Though it was only 2 p.m., the
thick canopy of trees made it seem as if dusk had already fallen. He heard
unusual and strange noises and was afraid of lurking reptiles. He got scared
and started praying under his breath even as he kept moving into the maze searching
for a clearing through which sunlight could enter.
Suddenly, as something soft and cool slightly brushed on his cheek,
he jumped away, startled that it could be a python from the overhead branch. He
could see nothing and moved away quickly.
After wandering aimlessly for a long time, he was relieved when he
saw a little yonder, a small bright patch. When he went near, he found to his
great relief and glee an old man of indeterminate age sitting under a tree with
his legs crossed in Padmasana. He had a flowing white beard and his eyes
were closed obviously in meditation.
Raju sat quietly before him waiting for him to open his eyes. Raju
was afraid to disturb him lest he get angry and refused to help him find
his way out. Minutes clicked past and it was almost an hour and he was still
sitting before him. Meanwhile, the weird noises around him grew shriller, more
unsettling. As a fly sat on the edge of his nostril, he could not stifle the
loud sneeze despite his best effort. The old man opened his eyes and
surprisingly smiled at him.
In a soft voice, that was a whisper, he asked “Son, what are you doing
in this dense forest? It is risky to be here with wild animals roaming about.”
He prostrated before him and said “Swami, I lost my way here and could
not find my friends with whom I came. I am afraid I have strayed deep inside
the jungle. Can you please help me get out of the forest?”
“I have not seen a human for several years ever since I came into the
forest as a young boy in search of meaning of life. I am not normally visible
to others eyes. Luckily you could see me. I am pleased with you. Ask me
three wishes. They would be fulfilled immediately.’
“My first wish is to be out of this jungle,” he said
” It will be done immediately after you express your other two wishes,”
said the sage-like person
“Swami, I love Swarna, my colleague, very much but she is not
reciprocating. Can you make her fall in love with me, please?” asked Raju with
much hope.
The sage nodded. “What is your third wish? Tell me quickly for I will
become invisible soon.”
“Swami, I cannot believe my luck. Am I dreaming from my sleep’ Raju asked
in utter disbelief.
Just then he heard his mother waking him up shouting “Raju, you said
you had an interview today. It is getting late. Get up, it is already 8 am”
Did Swarna reciprocate his love? I am not aware. What is your guess?
Good one. Thank you for sharing.
ReplyDeleteEnjoyed reading it.
Best wishes and warm regards
Hemantha Kumar Pamarthy
If he gets that job , maybe, there is a chance. Ha ha ha ha
ReplyDeleteChitra
When the first and the third wishes were fulfilled, it would be very disappointing for not only Raju but the readers as well, if the second one doesn't!
ReplyDeleteSwarna will not reciprocate. First saying NO and then saying YES to fall in love happens only in movies.
ReplyDeleteRama Sampath Kumar: Could not guess it was a dream till the end.. was gripping .. and they say early morning dreams mostly come true. By this logic his sweetheart would probably reciprocate and like a fairy tale , it would be : “ They lived happily ever after.”
ReplyDeleteGood one, enjoyed reading it. Dreams unlimited. Swarna is in Raju s sub conscious, so he should get her.
ReplyDeleteGood story
ReplyDeleteNice one! The forest Raju had lost himself in was actually the maze of love. The exit he was looking for was the reciprocal love of Swarna. The dream symbolised the confusion in Raju's mind.
ReplyDeleteHe will come out of the forest, marry the girl he loves and be happy forever...The sage seem to be a real one....Sandhya
ReplyDeleteGood one.very nice.ramakrishn.a.
ReplyDeleteHope Swarna to reciprocate positively, and let the early morning dream come true, as our belief system says so.
ReplyDeleteGood read :)
ReplyDeleteThough the meeting with Swami was in the dream, as two of the wishes were fulfilled, I believe the third wish also will be fulfilled and Swarna will reciprocate positively
ReplyDeleteLovely one, when sweet dreams end and quiet desperation begins. (JJ)
ReplyDeleteGood story πππ»π
ReplyDeleteLovely one visualizing the lovely forest and trees. Feels like we are in the story. Nice one. Till I came to the dream part thought it was real. You have an art of making it seem that it is really real
ReplyDeleteWhat a teaser to end the dream story with a question to us readers! More than any of us, Raju himself would only mutter "if beggars were choosers.."
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