“How is he
doing?” Pavitra heard from behind as she was busy changing the IV fluid after
observing the vital signs from the various monitors.
“One moment
doctor,” she replied as she checked whether the fluid was flowing properly. “He
is stable and all vital signs are normal, “she said
“Good” said
Dr. Mukundan as he took the file from her hand and observed the drowsy patient
for a minute. “Continue the same medicines till I review tomorrow,” he said as
he moved to the next patient with Pavitra in tow.
It is a
small but reputed cardiac care hospital headed by Dr. Mukundan who had earned
his stripes by studying and working in a renowned American university and its
hospital. He was still young in his early thirties and was considered a leading
cardiologist. Pavitra has been working as a nurse for the last five years and
only a year back was posted in the critical care ward after some intense
training. Ever since she interacted with Dr. Mukundan in the ward at least
twice a day.
Being a
conscientious, hardworking and intelligent nurse with gentle and soft spoken
nature, she had won the confidence and esteem of the doctor. She was the only
one amongst the nurses who got an ad hoc increase in pay a few months back
triggering a mischievous gossip among the nurses within her ear shot that the
doctor had a romantic interest in her.
What crap
she thought to herself, but felt inwardly happy though she felt that the
relationship with doctor was formal and professional. However, in the nights
while on bed, she could not resist thinking of him, his tall physique, handsome
face and friendly demeanour. She even started wondering whether there could be
a truth in the gossip as otherwise why she should be singled out for a raise in
salary. But, she was quick to smother such thoughts when she remembered her
family of mother and younger brother in college dependent wholly on her salary
and that marriage was out of question till her brother completed his education
and got a job. She was nearing thirty but still looked young with a very charming
face and lissome figure.
A week later
as Dr. Mukundan was leaving the ward, he asked Pavitra to follow him with a
couple of files. This was the first time he was asking her to see him in his
room. Could it be he wants to express his feelings, she wondered setting
butterflies flutter in her stomach. Her cheeks turned red as she hurried behind
him with a couple of patients’ files.
“Sit down
Pavitra. I have been wanting to talk to you in private for some time Let me
first tell you that I am highly satisfied with you. As a nurse you have an
admirable combination of knowledge of your work your functions in the ward, nursing
skills, right attitudes, and the noble values of treating your work as a service.
The feedback from patients has been good. I am very fortunate to have you in my
team and wish to take it forward to a personal level. I know you have a mother
and brother in college and how much your salary means to the family. I have
spoken about you to my mom and she would like to meet you. Can I pick you up at
5pm tomorrow? Wear a good sari,” he said
with a smile.
That night
she could hardly sleep. She did not breathe a word to her mom and waited to see
further development She started thinking that this could be a prelude to
happy events to follow.
He came at the appointed time and took her in his car to his palatial
house. As she entered, she saw an old lady with kindly eyes seated on a wheel
chair. The lady smiled at Pavitra and beckoned her by name to come near her.
She said “Just as Mukund told me, you look really beautiful and I have taken an
instant liking for you.”
Embarrassed Pavitra looked at Mukund who intervened to say” Pavitra,
you see my mother is an invalid. She needs someone to assist her and provide
her company when I am not there. I know how efficient you are and decided to
bring you here.” He paused to see her reaction.
This was a hammer blow to Pavitra crashing all her dreams. Her anger
and frustration grew inside her as she felt cheated. When she stood dazed
without replying, Mukund prodded her “Do you have any objection to being a
companion to my mom? Be assured that you will find this role much more rewarding
and comfortable than your present job.”
Pavitra did not know what to say to this unexpected development but
realized he was cunning. She wished to run away from this treacherous man. She
put her handkerchief to her mouth and turned towards the door to hide her tears.
Mukund’s mom who was watching all the time with a grin quickly intervened
to say “Stop joking, Mukund, why do you find pleasure in teasing her and
playing with her emotions? She must have grown lot of her dreams. Do not ever
shatter them even in jest.”
She drew Pavitra close to her and said “He is always playful. He wants
you to come here as my daughter-in-law and give me your good company. You can
still be associated with the hospital.Do not worry about me as I have many
servants to take care of me. Ever since he set his eyes on you in the clinic,
he has fallen flat for you. Would you please agree to marry him? I will talk to
your amma and do the needful. They would be fully taken care of. Have no worry
on that score”
When she saw Mukund watching her eagerly, she put her head shyly down
and started scratching the ground with her toe.
Glad you made sure her expectations were met finally! But I think usually girls wouldn't like to meet mothers first without knowing the reason 😃
ReplyDeleteA really well narrated simple story and characters well depicted. A nice light way to start your day.
ReplyDeleteVery nicely written.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful as usual! I always like happy ending ;)
ReplyDeleteWell written as ever :)
ReplyDeleteNice story
ReplyDeleteCute...But I wonder why always girls are supposed to be shy and coy and scratch the floor with their toe. I mean they can always say yes, can't they
ReplyDeleteSweet romantic story! Many times when we start desiring something and weaving dreams of obtaining it we stop thinking logically. A logical girl would probably not have gone to meet the mother, but her wishful thinking prevented a more reasonable thinking and in the end gave her what her heart desired. I am glad it had a happy ending. Nicely written!
ReplyDeletewell written :)
ReplyDeleteWhile the story was the usual cute romantic tale, Sir, you did manage to give it a twist. For a moment, we too were stunned when the Doc coolly asked Pavitra to work at home as his mother's nurse. While Pavitra was perplexed, we were apoplectic :-)
ReplyDeleteGood one !!
Good one! Vasudha.
ReplyDeleteVery romantic.
ReplyDeleteSweet soft romance , subtly etched out
ReplyDeleteBeautiful! I thot it would end on a bad note but nope i loved it. This is how all love stories should end. :D
ReplyDeleteWoww! Heart Touching Story!
ReplyDeleteSweet soft romance and subtle. Well narrated.
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