Friday, October 25, 2024

Kavya's Engagement (778 words)

( If this  makes you  smile at the end, please comment with your name)
Kavya was reading the novel's last few pages and hoped to complete it before the train reached her destination. She had an unusual feeling of being stared at by someone and looked up to find a gorgeous guy looking at her intently standing slightly away. She lowered her eyes only to look up after a few seconds to find a guy gazing at her continuously. Though annoying initially, it gave a pleasant feel. After a couple of times, he smiled at her. She now became upset and did not turn to his side. When a lady in the opposite seat stood up to get down at the approaching station, he jumped with alacrity to occupy the vacated seat. Though she relished his proximity, she kept looking at the book's pages though her mind was full of him.

Whether by design or carelessness, the book fell from her hands only to be retrieved instantly by the alert guy and handed over to her with a slight bow. She said thanks and this opened the floodgate for small conversation till the end of the journey. It seemed they travelled by the same train and compartment daily culminating in mutual love. They met on weekends, saw movies, ate at good restaurants and spent time in parks or malls. She had revealed to Sunil that she was a junior officer in a bank living with her parents and brothers.

“What do you do for a living? You have never mentioned where you work?” she asked one day

“Will tell you in due time. There is no secrecy as such but would prefer to tell you when an occasion arises. Do not worry. I am well employed,” Sunil replied

“I think I can make a good guess. Some intelligence or secret service in the government, it must be. You look an attractive mix of Pierce Brosnan and Sean Connery” she said with a smile.

She tried in vain several times to ferret out the information, till one day she threatened her parents would not agree to her marrying someone whose job was a mystery. He then agreed to reveal his profession on any day suitable at her home when her parents were there. It was agreed to meet the next Sunday.

Sunil was at her place sharp at 4 pm. After introductions with parents and siblings were over, he wished to spend some time with her before the formal revelation. “Why do you make such a big drama as if you are a top functionary of a UN organization?” she asked him when they were alone in her room

“True I like to dramatize. I am thirsty having come in the hot sun. You haven’t offered me even a glass of coke” he said

“Oh, oh I am so sorry,” she said as she hurriedly brought him some cool drink in a tall glass.

A few minutes after gulping it, he jumped and asked “What have you given me? My whole body is shivering unbearably. Can you get me a big bed sheet without fuss?

When she handed over the bed sheet, he covered himself and was seen shaking all over. He soon covered himself head to foot much to the bewilderment of Kavya. She asked him “Are you feeling better, at least a little? Should I call a doctor?”.

To her horror, she saw the bed sheet crumple on the sofa. She lifted it to see him totally vanish before her eyes. In fear, she let out a scream and her parents and brothers rushed to her side.

” What happened? Where is he?” they asked in unison. One of the brothers looked under the bed, behind the curtain. They stood totally perplexed when Sunil entered through the door with loud laughter. Kavya screamed again and this time in delight.

“Can you now guess my profession?” he asked her.

“Not a magician. I am not going to marry a magician, however, great he may be” she said

“Sure you don’t have to for I am as you correctly guessed a secret service officer with magic as my pet hobby.” 

He turned to her father, showed his identity card and said “If you all agree, I would like to put a ring now on her finger”

He showed his bare hands, clapped twice, twiddled his fingers and contrived to get a diamond ring out of thin air before putting it on her finger with a flourish to the glee of all.

Kavya examined the ring suspiciously and pinched him hard and as he screamed in pain, she said ”Just wanted to make sure whether you are real” followed by loud laughter from everyone.

 


19 comments:

  1. Entirely different type of story, though interesting! Your narration makes the stories unique! Enjoyed!...Sandhya

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  2. Little different but quite interesting

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  3. A good imagination is reflected well in this story. Nice

    Chitra

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  4. Very good. Interesting. Ramakrishnan.a.

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    1. The story surely did make me smile. Loved your imagination and the narration. Fortunately, Kavya's family were amenable to Sunil's antics.

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  5. Not everyone has such a sense of humour. While not all individuals might find our hero’s antics funny, I hope Kavya has a sophisticated sense of humour !

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  6. Good one. I was expecting it to end with him being shown as a scoundrel. Good that he was not :)) --thangam

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  7. Great narration and sense of humour, coated with mystery made an interesting reading. Your stories are always unique and positive in nature,

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  8. Big BS. No girls will go out with a guy who will not what work he does. This happens only in your stories. I have a few friends, both in India and in USA, and they always say they "work for the Government" the first time they meet.

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    1. The pick up line by guys in North india who do nothing for a living is... I work in logistics... God alone knows logistics for who or what... Could be swiggy delivery boys for all one knows🤣

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  9. A romantic story, generouly sprinkled with magical humour, narrated delightfully.

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  10. KP Sir is as imaginative as our hero! He has a habit of adding pleasant twists to each of his stories. Where do you find such dashing youngsters in India ??

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  11. While reading it feels that you are witnessing every situation just in front of you. Grossly involving the reader. Knitting stories with many designs is the hallmark of Sir KP. 💐💐P K Ramachandran

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  12. Light,Humour and a twist as secret officer with magic as passion.Blended Well

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  13. Loved the story. Creativity at its best. Still wondering why he was so hesitant to reveal his profession. From start to end, made the story interesting to read. Keep rocking and we shall keep reading.

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  14. Good story. But could imagine where it was going.Yea, Good for Rajan.
    - Meka.

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  15. Nice. Love the narration. :)

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  16. Yes, at the end of the story one is bound to laugh. Atn Biswas 😄😄

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