Monday, November 7, 2011

Archana's accomplice

Archana was addicted to the computer. At 35 without children and husband by her side, it was a humdrum life for her. There was little joy in her life what with a husband like Arul, an obese no gooder, she had married by mistake. She was wealthy and a rebel and years ago fell for his smooth talk and bold advances. She never bothered about the admonitions from her old daddy and went ahead marrying him. She soon realized her mistake. He was a drunkard and was after easy money. He was also a poor lover and gave her no joy. Since he was troubling her daily for money, she drove him out but paid monthly some amount for his upkeep. But he was still pestering her with his demands. She spent her time in facebook, Orkut and a few other social sites and befriended young men and chatted with them endlessly. Some she met and with some she dated. While she enjoyed these, she was on the lookout for one reliable guy easily amenable to her wishes.

She found this young man Virat in the chat room repeatedly pinging her and wanting to chat with her.. There was certain warmth and forced intimacy in his words. A single, he said, he was unattached. Her age did not matter, he said, as he preferred slightly older women. Any particular reason, she asked to which he said they loved better. She did not easily agree to date him but when he persisted for an early meeting she was tempted to give him her number. His voice was masculine and so mesmerizing that she did not want the call to ever end.They agreed to meet at a restaurant. In person too he was captivating. After the pleasantries, she asked him how he took special interest in her in the chat room and whether he had heard of or knew her earlier. He shrugged his shoulders and smiled. After the dinner she took him home and she had a wonderful night with him. She knew in the morning he had fallen for her hook line and sinker. He continued to stay with her giving her pleasant time and gradually won her complete confidence. She confided in him how her life had been ruined and this was the first time ever she is experiencing the joy of masculine company in full. She told him how Arul without agreeing for divorce was taking advantage of her and how she keenly desired that this nuisance is put to a permanent end.

“Will you do this favour for me? I shall reward you amply in several ways” she tempted him with a mischievous wink.

“I would do anything for you, my sweet pie. But let us go out now to a posh restaurant in your finest dress and all bedecked with dazzling jewelry” Virat replied

“Surely, I will get ready in a few minutes But tell me when will you finish him off” she asked

“Tomorrow morning I will look into this the first thing. But right now I will choose what jewels my darling will wear tonight for our dinner outing” he said as he gave her a peck on her cheeks.

She then opened her Almirah and took out all the boxes of jewels and laid them before him. There were so many different kinds of jewelry in gold and diamond, various types of necklaces, unique pendants, classic earrings, celebrity-inspired jewelry, exquisite pearl sets and many more. It must be worth a life time fortune. She told him “Select what you want me to wear before I come back after change of dress”

When she came out in her beautiful dress fresh after a shower, he showed her the jewelry he had chosen for the night. He pushed the boxes away and said as he pulled her to the bed “Let us have some real fun before we go out for dinner, you seductress” When she was happily enjoying his warm embrace with her eyes closed after the passionate encounter, she failed to see the nylon rope he put around her neck. She became limp after some struggle. He collected all the jewels and left the place quietly locking the door by closing and leaving no trace of his presence.

“Virat,I am pleased that you accomplished the job given to you perfectly. With her dad dead and with no kids, I would get all her wealth and become rich. Here is the promised money in the envelope. But we must celebrate this successful completion of the job. Just one second’ Arul said as he went in to fetch two glasses of champagne.Virat with a fortune already in his house was in high spirit as he pocketed the envelope. After clinking the glasses, he gulped it in one go. He never got up as he slumped on the floor. Arul had a hearty laugh unaware that Virat had left on Archana’s bed his mobile that linked him to Arul.

25 comments:

  1. Interestingly woven story with a twist in the tale! Great!

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  2. Interesting Story :) Liked it..

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  3. WOW..!!!! unexpected twist...I loved the ending.

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  4. hmmm .. all for the sake of money ...
    what all people do ... amazing

    Bikram's

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  5. Good one, KP. :-) Have you toyed with the idea of compiling your short stories into a book? That certainly would make for some interesting reading.

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  6. Nice story; but the picture kind of gave it away.

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  7. Karma is a bitch, as they say :-)

    Nice one :-)

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  8. wow.. cool.. initially i tot hew'd run away wt all d jewellery :P .. but wow, awesome twist, loved it :)

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  9. Twist and twist and twist! Good one KP...Loved the end- all bad guys pay!

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  10. Wow!!!!I was expecting some twist from Kp and yes!!!it is there!!!.....wonderfully written

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  11. initially thought it's a normal story. But yeah... at the end,... great twist!!

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  12. experimenting with all genres! :) that's really good, and challenging too. So many scripts so many characters, mind must be churning with plots and subplots all the time! :)

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  13. I guess nobody escapes! Nice story and well written.

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  14. Short with dramaticending!But common place these days. Read so many reports about such happenings in high places !
    See my latest post - A Kerala Village !
    Bye Ram

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  15. thats twist after twist...
    and there is one left to unwind too

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  16. Ha ha..! nice one.. good plot with nice twists!! the good always triumphs eventually.. and loved the narration!

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  17. this is a triangle, definitely not a love triangle, about people finding out the difference between what you can and can't have. And that there's a fine line between reality and fantasy. That you can have happiness but you don't get it without paying a heavy price:-)
    Terrific, Partha, Sir !

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  18. this one i never guessed.. like what deeps told, there is one more baddie left behind..

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  19. this is really nice. I enjoyed reading :)

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