It was a lower middle class apartment complex built by government
with thin cracks on the faded walls and with plants sprouting from the crevices. Ramaswamy
Iyengar had bought this flat about twenty years back after selling his tiny share
of land in the native village. Iyengar has been happily living in this
comfortably situated and well connected place. Another reason for his happiness
was that Kesavan Nambiar, his colleague and close friend of several years, is his
neighbor in the adjacent flat.
A retired government servant Iyengar was getting a small pension.
He had a son and a daughter born late in life. Govind his son had finished his
MCA and joined a reputed IT company. Being bright, he was chosen by the company
for long term work in US four years back. Although of marriageable age, Iyengar
was waiting to finalize first his daughter Veda’s marriage. Veda after her M.
Com joined a private bank earning a good salary. He was frantically searching
for a suitable match for her. Traditional and conservative, always clad in
Dhoti in conventional manner, he sported his caste mark prominently on his
forehead and spent long hours mornings and evenings at the local Kodandaramar temple
assisting in its administration.
Nambiar’s only daughter Padmini, a close friend of Veda and of
same age, was an extremely good looking and tall girl. She had learnt multimedia
and web designing at advanced level and was working with a big publishing company.
Nambiar’s financial position was not good and the family lived mainly on the
income of Padmini. Though Nambiars often claimed that his search for a good
match for his daughter has not been fruitful, Iyengar confided to his wife now
and then his suspicion that enough efforts were not put by them possibly due to
their dependence on Padmini. The lady agreed with him lamenting at the plight
of Padmini and blaming her destiny.
It was then one fine morning a rich Kerala business man with his
wife and son approached Nambiars wanting Padmini’s hand for their only son. It
seems they said their son was struck by the girl’s beauty when he went to the bank
on some business and that they were not particular about the status or the
wealth of the girl’s parents. They assured that they would take care of all the
marriage expenses including jewelry, clothes, marriage hall and food. The young
man looked decent and handsome. It seemed that he was assisting his father in
the lucrative family business. Padmini’s parents were flabbergasted at this godsend
development and readily agreed after checking with Padmini. The marriage soon over,
Padmini left for her husband’s place in the same city. Nambiar shared with
Iyengar under strict confidentiality that a tidy amount was given to Nambiar
during the wedding as a token of gratitude by groom’s family.
Initially for a couple of
months Padmini visited her parents frequently but was not seen thereafter. It
appeared that her in-laws were not letting her visit her parents and also
forced her to quit her job. She was strictly told not to contact her parents.
Nambiars were very much shaken and frequently shared their grief with Iyengar
couple.
After three or four months, Iyengar was surprised to see Nambiar
at the sanctum one morning from his office space in the temple. The latter
rarely visited the temple. When Iyengar found him standing before the Presiding
deity praying for long, he went near him and found his eyes closed and tears
trickling down his cheeks. He stood by his side quietly waiting for him to
finish.
When he opened his eyes,
Iyengar put his hands on his shoulder and asked him,” Kesava, are you alright?”
Nambiar tried to be normal and said,” Yes, I am quite fine physically.”
“I did not mean physically. You seem to be mentally tormented
with some problem. I have never seen you in tears in all these years as you are
a strong personality. If it is not very confidential, you can share with me. It
will lighten your burden.”
Nambiar hastily wiped his eyes and said “Ramaswamy, we have been
deceived. Padmini’s life is totally ruined,” and started sobbing even before
completing the sentence
“Are they ill treating her because she did not bring adequate
jewelry or dowry?”
“No, the matter is much more serious,” and he kept quiet without
telling what the problem was.
It took a while for Iyengar
to ferret out the information that the marriage has not been consummated and
that the young man was unfit for married life. It appeared that it was beyond
any medical remedy.
Iyengar was shaken initially and after some deliberation said, “Kesava,
there is no point in her staying there. You must bring her back immediately to
your home. She is a major and can come out on her own volition. As a matter of
caution, I will accompany you along with a lawyer friend of mine. He can put
fear in their minds, if there is a need. Can we go in the next hour?”
When Nambiar agreed, Iyengar told him, “We will carefully think
of a solution later after talking to Padmini. Whatever be the solution, staying
at their place is no more acceptable.”
By afternoon, the presence of lawyer friend enabled easy release
of Padmini from that hell and she was safely back at the apartment. With Veda
providing company, the smile returned to Padmini’s face.
Two days later after
dinner Iyengar broached the subject to his wife. Veda was also present. His
wife also sympathized with Padmini and wondered what could be done. Divorce is
inevitable but what next? The fate is cruel in some cases,” she added.
Iyengar told his wife “I
have thought of a plan and wanted to know your views before expressing it to
Padmini and her parents. Firstly, I am going to ask Padmini to get a divorce.
This can be obtained within a short time, my lawyer friend tells me. Secondly, Govind
may be willing to marry her as they know each other well. She is a good match
for him. I am not going to see horoscope or bothered by any tradition or
opinions. I have almost decided and just need your approval.”
Before her mom spoke out, Veda intervened and turning to her dad
said exuberantly,” Appa, you are cute and an ideal father I am proud of. I can
now share a secret. Though Govind and Padmini have not openly uttered, I think
they are very fond of each other. How nice to have her as part of our family.
Appa, please talk to Govind now itself,”
“Let me hear your mom too,” said Iyengar.
” Padmini is no doubt a very good girl. Nevertheless, I would prefer
Veda’s marriage to be finalized first.”
On hearing this, Veda exploded “Do you think my marriage would
be affected. I don’t care. I will find someone for me. But Govind should give a
new life to Padmini immediately. It has nothing to do with my wedding.” Her mom
remained silent.
Iyengar softly said, “I have already spoken to Govind. Do you
know what that wily fellow said? He tells me ‘Appa, have I ever said no to
you ?’”
In six months Padmini was happily married to Govind after due
formalities. Veda too got a good match.
When Iyengar went to the temple after a fortnight to
resume his honorary duty, he was slightly apprehensive of how the orthodox and
conservative management would react, He was pleasantly surprised to see the
Trustee of the temple warmly welcoming him with extended hands and
congratulating him for his gesture.
Kesavan Nambiar who rarely visited the temple earlier came these days daily.
A ray of hope in today’s world. Hope this story enables a change in everyone ‘s mindset
ReplyDeleteThank you .
Right story with a good message
ReplyDeleteAn apt story in the current situation. As akways beautifully narrated
ReplyDeleteVery good story. My family has got two girls who have come back home from the hell. One got remarried but another just stayed unmarried. She was working in P&T and retired. People like Govind and his father are great.
ReplyDeleteWonderful story with a twist
ReplyDeleteI feel, intense conflict makes a story more realistic.
ReplyDeleteAlthough the conflict at the beginning of the story was good, the smooth ending makes it slightly unrealistic. What if Govind was in love with someone else? What if Veda did object to the alliance?
Of course, it's difficult to consider these possibilities for a short story, but I feel you could up the ante a bit more. Conflict, I meant.
Destination Infinity
As usual beautiful story with a twist you are known for. A true inspiration ... a real example of ageing young.
ReplyDeleteI really treasure your work, Great post.
ReplyDeletereally fascinated by your choice of names for your characters... i hardly have read any names thats not South Indian! :)
ReplyDeleteWhether Life echoes fiction or fiction echoes Life, your tale gives us more hope for the gen-nex !
ReplyDeleteI like stories with happy endings. This is one of them.
ReplyDeleteNice story with a happy ending!
ReplyDeleteLovely. A happy ending feel-good story - a breath of fresh air!
ReplyDeleteWhat a forward thinking story! I loved the ending of the story giving the readers a ray of hope that the world is not all about negativity. There are people with liberal mindset. Loved the positivity of the story which is very much needed in the current worlld. We need more stories like this to change the world’s thinking. Liked the subtle young love between Padmini and Govind. Beautifully written.
ReplyDeleteSilver lining at last.
ReplyDeleteFantastic modern thinking progressive Iyengar !
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