Raghav wished to reach home before it
got dark. There was a reason for this. He decided to take a short cut through
the mini forest that saved his walk by three kilometres. As he walked hurriedly
through the narrow winding path amidst thick bushes, he saw midway a little
yonder a cloud of smoke enveloping the sky on one side. It was summer and
everything was bone dry. It could be a fire, he surmised and increased the
pace. Luckily the sun had not yet set giving some dim light.
He saw a little away on this desolate
stretch, a lean and lanky man standing at the edge of the pathway looking at
him. As he neared the man, he found him to be dark and also appeared somewhat
strange with his longish neck. His face
was elongated horizontally and the head wide at the top narrowing
down below reminding of an inverted triangle. His eyes were narrow but flitting brightly
from one side to other. He was perspiring heavily.
As he smiled at Raghav, the latter felt uneasy
but still welcomed his company in this deserted area.
The man saw a flask hanging on Raghav’s
shoulders and requested him for some water. Actually the flask contained toddy,
an intoxicating drink, that he was habituated to. Raghav readily gave a
cup. When he saw the man drink it with gusto, he offered him another cup. The man said
his name was Manidharan. Raghav became less apprehensive of the guy now and
prodded him to walk faster as it was getting dark. But the man
could not keep pace with Raghav as he walked rather wobbly.
When they came out of forest, they both
sat down on the mud to rest and finish the drink. Soon both of them became inebriated
and prattled loudly. It was then Manidharan gave Raghav a marble sized stone for
being nice to him adding that it is very precious. Raghav with his mud soiled
dirty hand took it.
“My house is very near. Do come with me
and have your dinner,” requested Raghav.
“I will come with you up to your place but
will leave immediately without having dinner,” Manidharan replied.
“Why?””
“I cannot tell you more. Do not press
me. Keep the stone carefully.” he replied.
When they reached the hut, Raghav’s wife
saw him highly intoxicated in disheveled condition with mud all over the body.
”
How many times should I tell you not to drink outside the home. You can drink as much as you wish within the hut as I do not want you to remain fallen on the road,” she spoke
with much irritability.
“Do not get angry, my dear. My friend here gave me this precious stone and
we celebrated a little,” he said and gave her the mud covered stone.
She took one short look at it and
shouted, “Who would give you a precious stone, you worthless fellow? This is
a dirty green marble,” and lifted her hand to throw it across towards the open drain.
Stopping her, he turned towards the man for help, but to his great shock, he found he was
not there. Instead to his horror he saw
what seemed a long king cobra slithering under the bush rustling the leaves as it
sped fast.
When he realized the full import of what
he had undergone, keeping in mind the shape of his face, his name, the squeaky
voice and wobbly walk, he snatched the gem stone from his wife’s hands and said
“You fool. You were about to throw away a priceless gem that would make us very
rich. He rubbed it with his cloth to see a dazzling and invaluable naagmani (cobra
pearl) in greenish yellow emitting a glow.
Intriguing. Have heard that snakes guard treasure, the story takes you back into times when such did actually happen.
ReplyDeleteImagining Manidharan bought a smile . As always loved the narration
Interesting one KP!
ReplyDeleteI was just imagining the shape of the face like an inverted triangle tapering down from a broad forehead but still did not link it to a cobra!
ReplyDeleteKP sir, do you believe in the stories of snakes safeguarding treasures and drinking milk etc..
This story gave me goosebumps on the thought of seeing a cobra slithering away, what if he had known about that when he ventured into the forest!
Spooky ! And to bring that emotion in such a short.narration ...kudos
ReplyDeleteYour beautiful narration makes all stories interesting! This one too!
ReplyDeleteHaha, you too! I am observing that a lot of snake stories are making popular rounds on the tv!But seriously, this was narrated so aunthentically it felt like real!
ReplyDeleteInteresting story. But what is the lesson learnt? You lose your senses if you drink too much. That is why, in a drunken state, Manidharan parted with that stone to Raghav. I am just kidding. Please don't take me seriously.
ReplyDeleteReading your stories would always leave me amazed and appreciate your style and content a thousand times before I move on to next tab. In fact I have been inspired by your content and published two to three stories on my blog. But I always wanted to know how to get so many ideas. I would be glad to know about it.
ReplyDeleteWow! Intriguing :-)
ReplyDeleteA very unpredictable one. Interesting.
ReplyDeleteNamaste: Reminds me of a saying "never look a gift horse in the mouth." His wife so use to berating and fits of chastisement in regards to her husband that she almost through away something precious. It also reminds me of the saying...."know what you have and the treasures it hold and not give weight to vanity."
ReplyDeleteThanks for the folklore, haven't read one in a while.
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Good one sir.
ReplyDeleteInteresting and enjoyed.But I wonder if there is nagamani with snakes.
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