Monday, October 14, 2024

Atul's Tryst with Truth (982 words)

 

Atul loved his Dada ji(grandfather) with all his heart. He cherished every moment spent with him, listening to his stories and conversations. The old man, well into his eighties, adored his grandson. Though the old man had three sons and two daughters, he stayed with Atul’s father the eldest with his other siblings living abroad.

Despite being only ten years old, Atul was a precocious boy and was fully aware that his mother viewed the old man as a burden imposed on her. She despised him and often insulted him for whatever he did or didn’t do.  His father remained indifferent and never confronted Atul’s mother about her rude behaviour. This attitude saddened Atul. He was not aware that this passive role of his dad stemmed from his preference not to upset his wife further in the absence of other options.

Atul’s favourite activity was taking strolls in the park opposite their house with Dadaji. The old man would entertain him with stories from his younger days and often advised him to be truthful, no matter the consequences. Atul, curious and thoughtful, would sometimes challenge him by asking, "What if telling the truth harms an innocent person? Would you still tell it ?"

Dadaji would smile proudly and say, "The truth should always be spoken when it serves a good purpose." He never complained about anyone even after hurtful insults though Atul cringed at his mom’s petulance.

Lately, though, Dadaji had been saying something that made Atul uneasy: “I’m biding my time. I feel it will happen soon. Promise me, no matter what, that you will take care of your parents with love and care, and never make them feel unhappy.”

“Dadaji, I know you’re unhappy sometimes. I am too when Mom shouts at you. I hate her for it,” Atul would reply, his voice full of frustration.

Dadaji would gently admonish him, “You must never talk like that. I’m disappointed with you. Never speak ill of others, no matter what they do or say.”

Atul was often scolded by his mother for spending too much time with his grandfather and she frequently complained about it to his father. No one in the house spoke to Dadaji. Atul’s father, who returned late from work, would spend time with his mother in front of the TV. Dadaji’s room was at the rear of the house, far from the rest of the family. Occasionally, his father would visit him, only to loudly remind him to "adjust to the ways of the house" and "not be a nuisance," though he never clarified what he meant. Atul, perceptive as he was, understood that his father said these things only to appease his mother.

Atul also knew his mother diluted Dadaji’s coffee with water and often gave him leftover or cold food. She made him eat alone at the dining table, much before the family sat down together for dinner. After his early lunch at 11 a.m., Dadaji had nothing to eat until 7 p.m. except for a cup of tea and a few biscuits at 4 p.m. Atul knew his grandfather was often hungry and would sneak cookies from the kitchen after school to share with Dada ji.

 Dadaji had a sweet tooth, but his mother rarely gave him any sweets, even though Atul’s father regularly brought home sweet packets. She would keep them in the fridge for days, only to give them away to the maid later. One afternoon, while Atul’s mother was out, leaving him and his grandfather alone at home, Atul became engrossed in a computer game and forgot about the time.

When he finally went downstairs at 4:30 p.m., he found Dadaji in the kitchen, opening a box of pedas he had taken from the fridge. Atul smiled and said, “Dadaji, you could’ve called me. Never mind, I’m hungry too. Let’s eat together.” They finished all five pedas in the box.

Around 7 p.m., Atul heard his mother shouting at the top of her voice. “Nothing is safe in this house! How can I lock the fridge every time I go out?”

She called out, “Atul, did you eat all the pedas from the full box I kept in the fridge? I was going to send them to my mother! It’s missing. I’m sure you wouldn’t touch it, so who else could have stolen it except the ever-hungry glutton in this miserable house?”

Atul, angry, shouted back, “Don’t accuse without knowing! I was hungry, and I checked the fridge. There were only five pedas, not a whole box as you’re saying. I ate them and shared them with Dadaji. What’s wrong with that? You can call me a hungry glutton or whatever you like, but Dadaji hadn’t even had his tea by then. It was 5 p.m.! I hate how you’re always shouting at him. I don’t want to live in this house anymore.”

Dadaji, who had heard everything from his room, felt tears trickle down his cheeks. His grandson had taken the blame to shield him from his mother’s wrath. A little while later, Atul entered his room and said, “Dadaji, I wasn’t truthful, but it was for a good reason.”

The old man hugged him tightly and kissed his forehead. “Come to see me first thing in the morning, before anyone else comes to my room. Do you understand, my little buddy?” The boy laughed and ran off.

The next morning, Atul woke up earlier than usual and remembered Dadaji’s request. He rushed to his side, only to find him sleeping unusually late. Gently nudging him, first softly and then harder, Atul quickly realized that Dadaji’s time had come, and he had finally found the peace he had longed for.

He could hardly suppress a mournful groan when he saw a small book of quotations lying by his side with a tag scrawled To Dear Atul'  in Dada Ji's hand.


20 comments:

  1. Atul’s mother could have found a calmer way to show her care and affection for the family. The bond shared between Atul and his Dadaji is beautiful Nice

    Chitra

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  2. A touching story. We should treat people like how we would like to be treated. Atul is kind hearted unlike his parents.

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  3. That small book is perhaps Thirukural?

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  4. Very nice interesting story.ramakrishnan.a.

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  5. Why is the villain always the mother in law or daughter in law? I guess the upfront villan is the DiL but the real villan is Atul's father for not having a spine

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  6. Children are more perceptive than we often give them credit for, and are never two-faced with their emotions. Nice story, predictable end

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  7. Older adults have unpleasant experiences as they not only
    have to deal with change in their living environment but also
    have to get used to changes in daily life routines. They feel the loss of family and a sense of loneliness due to the loss of social interactions.
    They also feel a sense of powerlessness and their perceptions and fears had adverse effects on their mental and well physical health. This phenomenon is brought out nicely in the story.


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  8. Touching story of true affection between Dadaji and his grandson. Dadaji’s tolerance and forgiveness of abusive behavior is from a bygone era it would seem. (JJ)

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  9. The story, so complete in all respects, that it is pointless to broach any specific aspects in it.

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  10. The small boy Atul has got more sense in him than his mother. The son, Atul's father should have kept an eye and check home often. Whatever it is, the old man is his father. He can get some eats for the old man ... Anyway, this is happening in many houses. ....Sandhya

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  11. So touching and beautifully written with a poignant ending. Your story reminds us that love, compassion, and truth, even in difficult circumstances, can leave a lasting impact.

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  12. Brought tears while reading… we see this happening around us. and wonder how some women could be so heartless: we are known for our nurturing inborn instincts. When I see so many aged men and women in homes for the destitute it hurts. Most of them are not from poor and underprivileged families but abandoned from normal ​upper-middle-class homes.​ As you sow so you reap, they say

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  13. KP sir! your short stories are great character studies !

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  14. A very touching story indeed! This situation is so very common in India and perhaps many other countries of the world. Unfortunately, most of the elderly people are dependent on their children at their old age having spent their active years to bring up the children and hardly left with any choice to live with their children despite all the insults!!
    Few parents are, however, fortunate to having loving children who are taking care of their old parents with care and love.

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  15. The oldest and the youngest always connect easily. Understand each other easily. Nice story establishing the bonding of these two people. PKR

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  16. There is always a lovely chemistry between grandparents and grandchildren, this story bringing out one such matvellous bonding. I also see a marked change in the characters' names, the move from South to North:)

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  17. Why can we not treat others the way we would like to be treated? Sad to see the behaviour of the parents? Atul understands and has taken the best route. We do not understand that our actions not only affect the children but mentally we will become unstable too with this kind of behaviour. Loved thd story but it is sad. Would have loved an ending where the mother understood her behaviour and changed ways.

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  18. Old age is scary! But times are changing. We're learning to cope with this period of our lives alone! A lovely "अतुल" story!

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