It
was a small house situated at the end of the lane. I lived in the single room
on the terrace that I could access by a staircase built outside the house. A
spacious room well ventilated on three sides including a window that opened to
the terrace. My office was just 15 minutes away by bike. There was an Udupi
hotel at the end of the lane on the main road where I had my daily breakfast
and occasional dinner.
I am
happy here after a year of living in men’s hostel with smoke filled corridors,
long queues for the toilets, the noise till late night and the litter of
bottles and wrappers all around in the mornings. I liked the tranquil here, the
fresh air from the window adjacent to my bed and an exclusive bath and toilet
for me. There was one thing that embarrassed me.
Whenever
I tried to start my old motor bike in the mornings, it just refused to come
alive in sheer petulance. It needed repeated cajoling and hard kicks. I think I
saw every time someone partially hiding behind the window of the house watching
and smiling at my failures. Though I have seen on occasions a tall and slim
girl of about twenty standing at the door step of the house watching me enter
the compound, I had not asked out of propriety, the middle aged couple with
whom I had interacted initially, whether there was any other member in the
family. I was waiting for disbursement of loan to buy a new one and save myself
from the daily derisive grin.
One
day I noticed by chance some strange thing. I am by nature a very organized and
stickler for order. I keep things at appointed places. I keep in small box
things like pens, pencils sharpener, quick fix and small scissor. This morning
when I looked for cello tape, I found to my surprise the box at the centre of
table displaced from its usual place at the top corner. I was intrigued. There
was no way someone could enter as I had the only key. The landlord had said the
other key was lost and that I should be careful not to lose the only one I had.
I dismissed this incident as possibly a lapse on my part.
A
few days later there was another episode that put me off. I keep the daily
newspaper neatly folded one over the other in chronological order. It was a
Monday and after reading it when I went to keep it on the pile, I did not see
the Sunday Times of India but Saturday’s paper on the top with Sunday’s below
it. I would have never done it. I was sure that someone was in my room, but
that was impossible as the door was secure when I returned. I decided not to
ignore it lightly but to unravel the mystery. The next day I put a towel on the
mirror hoping if it is the girl, she would certainly remove the towel to see
herself in the mirror.
As I
expected the towel was lying on the chair signifying that someone had tampered
with the lock and entered my room. I
went down and asked the land lady ” Mami, did anyone come up the stairs looking
for me?”
“Why
do you ask? No one came and I would have known from the noise when the front
gate is opened”” she replied
“I
was expecting a courier. Never mind, may be a neighborhood urchin would have
come”
“Is
something amiss? No one came to my knowledge” she replied.
I
saw the shadow of her standing behind the door and heard a very faint giggle.
“I
usually close the window doors shut to prevent dust. They were ajar today and I
thought a courier boy would have come. It is not a big thing. Just wished to
make sure that I had not missed the parcel.”
“I
will keep a watch”
Two
days later, I saw a paper torn from a note book with words “Do not be afraid.
No ghost here” with a symbol of a ghost.
I
wrote beneath it “I know it is no ghost but a beautiful elf that never comes
when I am here. May be it will appear on my off day, day after tomorrow on
Valentine’s Day”
The
next day evening I saw a happy smiley with word “Surely but after dusk when
parents have gone to temple”
I
was restless wondering whether she would be beautiful, qualified and be a right
match for me. I wished to talk to her for long without these fleeting
appearances.
It
was around 8pm, she appeared outside the open door of my room. What a
bewitching beauty and mesmerizing eyes. I beckoned her inside with a smile.
She
came and said “Amma and appa would be back from temple anytime. They saw your
bike outside and know you are here”
“Tell
me first how do you enter my room in my absence when I have the only key?”I
asked.
She
kept silent and asked me “Aren’t you happy that I am visiting your room? What
does it signify?”
Elated
at the response I said “Happy Valentine’s Day!” and picked up a box of
chocolates and offered her
“Happy
Valentine’s Day to you too! Do not bother about the other key. Is it lost?”she
giggled mischievously and added “Trust in my capacity to reach you”
“No
need. You can continue to visit and leave your foot prints and little epistles.
I would be happier if you can contrive to come frequently when I am here. What
do you do? Have the chocolates.”
“Let
the box be here. It is ours. I have been selected in the campus and hold your breath,
it is in your company.”
I
jumped with joy and cried aloud “Wow, did you say ours?” even as my hands tried
to clasp hers. But she managed to wriggle out and say “Beware, I hear my
parents coming. See you later” and ran away in a trice.
The
landlord and his wife came up the stairs and entered my room. After being
seated, he said “My wife was telling about your doubt whether someone is having
access to your room. There is no key besides the one I gave you. This place is
very secure and not one theft has taken place within my knowledge in this
locality”
“Sir,
I think your daughter has not revealed to you that she has the lost key and the
mystery is now unraveled “I said with a big smile
“What
are you talking, young man? Are you telling me that my daughter has found the
key and told you? Did she talk to you and when was this?” he asked in a
confused anger.
“Just
a little while ago. She ran away when she heard you entering the house, I
think”
“I
must have noticed as we were coming in. We have no daughter. The one I had
committed suicide three years back.Pray, do not ask me why?”
A
chill ran through my spine and I fainted
“Wake
up, you sleepy head. It is 7.30 am and late for you. I have brought coffee for you,”
the young lady was heard telling even as she was shaking my shoulders with one
hand and stroking my chin with the other.
I
rubbed my eyes and blurted in fear “Are you real? Your parents were here and
said…”
She
closed my mouth with her palm and said with a big smile “I am as real as you
are.. Feel this pinch. They never came here. Stop dreaming. I have broken the
news to my parents. They are very happy at the development. Here is the
duplicate key I have been using.”
I
pulled her close to me and she gleefully moved near..
An intriguing story. Yet again a power packed narration. You hv kept yr reader in rapt attention
ReplyDeleteA lovable story Sir. enjoyed it
ReplyDeleteHappy Valentines day sir.. a bit late :)
ReplyDeleteand what a lovely story as alwaysssssssssss
Bikram's
A really sweet story apt for the occasion of Valentine's day. I thought your twist was going to be that of a ghost but you surprised me yet again with a twist that i did not expect but one that i really enjoyed and liked more than where I thought the story was going. You did it again. Lovely story... :)
ReplyDeleteThe apparition had me on tenterhooks...story filled with thrilling narrative and punch words!
ReplyDeleteReally spooky story that didn't end the way I thought it would ! Nice twist.
ReplyDeleteThis is so interesting! The story starts with a note of mischief, becomes real spooky and turns out to be a love story . :) Just the last line needs a I in place of He.
ReplyDeleteThanks for pointing out.I have since corrected.
ReplyDeleteThanks for the kind comment too.
Surprises after Surprises!
ReplyDeleteNice one kp . I thought she would be a ghost..
ReplyDeleteRudraprayaga od prayaga-rudraprayaga.blospot.in has left a comment
ReplyDelete'Aha! Very interesting.'
Two twists... Totally hooked to the narrative... Sweet love story... You are awesome GP :)
ReplyDeleteSo many twist and turn. A cute and sweet love story. Very engaging till the end.
ReplyDeleteSuper! Gawd! I dont how I land here on your blog. Your each and every post is intriguing, interesting and what not. You are an awesome writer.
ReplyDeleteA ghostly encounter. I literally skipped a heartbeat. Another brilliant piece. :-)
ReplyDeleteI always support love ! Lol :)
ReplyDeleteGreat story
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