Rohit was tired after the long
journey from the Kashmir border to Srinagar and then to Delhi. He was still in
his informal fatigue and wished to catch some sleep before the train reached
Gwalior. Luckily he had the window seat to recline. There were still five
minutes for the train to start. He stretched his legs and closed his eyes.
“Excuse me. Let me keep my luggage
on the loft. These two seats next to you belong to us," an elderly but
short man said. His wife who was taller than him was standing beside him with
two heavy bags in her hand.
“Let me help you. Give me the boxes
and bags,” Rohit said
“Thanks a lot. It would have been
anyway difficult for me to reach the loft," he said with a giggle.”We are
going up to Bhopal. Are you also travelling to the same place?”
“No, I am travelling up to Gwalior.”
“You seem to be an army man from
your dress. My son is also in army in artillery somewhere in Kashmir. He should
have been here with us .We have finalized the marriage of his sister. We are going
there for that purpose. Other family members and relatives along with my
daughter have left by train earlier. My son had sent a message through someone that
he cannot come due to exigencies of work and asked us to go ahead with the
wedding." the old man spoke nonstop.
"I am sorry to hear that he
could not come. What is his name? Any idea where he is presently?"
"Sohan. Unlike me he is a tall
chap six foot with curly hair and sharp nose. I don't know the exact place.
Some place called Uri or some such name. Would you know him by any
chance?"
"Did you say Sohan...Sohan
Gupta? Does he have a black mole below his lip on the chin?"
"Yes, right you are..He has the mole and a
deep scar on his temple he sustained from injury while playing as a young boy.
Do you know him?"
Instead of replying Rohit turned his
head towards the window to see the station passing by as the train slowly
started moving. The elderly man was waiting eagerly for Rohit to turn back.
When he continued to look outside even after the station was left behind, the
man coughed gently to draw his attention.
As Rohit paid no heed, the man asked
him "You haven't replied whether you know my son. But you were right about
the mole on his chin. How is it he could not get leave when you have been
given?"
“I don't know him personally. I have
seen him in the mess a few times. That was a few months back. I got leave only
for a week as my dad is having heart surgery. Sorry, I am very sleepy as I
have been traveling," Rohit said and stretched himself on his seat
The man mumbled something to his
wife.
Rohit with his eyes closed was
recollecting his close friend Sohan telling him about two weeks back how eagerly he
was looking forward to attend his sister's marriage as his leave was
sanctioned. Thoughts about him and their friendship slowly waned as he dozed
off to sleep.
He woke up with a jerk when the man
next to him nudged him to inform that the train was entering Gwalior station
“Thanks uncle for waking me up. I
was very tired and fell asleep”
“I have one request. When you meet
Sohan next, please ask him to write to us. It is nearly a fortnight since we
got to hear from him. We are worried at his unusual silence. I am happy to have
met you. I shall pray for your dad’s well being,” the man said as he shook his
hands.
After getting down, Rohit lingered
by the door, where the elderly man stood, till the train slowly departed. Waving
his hand at the receding figure, Rohit stood still unable to control the tears
from his eyes. He had not the heart to tell Sohan’s parents, especially on the
eve of their daughter’s barat, that he
was the one who had sent the message about Sohan’s inability to come. How could
he tell them that their son was critically injured from a
terrorist attack two weeks back and that he is battling for his life? He could only pray for
a divine miracle.
An interesting story. One question: How can one know if his decision were right or wrong? Taking up the responsibility to not inform the family may seem to be the right thing to do.... but is it?
ReplyDeleteYou weave very interesting stories. Makes the reader think.
Interesting story. Very thoughtful of Rohit indeed but as Ellen says it sets you thinking.
ReplyDeleteThankfully the story did not end in a note that he was dead. It makes us hope that Sohan will still be able to come back to life after the medical treatment. I like that.
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I was imagining the worst, so glad to think that there is every chance that Sohan will come back healed, think positive! But not sure if the news was to be hidden from his father, he probably would have visited his son and that might have helped Sohan to recover. Your stories are getting more and more interesting!
ReplyDeleteSohan will come back definitely...so many of our soldiers have. Very good story, Partha Sir. I was a bit tensed up while reading the story. Thank god. He has got a chance.
ReplyDeleteI liked this story, specially the hopeful end.
ReplyDeleteSo poignant. Sometimes I wonder so many dreams and aspirations we weave, will we see it fructify....
ReplyDeleteAh...poor parents....
ReplyDeleteThis could actually be happening with so many people. fighting for the country.
A very poignant tale. Tough to interpret the soldier's emotions on facing the parents of his comrade!
ReplyDeleteLets pray that his prayers are heard...
ReplyDeleteThanks for writing about the unsung heroes GP :)
Nice story KP .... Glad to see positive note at the end.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful story, I really liked it.
ReplyDeleteVery beautifully written! Brilliant work!
ReplyDeleteHope the miracle happens, even if it is a story! Hi KP uncle.. been long time!! But i truly enjoy your comments at my blog.. :)
ReplyDeleteThroughout the story I guessed Soham is no more, However I was glad to Know he is alive at least.
ReplyDeleteIt aint jus Soham story, there are many such Soldiers in our army with the same story!
Very Nice Work Sir :)
Well penned Sir.
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Thank God Soham is alive ! There can be no worse tragedy for any parents than to hear about their offspring's death. The poignant truth looms large even though, Sir, you have not put it in writing !
ReplyDeletePoignant story. But I wish they had been told. At least they could be by his bed side.
ReplyDeleteOh! Hope there are many miracles as his father & friend both survive.
ReplyDeleteTouching story...
thank god Sohan is not dead.
ReplyDelete:)
Very touching.
ReplyDeleteBeautifully written. Very touching story.
ReplyDeleteThat's a very touching story! It is so tough to hide such news from the parents. Feeling sad for them.
ReplyDeleteOh@Really touching.Nice.
ReplyDeleteomg.. you write with so much depth. it catches all the emotions like I'm visualizing it.
ReplyDeletetouching story, liked the way it flowed out of a simple conversation b/w random passengers.
ReplyDeleteRohit is a good friend that is the reason why he did not tell Sohan's parents about his injury. Like his friend, he thought of the good of the family.
ReplyDeleteA moral dilemma, a friend's love and the decision to give the family the time to complete the wedding and then know the truth -- Rohit did have his mind full!
ReplyDeletewonderful post
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It is good that the post ended on a ray of hope...Sohan may get well...who knows?
ReplyDeleteGood that the story ends on a ray of hope. Sohan may get well, who knows?
ReplyDeleteThank God, he is only injured I was worried Sohan had died.
ReplyDeleteHey, I wonder why you haven't updated your story blog yet. Looking forward to your next story :)
ReplyDeleteLike Archana said, where is your next one?
ReplyDeleteHello Partha
ReplyDeleteIt's been a long time, you have not written any new story, eagerly waiting for a new one