tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8048731130587777458.post7200342855603712494..comments2024-03-28T19:24:01.300+05:30Comments on random thoughts: Susan's grinKParthasarathihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02189924874350906456noreply@blogger.comBlogger20125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8048731130587777458.post-19685561151685529962012-04-20T22:04:04.602+05:302012-04-20T22:04:04.602+05:30I liked the way story is put.. The interpretation ...I liked the way story is put.. The interpretation is left to the reader. Susan heroine/villain? I would rate her as a villain.Sahana Raohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06313761460595189822noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8048731130587777458.post-87574948203031786382012-04-17T08:43:45.725+05:302012-04-17T08:43:45.725+05:30I felt the end was cruel too. But, it is a story, ...I felt the end was cruel too. But, it is a story, and I love it that your stories can be unexpected.Rachnahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02275266551382931603noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8048731130587777458.post-73731566949418224402012-04-17T06:34:04.080+05:302012-04-17T06:34:04.080+05:30very interesting..couldnt stop till finishing the ...very interesting..couldnt stop till finishing the last line..though its not acceptable..!<br /><br /><a href="http://tastyappetite.blogspot.com/" rel="nofollow">Tasty Appetite </a>Jayanthy Kumaranhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01536467787138586347noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8048731130587777458.post-59990437858733447842012-04-17T01:41:34.700+05:302012-04-17T01:41:34.700+05:30It was good but i didn't like the end mistakes...It was good but i didn't like the end mistakes can be done by any person..No one does an accident willingly..I think killing him was bit cruel..kalahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09479935864825312965noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8048731130587777458.post-90030588465473996432012-04-16T11:36:34.665+05:302012-04-16T11:36:34.665+05:30This is simply a short story. If it were a paperba...This is simply a short story. If it were a paperback novel there would be no questions to be asked in here. Because the author or writer of the novel would have put together a most convincing narrative replete with the necessary details of characters, events, motivation, background, and drama. <br /><br />Short stories, on the other hand, have its limitations and is open to interpretations as it engages its readers to further probe or explore vicariously.... something which, admittedly, is part of its charm.<br /><br />That is where you most often succeed in your short stories.... to tickle or titillate your readers with possibilities or interpretations. The 'why', 'how', or 'what-if', 'is it or is it not', 'did he or did he not' ...... you leave to them to plot or explore.<br /><br />Keep writing. Good job.<br />Blessings to you and your familyEllenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05682310322367124297noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8048731130587777458.post-88816202678500157622012-04-15T22:08:30.948+05:302012-04-15T22:08:30.948+05:30The discussion here is becoming interesting!
This...The discussion here is becoming interesting!<br /><br />This story can never have a happy ending. Susan can never forgive her husband and baby's killer. But killing the man means, as Unknown has said she will be guilty of killing the family of the baby. <br /><br />But a happy ending will not be an interesting end for the story.Sandhyahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06478831923010850316noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8048731130587777458.post-84959966354688207112012-04-15T19:42:26.358+05:302012-04-15T19:42:26.358+05:30Namaste........
Wow...
This story is something, th...Namaste........<br />Wow...<br />This story is something, though I can say many things I remain with this. It begs the questions, does two wrongs make a right and though her actions seems justified, is it?<br /><br />Have a blessed day.<br />Rhapsody<br />https://plus.google.com/101099217204323189067<br />http://www.facebook.com/RhapsodyPhoenix<br />http://poetry.com/users/74800<br />http://www.shelfari.com/rhapsodyphoenix<br />http://twitter.com/rhapsodyphoenixRhapsody Phoenixhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03520384490148575528noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8048731130587777458.post-54546821032759175592012-04-15T18:55:29.031+05:302012-04-15T18:55:29.031+05:30Though you have tried giving some explanation I do...Though you have tried giving some explanation I do not agree with it. A lady who loathes a man, especially one who has been the cause of her family'e death, would never go out with him unless she had an ulterior motive, which explains the cold blooded part in my comment. And a woman like this could never be compassionate. As for the woman being angry, that is justified. But taking law into her own hands makes her a criminal. She is no better than him. Now she is guilty of killing the family of the baby. So is this cycle going to continue.....!Unknownhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09093268643383431381noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8048731130587777458.post-19827651397510479042012-04-15T15:20:10.492+05:302012-04-15T15:20:10.492+05:30I was expecting a twist as usual down the line… li...I was expecting a twist as usual down the line… like it was a dream or something….<br />But ahaa… it was not to be…deepshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15296902414799985603noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8048731130587777458.post-59370949006309776352012-04-15T14:11:25.028+05:302012-04-15T14:11:25.028+05:30The story has evoked strong reactions.Pramoda and ...The story has evoked strong reactions.Pramoda and Sandhya feel that an explanation from me would be in order. For many Susan seems to be a villain, selfish, cold blooded murderer and even a thief. Let us analyze the story.<br />John drove his car rashly at reckless speed endangering not only himself and his family but finally was responsible for the death of two innocent lives travelling in another car in another lane<br />He ruined the life of Susan by his failure to follow the rules of the road besides being the cause of his wife’s death. In the eyes of law he is an accused. Susan’s rage against him is a natural human reaction against someone who shattered her life, willful or accidental. Otherwise how do you explain the killings in road rages?<br />Susan was a compassionate woman readily offering to help John when she was not aware of his identity and even went to the extent of nursing the baby.<br />It was only when she came to know the identity of john thro the car number that she started hating him. Even when she went out with him, she had no design to kill him. It was when he was near the edge of terrace an overpowering anger of a wronged mom and wife that came over presumably to nudge him over the railing. We have no proof that she really pushed him. May be he might have craned his neck and fell on his own.The story is not explicit on this aspect.<br />But her smug grin at what she considered the poetic justice for his rash act cannot be faulted. She did not steal the baby. It was with John and her and when deprived of the father she took the natural step of taking the baby with her.<br />Many would have liked a happy ending with Susan and John finding comfort in each other’s arms but this story was different. Different strokes, different people as they say.KParthasarathihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02189924874350906456noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8048731130587777458.post-81470999938865618192012-04-15T12:06:44.071+05:302012-04-15T12:06:44.071+05:30I was hoping for a love story! What a twist !!I was hoping for a love story! What a twist !!Bhagyashreehttp://www.bbsearchingself.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8048731130587777458.post-6185220833914559912012-04-15T11:38:28.093+05:302012-04-15T11:38:28.093+05:30oh! this piece shook me up!
love the new colors o...oh! this piece shook me up!<br /><br />love the new colors on your blog ... the red and black combinationSujatha Sathyahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00448034391267400236noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8048731130587777458.post-7978498751174030422012-04-15T10:47:38.651+05:302012-04-15T10:47:38.651+05:30Hmmm....I agree with Cloud Nine and Unknown! I thi...Hmmm....I agree with Cloud Nine and Unknown! I think you better give an explanation here, Partha Sir!!!Sandhyahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06478831923010850316noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8048731130587777458.post-77707878675693989562012-04-14T20:17:44.291+05:302012-04-14T20:17:44.291+05:30This is not eye for an eye. What John did was an a...This is not eye for an eye. What John did was an accident but hers was a cold blooded murder. Cannot justify that. She is a criminal. She made the child and orphan and stole the baby too.Unknownhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09093268643383431381noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8048731130587777458.post-56811513981135845862012-04-14T19:09:34.234+05:302012-04-14T19:09:34.234+05:30Agree completely with Cloud Nine KP uncle! Susan i...Agree completely with Cloud Nine KP uncle! Susan is selfish, one she wants the child, refrains from sharing the facts and thinks of her grief only. Even Sebastien was in grief, his intent was not wrong.L KRUPAAhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05444862052732342641noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8048731130587777458.post-38513848670822106572012-04-14T18:18:41.708+05:302012-04-14T18:18:41.708+05:30The wrath of a woman has more potency and severit...The wrath of a woman has more potency and severity?anilkurup59https://www.blogger.com/profile/07961961217418715354noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8048731130587777458.post-43266818774550797542012-04-14T17:24:50.293+05:302012-04-14T17:24:50.293+05:30I agree with @Cloud nine...
KP uncle.. reply ..:...I agree with @Cloud nine... <br /><br />KP uncle.. reply ..:)Pramoda Medurihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04513152092118282205noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8048731130587777458.post-80933187459849399762012-04-14T15:04:38.934+05:302012-04-14T15:04:38.934+05:30Is this story one sided KP? Susan grieves, true, b...Is this story one sided KP? Susan grieves, true, but Sebastian too would have grieved...he too lost someone close. What if he held Susan's husband responsible for his wife's death???And was he unaware that she was the widow of the man whose car he had crashed into???Cloud Ninehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02382499546129406231noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8048731130587777458.post-86556188326079962752012-04-14T14:59:16.061+05:302012-04-14T14:59:16.061+05:30Story is like a movie.." he tripped and fell...Story is like a movie.." he tripped and fell over the low railing." , so she dint push him down, still she was happy abt it. strange...Shanthi Krishnakumarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06582441349117334600noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8048731130587777458.post-68078223480723606612012-04-14T14:49:51.652+05:302012-04-14T14:49:51.652+05:30revenge taken, he too seemed to be grieving...no p...revenge taken, he too seemed to be grieving...no place for understanding it seems...lakshmihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18439593972569552198noreply@blogger.com