Saturday, October 12, 2024

Madhavan and the mysterious ghost (725 words)

 Madhavan Namboodiri, a man in his early forties, was steeped in religious devotion and spiritual practices, his unwavering faith centred on Guruvayurappan. His bachelorhood, a quiet act of defiance, troubled his aged mother and sister with whom he lived. Yet, Madhavan found solace in his rituals, remaining undeterred by societal expectations.

For years, he worked as a government clerk in Kerala, his life following a predictable, serene path. But when a sudden departmental reorganization led to his transfer to a remote town in Chhattisgarh, Madhavan accepted his fate without protest. With a small box, bedding, and a shoulder bag as his only possessions, he arrived at the desolate station early one morning, where a colleague named Mohanty waited to receive him.

Mohanty presented him with two housing options: one nestled in the bustling bazaar area, surrounded by people and noise, and the other—an independent but dilapidated house—secluded and quiet, closer to a temple.

"I'll take the second one," Madhavan declared. "I need peace for my prayers, and the proximity to the temple suits me well. Besides, I cook my own food."

Mohanty hesitated, his face tightening with concern. "I’d suggest the house near the bazaar," he said cautiously. "This other one, well, it’s... isolated. Not to mention, you’re new to the area and don’t know the local language well. There’s safety in numbers."

Madhavan raised an eyebrow. "What’s the real issue, Mohanty? Why is the rent so low despite it being an independent house?"

Mohanty leaned in, lowering his voice to a whisper. "The house is said to be haunted. No one’s lived there in years. People say a ghost roams the place at night."

Madhavan chuckled softly. "I’ve no fear of ghosts, my friend. If they exist, they’re no match for my faith."

Despite Mohanty’s pleas, Madhavan moved in, his mind untroubled by the supernatural warnings. The house, though worn by time and neglect, was cleaned up, and by evening, Madhavan had lit a lamp before the image of Guruvayurappan. The first night passed in peaceful silence, much to Mohanty’s relief.

But the peace was short-lived.

On the second night, after his usual prayers and recitation of the Sri Vishnu Sahasranamam, Madhavan woke abruptly at midnight, a strange heaviness pressing down on his chest. He sat up, gasping, and drank water, trying to shake off the oppressive feeling. When he lay down again, the sensation returned—this time stronger, as though an invisible weight bore down on him, suffocating him. He could feel a presence, unseen but undeniable.

Refusing to be cowed, Madhavan sat up and resumed reciting the sacred verses. Instantly, the heaviness lifted, and the room felt lighter. He continued praying until 2 AM before finally drifting into an uneasy sleep.

For the next few nights, the haunting repeated itself, till he commenced reciting Sahasranama though after 2 AM it did not trouble him. Each time, the presence grew more menacing, the weight on his chest heavier. Yet Madhavan’s resolve did not waver. He prayed with greater fervour, hoping to banish the sinister force plaguing him.

On the seventh night, however, the air in the house felt different. As he lay down after 2 AM after his prayers, the oppressive force unusually returned with a vengeance, nearly crushing him under its invisible weight. He could barely breathe, let alone sit up. Desperate, he cried out, “Oh Guruvayurappa! Why this trial? Please, save me!”

Suddenly, the pressure lifted. In the dim light, he saw it—a pale figure standing by the door, beckoning him with an unearthly but an elegant hand. It gestured urgently as if commanding him to follow.

Madhavan, murmuring "Narayana, Narayana" under his breath, got to his feet and followed the spectre outside. The figure glided through the night, leading him away from the house. And then, without clue, it vanished.

A deafening rumble erupted behind him. Madhavan spun around, his heart pounding. The house collapsed into rubble as if struck by an unseen force.

He stood frozen, unable to comprehend the horror he had just witnessed. What had saved him? Was the ghostly figure the same entity that had tormented him nightly, now turned saviour? Or had it been a divine messenger, sent by Guruvayurappan himself to answer his prayers?

Madhavan had no answers. But one thing was certain—he was ready to move near the bazaar.

 

 

22 comments:

  1. Interesting story. If he was a divine messenger by Lord Guruvayoorappan, he would not have troubled him the previous 7 days.

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  2. Gripping story. All the troubles made during night was only to move him out of the house. Since Madhavan was not ready Guruvayoorappan had to push him out and hence the extreme step. Timing of the story to me is that I’m on my way to Guruvayoor for a few days stay and Darshan of Guruvayoorappan. PKR

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  3. Rama Sampath Kumar : Ghost or Divine Power or intuition or imagination: left to the reader to decide. Nice story but wish this time around we were told by the author what he had in mind.

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  4. The stories of miracles associated with Guruvayoorappan inspire us. It emphasize love, compassion, and devotion towards God, which have had a profound impact on the spiritual beliefs and practices. This story too, I believe can be classified to that category..

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  5. Nice story Sir. We cannot comprehend God's plans. We should only try to understand the signals sent by Him.

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  6. A nice story on the many wsys Gurvayoorappan fcan manifest and save his devotee. In my view ithe saviour is Krishna. He beckons his devotee at the right time Nd the the right moment. Good Madhvan ⁷for a longer period

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  7. A nice story on the many wsys Gurvayoorappan fcan manifest and save his devotee. In my view ithe savior is Krishna. He beckons his devotee at the right time and at the right moment. Good Madhavan realised what's good.

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  8. Interesting story.ramakrishnan.a.

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  9. Right on Halloween month. Spooky story. Nice

    Chitra

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  10. This was happening for so many years and now the house is gone...Guruvayurappan came to help him now....Interesting....Good that he has decided to move to the house near the bazaar......Sandhya

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  11. Faith can indeed bring in miracles. In fact, we have so many of them happening day in and day out in our daily lives, if only we could open our eyes and hearts to them. --Thangam

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  12. Almost till the end, the storyteller very dextrously building up the plot to an exciting climax was a touche! But the reader was then totally floored by the absoluely classic anticlimactic ending viz. Madhavan's readiness to move near the bazaar!

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  13. No alternative as the house had collapsed

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  14. Logically, mold in old buildings can trigger an allergic reaction in the lungs, causing symptoms like chest tightness, and shortness of breath. But, KP Sir, you have, time and again, made us look for more than is obvious!!

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  15. I would like to know author’s line of thinking about the first few days’ incidents- something different? Evil? Faith has been proved to work yet again!

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  16. Fantastic ending - left open to interpretation - If God exists - then the Devil too must exist. Regards - Mahesh

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  17. Fine plot, even better writing! (JJ)

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  18. Wow! Gave me the chills. Out of words to describe :)

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  19. Looks like the battle between the asuras and devas saved Madhavan from the perils of the dilapidated house collapse. Quite interesting given the fact that faith can indeed move mountains!

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  20. An interesting story indeed! The way the author built up the suspense is remarkable. Atin Biswas

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  21. Lovely story. We cannot comprehend Swami’s power but he does the best for us and we need to be in a state of acceptance. But he has given us the discrimination power to decide what is right and wrong for us. We have to use that power sensibly and then proceed towards our ultimate goal.

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