Despite being only ten years old, Atul was a precocious boy and was
fully aware that his mother viewed the old man as a burden imposed on her. She
despised him and often insulted him for whatever he did or didn’t do. His father remained indifferent and never
confronted Atul’s mother about her rude behaviour. This attitude saddened Atul.
He was not aware that this passive role of his dad stemmed from his preference
not to upset his wife further in the absence of other options.
Atul’s favourite activity was taking strolls in the park opposite their
house with Dadaji. The old man would entertain him with stories from his
younger days and often advised him to be truthful, no matter the consequences.
Atul, curious and thoughtful, would sometimes challenge him by asking,
"What if telling the truth harms an innocent person? Would you still tell
it ?"
Dadaji would smile proudly and say, "The truth should always be
spoken when it serves a good purpose." He never complained about anyone
even after hurtful insults though Atul cringed at his mom’s petulance.
Lately, though, Dadaji had been saying something that made Atul uneasy:
“I’m biding my time. I feel it will happen soon. Promise me, no matter what,
that you will take care of your parents with love and care, and never make them
feel unhappy.”
“Dadaji, I know you’re unhappy sometimes. I am too when Mom shouts at
you. I hate her for it,” Atul would reply, his voice full of frustration.
Dadaji would gently admonish him, “You must never talk like that. I’m
disappointed with you. Never speak ill of others, no matter what they do or
say.”
Atul was often scolded by his mother for spending too much time with
his grandfather and she frequently complained about it to his father. No one in
the house spoke to Dadaji. Atul’s father, who returned late from work, would
spend time with his mother in front of the TV. Dadaji’s room was at the rear of
the house, far from the rest of the family. Occasionally, his father would
visit him, only to loudly remind him to "adjust to the ways of the
house" and "not be a nuisance," though he never clarified what he
meant. Atul, perceptive as he was, understood that his father said these things
only to appease his mother.
Atul also knew his mother diluted Dadaji’s coffee with water and often
gave him leftover or cold food. She made him eat alone at the dining table,
much before the family sat down together for dinner. After his early lunch at
11 a.m., Dadaji had nothing to eat until 7 p.m. except for a cup of tea and a
few biscuits at 4 p.m. Atul knew his grandfather was often hungry and would
sneak cookies from the kitchen after school to share with Dada ji.
Dadaji had a sweet tooth, but
his mother rarely gave him any sweets, even though Atul’s father regularly
brought home sweet packets. She would keep them in the fridge for days, only to
give them away to the maid later. One afternoon, while Atul’s mother was out,
leaving him and his grandfather alone at home, Atul became engrossed in a
computer game and forgot about the time.
When he finally went downstairs at 4:30 p.m., he found Dadaji in the
kitchen, opening a box of pedas he had taken from the fridge. Atul
smiled and said, “Dadaji, you could’ve called me. Never mind, I’m hungry too.
Let’s eat together.” They finished all five pedas in the box.
Around 7 p.m., Atul heard his mother shouting at the top of her voice.
“Nothing is safe in this house! How can I lock the fridge every time I go out?”
She called out, “Atul, did you eat all the pedas from the full
box I kept in the fridge? I was going to send them to my mother! It’s missing.
I’m sure you wouldn’t touch it, so who else could have stolen it except the
ever-hungry glutton in this miserable house?”
Atul, angry, shouted back, “Don’t accuse without knowing! I was hungry,
and I checked the fridge. There were only five pedas, not a whole box as
you’re saying. I ate them and shared them with Dadaji. What’s wrong with that?
You can call me a hungry glutton or whatever you like, but Dadaji hadn’t even
had his tea by then. It was 5 p.m.! I hate how you’re always shouting at him. I
don’t want to live in this house anymore.”
Dadaji, who had heard everything from his room, felt tears trickle down
his cheeks. His grandson had taken the blame to shield him from his mother’s
wrath. A little while later, Atul entered his room and said, “Dadaji, I wasn’t
truthful, but it was for a good reason.”
The old man hugged him tightly and kissed his forehead. “Come to see me
first thing in the morning, before anyone else comes to my room. Do you
understand, my little buddy?” The boy laughed and ran off.
The next morning, Atul woke up earlier than usual and remembered
Dadaji’s request. He rushed to his side, only to find him sleeping unusually
late. Gently nudging him, first softly and then harder, Atul quickly realized
that Dadaji’s time had come, and he had finally found the peace he had longed
for.
He could hardly suppress a mournful groan when he saw a small book of
quotations lying by his side with a tag scrawled ‘To Dear Atul' in Dada Ji's hand.
Atul’s mother could have found a calmer way to show her care and affection for the family. The bond shared between Atul and his Dadaji is beautiful Nice
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A touching story. We should treat people like how we would like to be treated. Atul is kind hearted unlike his parents.
ReplyDeleteThat small book is perhaps Thirukural?
ReplyDeleteVery nice interesting story.ramakrishnan.a.
ReplyDeleteWhy is the villain always the mother in law or daughter in law? I guess the upfront villan is the DiL but the real villan is Atul's father for not having a spine
ReplyDeleteChildren are more perceptive than we often give them credit for, and are never two-faced with their emotions. Nice story, predictable end
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ReplyDeleteOlder adults have unpleasant experiences as they not only
have to deal with change in their living environment but also
have to get used to changes in daily life routines. They feel the loss of family and a sense of loneliness due to the loss of social interactions.
They also feel a sense of powerlessness and their perceptions and fears had adverse effects on their mental and well physical health. This phenomenon is brought out nicely in the story.
Touching story of true affection between Dadaji and his grandson. Dadaji’s tolerance and forgiveness of abusive behavior is from a bygone era it would seem. (JJ)
ReplyDeleteThe story, so complete in all respects, that it is pointless to broach any specific aspects in it.
ReplyDeleteThe small boy Atul has got more sense in him than his mother. The son, Atul's father should have kept an eye and check home often. Whatever it is, the old man is his father. He can get some eats for the old man ... Anyway, this is happening in many houses. ....Sandhya
ReplyDeleteSo touching and beautifully written with a poignant ending. Your story reminds us that love, compassion, and truth, even in difficult circumstances, can leave a lasting impact.
ReplyDeleteBrought tears while reading… we see this happening around us. and wonder how some women could be so heartless: we are known for our nurturing inborn instincts. When I see so many aged men and women in homes for the destitute it hurts. Most of them are not from poor and underprivileged families but abandoned from normal upper-middle-class homes. As you sow so you reap, they say
ReplyDeleteA good read :)
ReplyDeleteKP sir! your short stories are great character studies !
ReplyDeleteA very touching story indeed! This situation is so very common in India and perhaps many other countries of the world. Unfortunately, most of the elderly people are dependent on their children at their old age having spent their active years to bring up the children and hardly left with any choice to live with their children despite all the insults!!
ReplyDeleteFew parents are, however, fortunate to having loving children who are taking care of their old parents with care and love.
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ReplyDeleteThe oldest and the youngest always connect easily. Understand each other easily. Nice story establishing the bonding of these two people. PKR
ReplyDeleteThere is always a lovely chemistry between grandparents and grandchildren, this story bringing out one such matvellous bonding. I also see a marked change in the characters' names, the move from South to North:)
ReplyDeleteWhy can we not treat others the way we would like to be treated? Sad to see the behaviour of the parents? Atul understands and has taken the best route. We do not understand that our actions not only affect the children but mentally we will become unstable too with this kind of behaviour. Loved thd story but it is sad. Would have loved an ending where the mother understood her behaviour and changed ways.
ReplyDeleteOld age is scary! But times are changing. We're learning to cope with this period of our lives alone! A lovely "अतुल" story!
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