Saturday, July 16, 2016

Love at first sight

It was dark and the wind was howling. Kanchana was alone and her husband was expected only the next day evening. She walked up to the rattling window to close it. When she put out her hand to draw the shutters, she saw a young man standing at the opposite window of adjacent house and intently staring at her. It is not the first time, as whenever she came to the window, he was there watching her with a sly smile. Kanchana knew but she was impelled, by some magnetic force as it were, to be drawn often to the window for no reason. He must be in mid-thirties, tall and with a muscular body, sharp featured and handsome, and a mesmerizing eyes that had a seductive twinkle. She was always happy to see him virtually devouring her with his eyes transfixed on her. She had no guts to look at him straight except by stolen glances. They had never exchanged words or waved their hands or met except once at the local grocery this afternoon but she relished their mutual infatuation. Her conscience pricked her as her husband was loving to her and she too loved him much. She still had a deep crush on the irresistible young neighbour and enjoyed his attention. This mutual but distant admiration continued for a month or so.
 It was in the afternoon when she had finished buying groceries and walking towards her vehicle, she had dropped a bag unknowingly. When she was about to get into the car, she saw someone calling ‘Madam, you have dropped your bag’ and rushing towards her. It was the neighbor. When he handed the bag, his hand brushed against hers perhaps by design but set the butterflies aflutter in her stomach. It was a strange delectable feeling that she wished to linger for long.  
When she thanked him profusely, he said, “Do you know that I live in the adjacent house of yours and often see you? I am Suman, an IT engineer, living here since recently”
He looked more handsome and like-able at close quarters. She kept quiet for a while before saying, “Yes, I know you are the gentleman found standing always by the window” and broke into a laughter that he too joined in.
“How would you know, madam that I am always at the window? You are er.” he asked mischievously.
“I am Kanchana and my husband is a senior marketing executive. Thank you again for the help” she said as she got into the car.
“Can I drop in sometime to get introduced to your husband? We can then have many social occasions to meet”.
“Surely, but my husband is away and would be back only tomorrow evening. May be some other time later “she said.
That night as she lay in the bed she could never take off his face from her mind for long.
The patter of the rain had stopped and she came to the hall to open the window. Looking out expectantly, she saw the window at the adjacent apartment also open at the same time with Suman standing with his hairy bare chest uncovered. Both could not suppress their giggle as they saw each other. He waved his hand at her with her responding in equal glee and not moving from the window for a long time.
As she lay on the bed reading a novel, there was a knock on the door. Wondering who it could be, she opened the door to find Suman standing. She felt a shock of million volts pass through her and stood dazed undecided whether to invite him inside or not. He gave her no choice as he entered the hall shutting the door slightly.
“I had told you my husband is away and that you can visit some other time,” she said with a frown in the face.
“Yes, I am aware but I wished to come to meet you. How long we should be content gazing at each other? I could not resist this opportunity to visit, know you more and exchange our feelings for each other,” he said even as he sat on the sofa unasked. Not only that he had the temerity to pat on the sofa by his side suggesting that she sit by his side.
Though torn between the attraction of new found love and her sense of loyalty to her loving husband, she could realize where a moment of indecision and weakness would irretrievably lead to. She decided instantly that she would not betray her husband and told him in stern tone, “You are not welcome when my husband is not at home. Please leave this place immediately.”
“I am surprised at your sudden volte face. What is the meaning of standing before each other smiling and giggling all these days? I thought you were in love with me just as I am ardently with you. Please be sensible, you will not regret.” he pleaded with his arms extended towards her.
“I agree I was at fault gazing at you daily. I should not have done it especially when I am married and not a single. True I was infatuated rather foolishly but I would not be untrue to my husband till we have each other. Please go away before I scream,” she said in a determined tone.
Suman stared at her in disbelief and left the hall without a word.
On the Sunday two days later Kanchana was standing in the verandah in the morning waving her hand to her husband Kartik as he left for gym. Just as she turned to go back into the house she saw, Suman accosting Kartik on the road in front of his house and shaking hands with him after some small conversation. She wondered why he was befriending him especially when she avoided seeing him. The window since two days was fully covered by curtain. She went in knowing that Kartik would tell her after his return from gym.
As she was working in the kitchen she heard loud thuds from the adjacent house as if a wall or floor being demolished. This continued for long though she ignored it presuming some repairs are being carried out. She could see no workmen however.
It was past 11am and there was no trace of Kartik. He normally does not work out more than an hour. Worried she crisscrossed the house and finally rang up the gym to ascertain whether Kartik had left. To her shock, the assistant informed Kartik did not visit the gym. Not knowing what to do, she ran to the adjacent house and rang the bell. Suman came out in shorts and a vest with body covered with mud and cement and asked her somewhat surprised what brought her to him.
. “I saw my husband talking to you on his way to gym. He has not returned till now. He hardly spends an hour there. The gym says he had not come there. You were the last person he met before he left. Unfortunately, he had left his mobile at home. Did he tell you of any change in his plan?” she asked.
“Nothing. We just said good morning and talked about the weather before he left on his way. I am sorry to hear that he has not come. May be, held up somewhere. If you need any help, feel free to ask,” he said.
As Kanchana was slowly recounting to the police inspector the happenings since morning and also about the exchange of greetings between Suman and Kartik, Suman entered the hall unexpectedly. Turning to Kanchana, he said " I saw the police vehicle and wondered whether you needed my help."
The inspector who was seated spoke to him " I was myself wanting to meet you. Luckily you are here. Can I have some details of you before we discuss about this matter?"
Suman produced an identity card from his pocket and on seeing it the inspector stood up deferentially and saluted him to the surprise of Kanchana. Suman patted him on his shoulder and said "Do not worry about Kartik.There is nothing for you to do. He is safe in custody at a secret place. In fact, I wished to inform this lady but felt better to break the news to her gently in the evening."
Turning to Kanchana, he said, “I am sorry I did not reveal my true identity to you. As the inspector will testify, I am in the intelligence wing. Kartik is not what he seems to you. He has been indulging in many illegal, criminal and anti-national activities. He is no marketing man but a hardened criminal in disguise. I wonder how and when you got married to him? It may shock you that you are one of the many whom he has duped and left in lurch. True, he wallows in money. He has been escaping our net for long and I moved in to the next house after getting to know he is here. We wished to catch him red handed." He added with a faint smile in his face, “It may disappoint you to know that I was initially watching your window to get a glimpse of him and his activities. Anyway brace yourself to know he may be in jail for decades. You will come to know of his treacherous activities in due course. Luckily you are out of harm’s way. Please get some friends or relatives to stay with you for a few days. I will meet you later. You can always ring me," he said as he gave her his card.
Without going into details, suffice it to inform, from the information gathered, that Kanchana and Suman are happily living together in a Northern city with none wiser about the secret lying buried in the adjacent house.

28 comments:

  1. A really interesting one with an unexpected twist. Love the way you weavery.

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  2. Typical thriller, this is! Very well narrated as usual, KP. I didn't expect this twist, very good!

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  3. Excellent! What a twist!! Beautifully narrated. Poor Kanchana oblivious to Suman's crime. Very thrilling and suspenseful. I really enjoyed this story. Very nicely written, as usual.

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  4. Super duper twist. Loved your narration!

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  5. A nice twist towards the end. Regards.

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  6. What a twist to the tale ! The less that is said makes the reader imagine more !

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  7. That’s a terrific twist.. Really filmy style… and in the light of whats unfolding in Kerala, this just jells well..

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  8. 007 in the new avathar. Pretty good story.

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  9. Wah re wah..kya baat hai..I am really bowled over by this M&B story..love is really in the air as suggested by the lovely pic of the azure blue sky with the milky white clouds..

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  10. And the sinister murder committed adding more thrill and excitement to the romance..

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  11. Nice story! Now we expect a twist in all your stories! Vasudha

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  12. Extremely well narrated. Interesting one.

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  13. Omg what a story, it was like I was watching it on TV. Wonderful KP as usual grt job

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  14. I know your story will always have a suspense at the end. But I never expected this twist. Hats off to you. But them living together at the end sounds like a Tamil movie.

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  15. Loved the language, narration and the twist. In fact a few months back had read in the newspaper about a married man who went on pretending to be a police officer for a few years before he was caught. Such things do happen after all!

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  16. Great narration and happy ending!

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  17. Ohh .. Now that is Definitely a TWIST :) Good one again as always

    Bikram's

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  18. Why don't you write a book? :-)

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  19. Great twist! I was expecting something else! Loved the narration as well... :-)

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  20. What an unexpected and devilish twist! And you have left it to the readers imagination....wonderful

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  21. Wow! Love the twist...I kind of did not expect it! MIND_BLOWN!!

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  22. Omg.. what a twist. Initially I dint like the way it started but the way it ended is fabulous. Hahaha. Very well written

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  23. Sorry KP! Unable to relate to this story. Wonder what makes so many people comment so profusely. The premise of the story itself appears so contrived. Does anything like this ever happen in real life?

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  24. It's interesting, how destiny impacts our lives directly, or rather how we experience it. A sensitive read...enjoyed thoroughly, KP :)))

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