tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8048731130587777458.post8183839743705989457..comments2024-03-28T19:24:01.300+05:30Comments on random thoughts: The mysterious powerKParthasarathihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02189924874350906456noreply@blogger.comBlogger26125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8048731130587777458.post-85214088031294759672014-04-12T12:21:26.620+05:302014-04-12T12:21:26.620+05:30Eerie thought after the eerie story -Could the dea...Eerie thought after the eerie story -Could the death of the little girl be avoided if the protagonist would let her play in the park instead of sending her home.Resonates with the idea- With great power comes great responsibility.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8048731130587777458.post-40942676166511752892014-04-06T13:52:41.203+05:302014-04-06T13:52:41.203+05:30Great power to have, Sir.
Imagine the guilt- you a...Great power to have, Sir.<br />Imagine the guilt- you ask the child to be taken home & the child gets electrocuted...<br />If death is imminent, it'll arrive in whichever way wherever we are... <br />The ending is super!<br />Anita Sabathttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13365472694082398017noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8048731130587777458.post-33684326612496581452014-03-26T15:56:54.440+05:302014-03-26T15:56:54.440+05:30Oh what a amazing story ! Just couldn't stop r...Oh what a amazing story ! Just couldn't stop reading it :) And the end was simply fab... Love your write ups Sir .Sushree Dashhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17419017717501796680noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8048731130587777458.post-76544836643677552372014-03-26T12:33:33.687+05:302014-03-26T12:33:33.687+05:30It could be read two ways. isn't it?
The stran...It could be read two ways. isn't it?<br />The stranger looked intently in the eyes and went away. Could also mean that perhaps the poor fellow had only little time to live and the stranger concluded that the power given to the fellow would not matter now as he was going to die.<br />And it can also be read as you mentioned- the stranger taking away the power to see death.anilkurup59https://www.blogger.com/profile/07961961217418715354noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8048731130587777458.post-30064543500342610322014-03-26T11:59:37.978+05:302014-03-26T11:59:37.978+05:30This is a lovely piece… if we closely observe the ...This is a lovely piece… if we closely observe the happenings at a beach or park or any such area I m sure we can easily stumble up on such incidents… you have a vivid picture of the same heredeepshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15296902414799985603noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8048731130587777458.post-69457176188136096802014-03-25T15:11:05.881+05:302014-03-25T15:11:05.881+05:30This is an evil end sir... truly evil.
This is an evil end sir... truly evil.<br /><br />maheshhttp://www.teerthadanam.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8048731130587777458.post-58962923889143806922014-03-25T14:57:03.893+05:302014-03-25T14:57:03.893+05:30That's a very interesting end to this eerily n...That's a very interesting end to this eerily nice story!Divoohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18028749311499807860noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8048731130587777458.post-89086183880284928892014-03-25T10:51:21.233+05:302014-03-25T10:51:21.233+05:30eeerie... :) but nice. Lovely narration.eeerie... :) but nice. Lovely narration.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8048731130587777458.post-81766773921076826462014-03-24T22:47:23.111+05:302014-03-24T22:47:23.111+05:30Really interesting Partha,though scared to read ab...Really interesting Partha,though scared to read about the end. Brilliant thought.rudraprayagahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13775039913655864157noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8048731130587777458.post-51612706414161169622014-03-24T14:23:41.444+05:302014-03-24T14:23:41.444+05:30OMG..such stories make me feel like meeting one su...OMG..such stories make me feel like meeting one such man..I have heard about people predicting many things and being true, but nevr seen any good astrologer even:(Renuhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18052079745061422542noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8048731130587777458.post-2672373792155287252014-03-24T11:57:40.481+05:302014-03-24T11:57:40.481+05:30The last line gave me a jolt!
Interesting story!The last line gave me a jolt!<br />Interesting story!Red Handedhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17062645716811851771noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8048731130587777458.post-56923901297066566272014-03-24T11:31:36.780+05:302014-03-24T11:31:36.780+05:30That's a fab story, well narrated!! It is scar...That's a fab story, well narrated!! It is scary to have such powers... more like a bane rather than a boon!Shilpa Garghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11016927627801620377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8048731130587777458.post-65338064548043616732014-03-24T10:44:21.940+05:302014-03-24T10:44:21.940+05:30Nice twist , very interesting story. very well wri...Nice twist , very interesting story. very well written.Indira Mukhopadhyayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10120466090249508159noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8048731130587777458.post-34121761911999136582014-03-24T10:42:56.462+05:302014-03-24T10:42:56.462+05:30Nice but sad twist. A very interesting read.Nice but sad twist. A very interesting read.Indira Mukhopadhyayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10120466090249508159noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8048731130587777458.post-37625033036290897522014-03-24T09:58:18.536+05:302014-03-24T09:58:18.536+05:30Bone chilling premonition. Enjoyed reading this on...Bone chilling premonition. Enjoyed reading this one.Alka Gurhahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12050387590729571321noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8048731130587777458.post-140350171462165192014-03-24T07:46:06.464+05:302014-03-24T07:46:06.464+05:30Nice story KP! Clairvoyance and destiny were runni...Nice story KP! Clairvoyance and destiny were running on parallel tracks, such power I think is more like a curse. Life when it takes its path without futuristic predictions is carefree. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8048731130587777458.post-1317237785523268412014-03-24T07:40:47.405+05:302014-03-24T07:40:47.405+05:30
Clairvoyance and destiny were working in their ow...<br />Clairvoyance and destiny were working in their own ways. What a curse to have such power. Nice story KP. Best,<br />AparnaAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17217678484433768485noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8048731130587777458.post-4929549526291053642014-03-24T07:40:26.772+05:302014-03-24T07:40:26.772+05:30
Clairvoyance and destiny were working in their ow...<br />Clairvoyance and destiny were working in their own ways. What a curse to have such power. Nice story KP. Best,<br />AparnaAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17217678484433768485noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8048731130587777458.post-59522363724450579012014-03-23T17:58:27.756+05:302014-03-23T17:58:27.756+05:30Your storytelling skill soared as high as it could...Your storytelling skill soared as high as it could, brilliantly woven!<br />My friend had a similar power and when she looked at old people, their death followed.So she hated the power.padmajahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18297562916603110230noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8048731130587777458.post-16390156645121603372014-03-23T17:15:58.670+05:302014-03-23T17:15:58.670+05:30Very very interesting story...the twist was a surp...Very very interesting story...the twist was a surprise for me. Sandhyahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06478831923010850316noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8048731130587777458.post-77029063140759394552014-03-23T15:08:56.937+05:302014-03-23T15:08:56.937+05:30This is an excellent story - it had me hooked unti...This is an excellent story - it had me hooked until the end. Though I could sort of guess the end (as it came), the rest of the story was very good. <br /><br />Destination InfinityDestination Infinityhttp://www.destinationinfinity.orgnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8048731130587777458.post-54761885532306507202014-03-23T13:45:30.039+05:302014-03-23T13:45:30.039+05:30Looking intently will tell only when the person se...Looking intently will tell only when the person seen is to die within a day or two.Looking in the eyes will not bring death.The protagonist wanted the power to be taken back and the ochre clad man said there was no need as evidently he had looked into the eyes of protagonist and knew his end was very near.KParthasarathihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02189924874350906456noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8048731130587777458.post-41684294336794637242014-03-23T13:35:32.786+05:302014-03-23T13:35:32.786+05:30Scary KP. The person shd hv looked into the eyes ...Scary KP. The person shd hv looked into the eyes of the kurta clad person! Would it work if lthe man looked at his own eyes intently? Master story trllef KP!L KRUPAAhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05444862052732342641noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8048731130587777458.post-20927541501614995212014-03-23T10:54:11.705+05:302014-03-23T10:54:11.705+05:30This is really eerie.... Loved the way the story f...This is really eerie.... Loved the way the story flowed..... Actually I'm amazed at the way you spin stories out of very simple topics.....and entertain us all the same !Sreeja Praveenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09880818733065823251noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8048731130587777458.post-57728793750330892842014-03-23T10:32:36.634+05:302014-03-23T10:32:36.634+05:30Very nice story. Loved the ending. The man in the ...Very nice story. Loved the ending. The man in the ochre robe's intent look says it all. After all he is the original owner of the power. I just wish you had mentioned how much more time this man had, not that he could have done anything. The man said he will not be bothered by the power any more. So does that mean his end was immediate and not in a few days or hours? Eerie!Vidyanoreply@blogger.com