After a daylong shooting from early morning with repeated retakes, Director
Manivarman sought refuge at his usual haunt for some quiet. He sat on a bench near the old bridge across the wide river in the outskirts of the city. The view was
somewhat sombre with the sun setting fast and the sky aglow in deep orange with
occasional flock of birds flying speedily to their nests.
His eyes were closed but he could not refrain from thinking of the day’s
events. The beautiful actress was from
a different part of the country new to the local culture and the hero, a busy
and impatient guy, could not hide his annoyance at the frequent retakes.
Manivarman had to cajole him to go easy and be tolerant reminding him that the
film was almost complete. He expected this romantic venture to be a great hit
with its bold scenes and novel theme. Nevertheless, a thought flit across his
mind that he should pick a local but a new face for his next film.
It was then, he heard a soft sob nearby and turned to see a young woman
with disheveled hair and crumpled clothes standing close to the railings of the
bridge and peering at the silent water. He immediately knew that she was in
some distress and her choice of this lonely location did not augur well.
“Why are you standing alone at this hour near the railings? Don’t you
know the river is deep in this part? I suggest you come away from the railings
and tell me, if you wish to, what is bothering you. May be I can help you,” he
said.
She did not answer though she turned her face towards him. What a beauty
with her chiseled features, he thought for a second. “Haven’t you heard me or
what?” he prodded her to speak.
She wiped the tears flowing from her eyes with her dupatta and
continued to stare at him silently.
“Don’t you follow Tamil? he asked her.
“I am a Tamilian but why should I talk to a stranger about my problems.
What is wrong if I stand here? “she asked
“Ï am glad you can speak well. You have every right to stand anywhere
you like but it is unusual for a young lady in disheveled condition to be alone
at dusk on a bridge with hands on railings. That reveals something is amiss. Do
not act rashly with God-given life. Do remember that all these things get
sorted out but a life lost can never be retrieved. Sit on this bench for a while.
You will feel better.” said the director.
“Thanks for your concern. But you can do little to help me. I beg of
you to leave me alone for me to find a solution to my problem, “she said with
teary eyes.
“Okay. I will leave you to your
own devices but on one strict condition that you promise never to take your life.
I am in a hurry to go home, “he said.
“You cannot force me to promise. But, I am willing to share with you
provided you promise to leave me alone.” she said in a determined tone. He
nodded his head in agreement
“I loved a young man since my
college days and he too loved me with same intensity. He sought time for our
marriage till his younger sister got married. I agreed as he was a decent and
honest guy. I trusted him so much that we spent several weekends together. His
sister was married more than a year ago and ever since I have been pressurizing
him to marry me. He was putting off initially offering one reason or the other
and I did not mind giving him time. But when he came to know a week back that I
was bearing his child, his attitude changed abruptly and advised me that I
better abort the baby. When I refused, he avoided talking to me or meeting me. When
I managed to confront him last week, he had the cheek to tell me that he had
already married another woman under pressure from his family. I was devastated
and initially thought of complaining to police and have him behind bars but the
thought of his newly married wife deterred me. My doctor refused to abort the
child saying it is late and would endanger my life. I cannot hide from my parents
anymore. I was foolish and will have to pay the price. I assure you that I
would not do anything rash and will think over the matter this week calmly.
Please go home,” she said.
“It is dark already. Can I drop you at your place?” he asked
She agreed and went to fetch her bag while Manivarman turned and walked
towards the car. It was then he heard a loud splash behind him. He looked back
and found to his horror the young lady was not to be seen. He ran towards the
railing and peered into the silent river for any sign. It was dark already and
he could not see clearly. He hit his head repeatedly with his hand loudly
remonstrating himself for trusting the troubled girl and for leaving her to
walk behind him.
His legs trembled and he sat on the bench muttering to himself when he
suddenly heard a loud giggle followed by peals of laughter. He saw the young
woman emerging from behind a flower pot with bushy plant and said, “Sorry
uncle. Did you fall for my short acting? I dropped a big stone into the river.
I know who you are as you are famous and that you visit the place once a while.
I was waiting for an opportunity to showcase my skill and I am happy I could do
it today. The story was all a big bluff. Can you now help me with a break as promised?
“she said smilingly.
Manivarman looking at her beautiful face and bewitching smile decided that
here was the new face he wished to employ for his next project.
” I am angry with you for scaring me but appreciate your guts and
impromptu histrionic skill. Yes, you will be the leading lady in my next film
to commence soon if you pass the screen test. Here is my card. Visit me after a
fortnight as I am currently busy,” he said with much relief and a large smile.
Nice. Well narrated. Vuvud description. Clever ploy by the girl
ReplyDeleteThat was a nice story KP! I enjoyed reading it. Not only that, I learnt two new words: flit and augur. Thank you! 😊
ReplyDeleteYour narration is astounding, the language rich.The drama engrossing! Keep writing.
ReplyDeleteNice twist in the end...super Partha Ajja
ReplyDeleteA wonderful Partha-bulous twist to the end :) you never cease to weave magic in your stories :).
ReplyDeleteVery nice read! The suspense was well maintained till the end. It doesn't feel as if you have been away from writing these little tales. Keep writing!
ReplyDeleteNice story.. slightly different from your usual style!
ReplyDeleteEnjoyed reading your story after a long time! Good narration as usual with an interesting twist in the tale! Waiting to read more!
ReplyDeleteSaw a filmy post.. good one..
ReplyDeleteBeautiful story... quite interesting twist... waiting for more !!
ReplyDeleteIt is brilliant! The film director had got really hooked on to the young, ambitious wannabe actor's ruse , making us also think that, perhaps, he might get a story out of this experience for his next film But we were taken by surprise when we realized that the whole scene was a set up ! Good one , Partha Sir !
ReplyDeleteAs usual a very good story with an unexpected twist. Different from your usual style. Love seeing this variety. I love happy endings....we need more of those with what's going on around us. I was preparing myself for a sad story and was pleasantly surprised. I love your writing style. Please keep it coming... :)
ReplyDeleteThis is your niche, KP. Great story, as is usual. Looking forward to more stories from you.
ReplyDeleteA born actress indeed ! All's well that ends well :)
ReplyDeleteYour narration did draw us into her cooked up story
Many readers are too easily impressed. That said, it was indeed a clever ploy by the girl which yielded for her the desired result. That the Director, obviously an experienced person, was taken in by her weaving is indeed noteworthy.
ReplyDeleteWritten well...
ReplyDeleteVery nice story. But it will happen only in the movie world.
ReplyDeleteCinematic ending. ha,ha,ha,ha,ha... Nice story, Periappa!
ReplyDeletei think it s first time you have a story around this theme.. and as always well executed.. like a film script in nutshell form
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