Set amidst coffee plantations with scenic beauty all around, the hillside
resort offered a perfect get away from the hustle and bustle of city. The
cottages with well laid pathways were clean, comfortable and well furnished.
Deenadayal had chosen a cottage that had a view of a water fall slightly away.
His wife Lochana and their 15-year-old son Dhana specially loved the place and
were roaming around all over while the portly Deenadayal spent his time mostly confined
to the room watching movies gorging on Scotch and whiskey or sitting in the
balcony watching the scenery. He along with Lochana even had their breakfast,
lunch and dinner served at the room. They had planned a vacation for a week.
When Deenadayal was 40 and Lochana 38, the childless couple wished to
adopt a baby. It was then some friend suggested adopting Dhana, a newborn baby
whose mother had died during childbirth and whose father was inclined to part
with the child. When the tall and muscular man came to friend’s house with the baby,
Deenadayal was assured that the baby would be healthy. Baby Dhana looked cute except
for the big black birthmark on the centre his forehead which only enhanced his
charm. Lochana liked the baby so much that she grabbed him from his father’s hands.
The baby snuggled on her shoulders with a smile. Deenadayal struck a deal with
the man that he would be paid a hefty sum as a token of gratitude and that
Dhana would be looked after very well, but he should on no account ever attempt
to see his son.
The boy was put in the best school, given all the comforts and he turned
out to be a good student. He was a loving and obedient son making them proud
and happy.
“Dhana, why don’t you have your breakfast with us in the cottage? You
never eat with us,” pleaded Lochana.
“Amma, I go after my jogging direct to the dining hall for my
coffee and breakfast. Further the food gets cold by the time it reaches us.
Things served in the dining hall are hot and fresh. The ambiance is good with
many eating amidst chatter and laughter. The servers are friendly especially one
Murari who serves me is exceptionally good. You both must dine in the hall. You
are missing lot of fun,” Dhana replied.
“I am eager and willing but what can I do with a couch potato for my
husband?” grumbled his mom and added “Are you tipping Murari generously for him
to be very solicitous to you?”
“I like eating here all the
three of us together,” interjected Deenadayal much to the chagrin of Lochana.
“Sorry, appa, I like eating at the dining hall. Let amma decide for herself,
“ replied Dhana.
Two days later, Dhana had not returned even at 10 am and the parents
were worried. When Deenadayal readied himself to go to dining hall to enquire, a server
came running to inform that a poisonous snake had bitten their son and that he
is safe now resting in a room at the hall.
Shocked they literally ran to the hall to find Dhana sitting on a chair
but pale and crying with many around him. They hugged him and asked what had happened, whether any
doctor was called or he was taken to hospital.
One person came forward and signaled to Dhana to keep quiet and said to
the anxious parents,” I am the resident doctor here. Normally snakes are not common
here and no idea how he came to be bitten by a venomous snake. There are no
hospitals nearby with necessary antidotes and it would have been risky to
travel far without something being done immediately. We had put a tourniquet in the leg
above the point of bite. Still the boy started frothing when one of the servers
came forward and started sucking out the poison through his mouth. Luckily this
helped save the life of the boy.”
“Where is the man, the savior of our boy?” cried Deenadayal and Lochana
in chorus.
The doctor and the others who were around remained silent with downcast
faces. When prodded, the doctor said, “Sadly the man who sucked the poison had
ulcer in his mouth and the poison spread in his blood stream. He died
immediately giving us no chance to revive him. His body is outside.”
“Does he have a family? Have you informed them?”” asked Deenadayal
“No, sir, Murari was single and
had no family. He stayed in the accommodation allotted to him here. He was a
good person, always quiet and a bit forlorn. I don’t know why he did this
foolish thing when he had a wound in his mouth. He could have asked someone else
to do,” he replied.
“Murari, did you say? Is he the server who served my son daily?” asked
Deenadayal at no one in particular. Someone nodded his head.
He went along with doctor and others to see the body of the server. As
he saw Murari’s body, a thought flit across his mind. Then as if on an impulse,
he pulled up the white sheet covering him at his legs to find to his great
shock six toes on both legs.
He remembered vividly the six toes, he saw more than a decade back, in
both legs of the man who gave his son for adoption and his having checked immediately
baby Dhana’s legs to make sure they were normal. He could not resist from
thinking that Murari must have known Dhana was his son from the large birthmark
on the latter’s forehead and must have sacrificed his life for Dhana’s sake.
Tears started flowing copiously from his eyes to the bewilderment of Lochana
and others around. He took care however not to reveal the secret to anyone.
Lochana was surprised to find her normally thrifty
husband spending a huge amount for Murari s funeral.
Wow. Nice one. There is always some good in all of us. Unexpected twist. Keep writing
ReplyDeleteOne more flawless story laid on a foundation of a wonderful emotional and gripping suspense plot. Thumbs up...
ReplyDeleteGood one KP! A new plot! 😊
ReplyDeleteBeautiful story! The twist in the tale is good! Keep writing, KP!
ReplyDeleteExcellent KP sir....one of the best in recent times, different and unique and out of the box. The narration as always brilliant that keep the readers at the edge of the seats and wanting for more in the end!
ReplyDeleteI could feel all the characters in flesh and blood making it more interesting and gripping. A great story and now waiting for the next surprise package from your stables.
Beautiful story as usual. Keep writing Sir!
ReplyDeleteHi Kp, Was Murari aware he was saving his son? Or that is left to readers imagination.
ReplyDeleteGood story.
A short story with an interesting plot. Though I wonder why Murari gave away his son only to care for him later!
ReplyDeleteExcellent story. I can only imagine the emotions going through Murari's mind when he saw his grown up son for the first time in that dining hall.
ReplyDeleteA good one!
ReplyDeleteVasudha
Beautiful story with a touching plot. How it must have broken the heart of such a loving and selfless father to give away his child, no matter under what circumstance. He probably regretted his decision. I could picture the hill station, the mist and the characters so clearly. Well one thing is for sure we need a sequel to this story - Murari's side. beautifully written. Keep it coming!!!!
ReplyDeleteIntriguing story
ReplyDeletevery nice story. the sacrifices that a parent makes ...nothing is too big ...not even one's own life!
ReplyDeleteThe twist at the end came as a surprise ! Deftly handled the conclusion ! Good one, Sir !
ReplyDeleteWhat else I can say, I applaud you from my heart!
ReplyDeleteLove the twist at the end.great narrative. Thumbs up
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