Vijay had lost his job in a travel
agency three months back and he was yet to get a new one. He had spent all his
meager savings and was practically starving. The rent for his room was in
arrears and he was afraid of a notice to vacate. The day time he roamed around
various offices seeking for any job. His evenings were spent in the local big temple
ostensibly to pray but actually hoping for some prasad that would fill his
stomach He got something or the other many days.
That day was a festival day and the
temple was heavily crowded. Nothing was available to eat and his stomach was
gnawing with hunger. He felt his pocket and he had just 10 rupees in coins but
he did not want to spend it. He went near the place where the coconuts were
broken to propitiate god. He was shy of competing with poor urchins in ragged
clothes to pick up the broken pieces. There was a virtual scramble but he was
content to pick whatever fell near his feet. When he got three big slices he
was relieved that the day’s dinner was taken care of. Someone had given him a
plantain.
As he was walking away from the crowd,
he saw a young girl of six from affluent family standing alone and crying. He went near her and
asked her “Why are you crying? Where are your parents?”
“They are lost and not seen. I want to
join them”
“Let us wait for some time. They may
come in search of you. Have this coconut piece.”
“No, I don’t want it. I am thirsty. Can
you get me that ice candy?”
He felt pity for that girl and
unhesitatingly parted with his last ten rupees and fetched her a candy.
As she was happily sucking it, Vijay
asked her whether she knew her house. She picked a slip of paper from her
pocket and gave him. The parents had the foresight to leave it there. The place
was just couple of kilometers away.
“Can I leave you in your house?” he asked.
She happily nodded
Vijay was afraid to take the young girl
with him what with news papers screaming daily of rapes of young kids. When he approached
an elderly auto driver, he looked askance at Vijay in his soiled and crumpled
dress with a well-to-do girl. Vijay understood his genuine suspicion and
explained the circumstances and his aversion to leave the child alone or with a
policeman especially when he had her address.
“Are you looking for a reward?”asked the
auto driver.
“Not at all. It is just compassion and
fear that girl may come to harm if she were to fall in ruthless hands.”
The auto driver agreed and within next
five minutes they were at her house. The door was opened by the girl’s grandmother.
Her parents were still trying to trace her. Vijay explained her how she found
her and the auto driver corroborated.
“Grandma, this uncle gave me candy” she
said with joy
This shocked the old lady and her
suspicions about his intention returned again.
Vijay saw the change in her expression
and said “The girl said she was very thirsty and I had only ten rupees and that
is all that I could buy”
The old lady took the addresses of both
Vijay and auto driver before they left
When Vijay came out of the house, he
took out his old watch from his wrist and said to the auto driver “This is all
I have. Please do not mind accepting it in lieu of fare”
The driver said “Hop in. I will drop at
your place. You don’t have to give me anything. I am proud of you”
As the auto reached Vijay’s place, the
driver thrust 100 rupees in his pocket and said as he sped away “Return it when
you can”
That was an absolute twist.. and it gave me goosebumps.. there are humane people out there and insensitive lots too..
ReplyDeleteWish the world was full of such good people, so we can start trust each other once again!
ReplyDeletevery nice .
ReplyDeleteSo, the grandmother is the villain, for not having given anything to him? :)
ReplyDeleteDestination Infinity
Yet a good one with a great moral. Thank god Vijay did not use the situation to his advantage. Hungry for more KP!
ReplyDeleteSome people are still there who can recognise good people! Well narrated story!
ReplyDeleteGood one! Not being able to predict the ending was fun!
ReplyDeleteIn spite of the common perception of many about the state of our world and the people in it right now, there are still wonderful compassionate souls out there shining with their light in their own quiet way. No matter the junk we pile into our hearts, beneath that trash lies the 'basic goodness of man'. God put it there.
ReplyDeleteBlessings!
Nice read on a rainy Tuesday morning. Hope is never away...
ReplyDeleteMay good people prevail all over.. :)
ReplyDeleteLovely story so nice of Vijay n auto driver :) Never seen a auto driver so kind n polite as in this story.
ReplyDeleteloved the twist at the end :)
ReplyDeleteGood people are there.. they are the ones responsible for making this word still a liveable place.
Loved the story KP. A very heartwarming one.
ReplyDeleteThere are good hearts all around us. Nice one KP Sir!
ReplyDeleteHello KP,
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Very nice story, loved reading it. You are sch a good writer.
ReplyDeleteKP, the autodriver is the hero of this piece. Vijay was only the side hero! But I hope he found a job! I felt sorry for him.
ReplyDeleteWhat a happy little story this one is! I wish we have more Vijays around us.
ReplyDeleteLovely story, KP!
ReplyDeleteA nice read!
ReplyDeleteNot one but two kind men!
ReplyDeleteA very nice story! Hope such people exist!
Nice story.Interesting.'Little act of kindness makes the earth an Eden'.
ReplyDeleteNice story, Periappa!
ReplyDeleteNice story, Periappa!
ReplyDeleteBlessings and Namaste
ReplyDeletenice message.....you can be down on your luck yet rich in compassion and heart.
well done my friend.
Stay blessed.
peace.
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Wonderful story.
ReplyDeleteVery beautifully written.
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