The sky was unusually cloudy though it has been a hot day and it was getting
dark. Renuka hurried her steps towards the bus stand not to miss the bus. There
were not many on the road with only cars and trucks whizzing past. When she
turned back to look for bus, she saw a tall young man about hundred yards
behind her walking fast. She increased her pace to reach the stand that was
slightly away. She could in a while hear his footsteps closing in on her. Her
heart pounded in fear as the place was desolate.
Very soon he was by her side and she heard him telling, “Madam, do not
be afraid as I am following you only to hand over the key chain you dropped
when you took your mobile out outside your office. Please wait for a moment.”
She opened her bag, even as she was walking, to notice the key chain was
in fact missing. She stopped abruptly and looked at the lanky handsome guy with
a key chain on hand.
“Were you afraid that I was stalking you?l” he laughed
gustily as he handed over the chain.
“To be honest, yes, especially as the road is deserted being Saturday.
I had to finish some urgent work and was held up. Thank you very much as you
had to literally run to catch me. But for you I would have been in a mess as
this my room key,” she replied with a grateful smile.
“Do you work here? I am seeing you for the first time. I am Shilesh,”
and offered his hand.
“Renuka, I work in ABC bank meant for IT companies here. Do you also
work in this area?” she asked without taking his proffered hand.
“A sweet name. I do not work here but have some contracts with some
companies here. I come here very frequently,” he said without elaborating on
the nature of contracts. As he saw a bus approaching, he said, “Your bus I
think. Let us hope we get to meet once a while.”
“Yes, my bus. Thank you very much for the help. Surely we shall meet
again,” she replied as she hurried to get into the bus.
Two days later as she was coming out of the bank, Shilesh sitting on a motor
bike hailed her,” Renuka, I never expected to meet you so soon. As I saw the
name of bank, I remembered you and lingered for a while wondering whether you
would come out. To my great luck you came out.”
“Good we could meet again. I cannot easily forget your helpful gesture
that day.’
“Where do you live? We can have some tiffin and then I can drop you at
your place,” he suggested.
When she mentioned the place where she lived, “It suits me fine as I live
close to your place. We can talk at a
restaurant closer to our area,” Shilesh said.
As they sat in a cozy corner, he told her with a smile “Order what you
like for both of us and tell me all about you both official and personal.”
With sharp features, mesmerizing smile and curly hair that by habit he
pushed back frequently, he cast a spell on her and poor Renuka could not but
lower her eyes when he looked at her intently. Dressed in blue jeans and
striped T shirt that indicated his muscular athletic body, Shilesh made a
favourable impression on Renuka.
The server meanwhile brought two plates of crisp onion rava dosas with
four different chutneys and another plate of four Mangalore bondas with their
own accompaniments straight from the frying pan.
Looking at the spread with satisfaction, he asked her “Now tell me
about you, Renuka, where are your parents living since you are in a hostel? Any
siblings? How long are you in the bank?”
“They live in Tirupatthur.I have no sibling. They pay no heed to my
request to come here as they have some lands nearby to take care of. I am with
the bank for the last one year after my training. How about you?” she asked.
“Since you are in hostel, am I wrong in presuming you are single?”
She lowered her head without answering him but asked, “What do you do? Which
place are you from? You told me you have contracts with some firms here. What
sort of contracts? Are you an engineer?”
“I belong to Krishnagiri but live in Saligramam with my parents. My
only sister is married and in Singapore. As I told you I have contracts with IT
companies to keep their systems in good condition,” and added with a
mischievous twinkle,” I am also a single like you.”
On hearing this, Renuka broke into laughter with Shilesh joining her.
“Is the pressure in bank heavy
on all days? Are there enough people to share the burden? With so many IT offices close by, there must
be rush of customers always in the bank. Isn’t it?” he queried
“Actually it is a small bank catering only to IT employees. Apart from me,
there is a manager and one chowkidar. We hope to get one more assistant within
a fortnight. It is mostly myself in the office whenever my manager goes out to
local head office. On Mondays and Tuesdays a few customers visit to draw money.
There is no ATM in the bank premises. The other days very few come with practically
none on Saturdays. Most do transactions online. Actually it is boring some
days,” she said with a smile.
“Lucky you are. I will try to meet you some day at your office when I
am free.”
He paid the bill and dropped her at her place. Except asking her to
hold his hip firmly with both hands, he did not seem inquisitive and talked generally
about the condition of roads, water scarcity and total absence of rains. He
seemed a very decent fellow and Renuka was impressed. They met again outside
office on alternate days and the same routine was happily followed with a romantic turn.
It was Saturday past 12 noon. There was no customer since morning. The
manager had gone out. The chowkidar was not to be seen and may have gone to
take tea in the nearby shop. It was then Shilesh entered the bank and came
straight to her counter. The usual smile was missing and he had a grim face.
“What happened, Shilesh? Was there any problem in the offices you
visited? Why this stern look?” asked Renuka.
He did not reply but put his hand in the counter with a note.
She grabbed the note and read, “This is a hold up. Cooperate to avoid
personal harm”
She looked at him unbelievingly and asked him, “Don’t be silly. Are you
indulging in a prank or what?”
“I am dead serious. To prove my earnest, see this,” he said as he
produced a glistening pistol. “Do not waste time trying to escape,” he warned
Her knees became weak in fear and shock and she held her head with both her
hands looking at him in utter disbelief.
” No drama or screaming. Hand over the keys to the box on your table
and to the safety room. If you cooperate, I promise everything will be taken
care of smoothly and we can both leave the city to some distant place and live
happily married. If there is slightest attempt to stop me, I will not hesitate
to do what I must, I am ruthless by nature,” he warned without any
ambiguity.
Sizing up the situation, she said,” OK, I am with you on this for the
only reason I am madly in love with you. But be quick as chowkidar may come
anytime. Just close the front door without locking and come inside.”
She gave the keys to the cash box on the counter and led him to the
safety room and opened the door.
“Within five minutes you must come out. Don’t be greedy. I will keep a
watch on the front door and signal you if chowkidar enters. There is a big bag
in the corner. Be very quick,” she said.
“Thank you, Renu.I am also attracted to you and I promise to keep you
happily. I never expected you would support me readily. I will be out in three
minutes. Please keep a watch, my dear,” he said as he patted her cheek and entered
the safety room.
As he opened the locker and found to his joy, stacks of notes of varied
denominations, he heard a click of the door and turned to see to his horror the
door of the safety room was shut. He heard the alarm shrieking loud alternately in high and
low notes. “Dirty bitch, you will pay for this with your life” he swore in
anger
Renuka was seen at the front door shouting for chowkidar and hailing others
for help.A police van was seen fast approaching the bank at a short distance.
A nice story with a great narrative.Loved Renuka s presence of mind. Keep them coming Sir
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ReplyDeleteThank you very much.I have since edited the post to remove the discrepancies.
DeleteGlad you pointed out in time.
Hello KP sir.. I do not have a keen eye for details but your brilliant narration keeps me engaged and eyes are scanning every word in the story. It is so heart warming to engage ourselves in the conversation too.
DeleteA nice story and beware of good looking tricksters!
Gripping read! Nice twist in the story.
DeleteGreat story. Remarkable presence of mind for Renuka.
ReplyDeleteThat was crisp with a great ending. Actually I had seen the red herring when he mentioned 'contracts' with IT companies. I am becoming quite a sleuth, wouldn't you agree? :)
ReplyDeleteStory is good and this deception was unexpected. However, it's difficult to believe that an entire bank could have just one employee at any given time!
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After initial overpowering prospects, story veered into romantic high tea , finally bordering on violence with criminal intent,ending in arrest of culprit in the locker room of the bank.
ReplyDeleteDid not expect the end. Was expecting a light romantic read. We need people to be more aware and alert like Renuka. I applaud Renuka for not letting her attraction for Shilesh or fear of situation deter her from her bold move. Quick thinking on her part. Great story with a greater twist.
ReplyDeleteGreat story with a super ending.
ReplyDeleteCall of duty was higher for Renuka.
So tough to trust anyone! We can never be sure of anyone's motives.
Oh my God! Absolutely brilliant!! Marvelous story! Definitely did not see that coming!! 😃😃🙏
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Gripping read! Nice twist in the story.
Aha!,Budding romance didn't bear fruit.Curiosity-creating end.Nice.
ReplyDeleteTook us by surprise! Never expected Renuka to react so shrewdly. You made us think that she was a vulnerable girl!!
ReplyDeleteRenuka shows great presence of nind. Not everyone can have a balanced approach. To let the mind win over the heart shows a solid character
ReplyDeleteGood presence of mind displayed by Renuka.
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