores. He didn’t attend dad’s funeral or lawyer’s office. Why go and get disappointed, he thought. Lawyer read the secret will “……If my son is not present, entire wealth should go to charity…..”

4. The report card
The boy stood trembling with poor report card.
“Come near” his dad called. Mom’s face was grim.
Boy sobbed fearing worst punishment.
“Very poor show. It is a shame on you” dad said as he took the cane.
”Don’t cry. It is over. Do better next time” he smilingly said as he broke the cane

5. Pets
LKG admission in prestigious school was going on..
The four year old in pony tail and pinafore stood before Principal
“Name three pets” she was told
“Cat, dog and…” she lingered for a while before she said “daddy”.
All broke into laughter and the girl was admitted with parents beaming with smile

27 comments:

  1. ALL ARE NICE THE LAST ONE IS TOO GOOD

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  2. best is ..the will. though liked all of them.

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  3. I loved all your 55 fictions soo much :))

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  4. nice!! liked the pets one the best!

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  5. Wow.. very nice.. loved the first and last one very much.. too good.. as usual :)

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  6. the will is interesting
    but Pets- marks for a nice read

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  7. You are very generous KP - to bring us 5 crisp and clear stories in one post.

    However, I was sad to end the post as I wanted few more. I guess this is called "greed".

    This reminds me of us little children sitting around this one uncle who tells us stories. As soon as he finishes one, we will be like, 'One more! Please one more!'.

    #4 & 5 were my favorites. Thank you!

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  8. Wow.. you can write long stoies, short fictions and all..I just find it difficult to even write a blog post. Loved it all. especially the last one...

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  9. Nice short stories :))) Loved them

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  10. Brevity wins the day…
    Hope that kiddo got admission in LKG :D

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  11. Brilliant uncle.. i loved the way u connected them:)

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  12. Liked the 2nd one and the last one. The first one freaked me out!

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  13. You should be writing more like this.

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  14. This is my first time here. Came in from NRIGirl's blog.

    Just like she said... "One more please". :)

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  15. Hello, I'm here after the prompting NRIgirl has packed in her post on your Blog.

    I must say that as she warned the 50 word wonder seems to be your forte. I liked them, "Te Will" in particular. I guess only Dads know the pathos in it.

    Thanks

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  16. the will is truly great.. the last one too..

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  17. Good collection! Pets brought smile to start the day:-)

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  18. The Will was superb...I love ur 55W fiction. I want to keep on reading them:)

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  19. thoroughly enjoyed reading the stories. you have a knack of writing perfect pieces.all are great but i think it is5th,4th,3rd 1st & 2nd from outstanding to good. Hungry for more!

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  20. Crisp and wonderful to read. Enjoyed all stories.

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  21. beautiful works.. I like last one the best

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  22. Excellent. I have always your skill of churning out beautiful stories in 55 words, each one better than another and the last one ending on a hilarious note :).

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  23. i loved all of them .. really nice.. this is wat 55 fiction is all about..

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