I know Siddarth, Sid as I call him, well since he became my colleague
six years back. You cannot fault him if he attracted a bevy of young women
yearning for his friendship. Such was his god given magnetic charm. I would not
say he was tall at his 170 cms or boast of a six pack abdomen that film stars
invariably flaunt. In fact, he was dusky with an unruly hair on his head that
defied any styling but his chiseled face, his aquiline nose, the twinkling eyes
and the spontaneous laughter that he broke into even over trivial remarks, made
him a heart throb of women who came into contact.
Add to that the facts that he was a qualified engineer with a Wharton
MBA. He held a senior position in a renowned company drawing a fat salary. He
had a swanky car with a compact rented apartment in a posh colony. On a rough
count it could be a dozen young female fans whom he regularly met individually
or collectively. He never hid his friendships with them.
But he had
some principles that he strictly followed. He took special care to keep friendships
with female colleagues in office strictly formal and professional with no hint
of romance. He also kept them away from his external friends.
He met his personal friends only after his office hours, took them out
to restaurants or movies individually mostly and on occasions three or four by
turn. He was a fun-loving guy who threw a party at his apartment on weekends to
all of them once a while when in mood. A tactful guy he never left anyone
feel she has been ignored or made it appear as anyone special. He never shared
personal information of one with the other. The women trusted him as each one
was left to feel that she was closer to him than others. There was seemingly no
envy among these young women but one could sense an undemonstrated rivalry
among them to win his hand.
He had confided once in a weak moment that he had different boundaries
for these ladies with a couple of them friendly with him even before their
marriage. I suspect he was a smooth operator and ensured the women got the
impression that he just enjoyed being among them and revel in friendly banter and
hoo-has than with any ulterior motive. They felt safe with him.
When I prodded him, “Do you have fancy for anyone among this lot as a potential
life partner? You must be having a special and romantic interest with one
individual? Though you might not have expressed it, you must have conveyed in
other subtle ways.”
“Yes, you are right. I love one Shreya very much and I feel she Is also
pining for me. I came to know of her only recently less than a year and find
that her interests, taste, and attitude complement mine. In fact, I am waiting
for the right moment to tell her.”
Sid has told me more than once that his mom, who was living alone in
the village but with relatives around, has been pressurizing him for the last
three or four years to get married. She often pleaded with him that she was
sick and getting old and would like to see him married before she passed away. Having
lost his dad in his early age, it was his mom who brought him up in difficult
circumstances selling the property to fund his education. He loved her as apple
of his eye and was ever grateful for the sacrifices she had made for him. He
sent her money generously each month.
But he liked the present unattached life and put off the marriage to the
extent possible till one day his dad’s cousin rang up from the village a
fortnight back and informed that his mom has been unwell with high BP and had
fainted a few times. The town doctor has prescribed her medicines. They had
fixed a poor lady to be with his mom all the time and cook food for a monthly
fee and that the amount was not much especially for him. He suggested Sid to
visit her once immediately as it may have a calming effect on her who has been
uttering his name frequently.
I do not know what happened during the visit but he said one day,”
Sudhir, I have committed to my mom that I will marry within three months and
keep her with me. She was very happy but indicated firmly that she would continue
to remain at the village only.
“How are you planning to go about getting the lady after your heart? Would
she be willing after your inaction all these months or do you need any help from
me in scanning the matrimonial sites?”
” Why should I go out when I have one already in view? I know her well
including her family details. I intend to invite all of them for a party at my
place the coming Sunday without telling the purpose and break the news there,”
he said with a happy smile.
“Would you need me to assist you there in the party?” I innocently asked.
“No, you will be an odd man out there. I will introduce them to you
later after my engagement, Anyway, thanks, I can manage the get together.” he rebuffed
with his usual boisterous laughter.” I will be at my home. Call me if you need
any assistance.” I told him in serious tone.
At 5 pm the next Sunday, the
living room at Siddarth’s house was reverberating with Bollywood songs
interrupted by peals of laughter, shrill screams along with clinking of
glasses. There were fourteen women assembled there that included cousins of two
invitees. The table at a corner had sweets from a nearby Bengali shop, Rajbog, Sandesh,
Pantua resembling gulab jamoons and a pot full of misti doi. There were
namkeens too like kachoris, samosas, dhokla, roasted cashew nuts and some other
stuff. There were several soft drinks and a few bottles of other stuff.
The women were dancing to the tunes of latest Bollywood songs with total
abandon. Seated from a vantage position, Siddarth, in denim and yellow Lucknowi
kurta, was watching Shreya dance and sing on the sly without making it obvious.
He announced after a while if they are willing they could start eating.
It was then one after the other, the women went to the only wash room
attached to his bed room. As the door of washroom was not locking, they closed
the bedroom door at his suggestion.
When the clock struck seven, he stood up and said,” I would like to make
an important announcement soon. I will be right back. Please bear with me for a
few minutes,” he said and went in after closing the door.
He went straight to the unlocked steel cupboard that had the key
hanging there. He then opened the unlocked locker and took out a jewel box from
under the pile of pressed shirts to see the Solitaire diamond ring he had
purchased for proposing to lady of his choice. Lo, the ring was missing
mysteriously to his great shock. It was not the outrageous amount he had paid
for it that bothered him but the treachery of one of the assembled ladies that
he could not stomach. He was certain as he had seen it just before they had
arrived. It was obvious one of them had stolen it. Who could it be, he wondered
but did not wish to embarrass all of them. He decided to explore further. He
went out very casually with his trademark smile and announced that he had
second thoughts about the news he wished to convey and would however meet them
all again with in a week. There was a sense of disbelief and disappointment
when they started dispersing especially from Shreya as Sid could see.
Without wasting time,I was there with a friend after I got the call from
Sid. My friend is in a private detective agency. It was agreed that the
mystery would be unraveled without embarrassing the innocent. Sid was prepared
to lose the ring than miss any true friend. Agreed on that, the detective guy,
started dusting the cupboard with chalk piece.
Suddenly he stopped the dusting and asked,” Do you have any friend in
the group who is left-handed? Think carefully and tell as the prints indicate a
woman who uses her left hand.”
“My God, how could it be Shreya? She is the only one who is left handed
and whom I was to propose. It cannot be her. She is honest and I love her
immensely. “he blurted.
“Let us call her and find out. Just tell her that you had wished to
propose to her but the ring you bought for her was misplaced and hence you had
to put off. Let us see her reaction,” I told him.
When Sid rang her up and conveyed her, she laughed and said, “I knew always
that you had fallen head over heels for me and after this incident I wonder
whether I should marry a blunderbuss to be my husband.”
“Shreya, I am serious. This is no time for frivolous talk. Please come
out with the truth,” he said with some acerbity.
“Okay. Before you ask someone else to meddle with your cupboard
further, put your hand deeper into the pile of shirts and report me back your findings,
”she
said with a giggle.
Putting the phone aside, he ran his hand under the pile of shirts to
find another shining box from reputed jewelers. He opened it to see in
astonishment the Solitaire ring he had bought for Shreya along with another
captivating platinum ring for man. My friend and myself could not suppress our laughter much to Sid’s annoyance.
The phone rang. “What did you find, my dear Watson? Was it elementary?
Have you learnt a lesson? I have second thoughts on marrying you unless you
make amends by calling the party again in the next two days and propose in
front of all of them to signify you are no more a Romeo on the prowl,” Shreya
stipulated.
Nice story, great twist! I did not expect this ending!
ReplyDeleteSrikanth
Wow,well narrated. I loved the twist. Sid is too good to be in real life.
ReplyDeleteNice to read happy ending stories, KP! Should we say she is wicked or he?:)
ReplyDeleteNice one Kp. Your creative skills, imagination are simply superb .
ReplyDeleteEnjoyed this story.your imagination is at best.you surprised with your ending.
ReplyDeleteAhhh! The twist is back!
ReplyDeleteRomantic suspense! Entertaining indeed
ReplyDeleteAll good characters, not exploiting opportunities adversely, developing relationship, narrowing down selection, culmination of bonding driven by commitment to mom, setting up trap for identifying true nature of future life partners, finally sealing the decision by subtle directions! May be I have missed some other angles to the story.
ReplyDeleteGood twist by the master magician.
ReplyDeleteThe master craftsman is back with a bang..with all the twists and turns!
ReplyDeleteA cool romantic story like a Bollywood potboiler with strong underlying moral principles.
Immaculate description with utmost attention to even the minutest details makes this atory a great read!
You know how to write an engaging story with a twist. Well written
ReplyDeleteKeep writing, Periappa
Chitra Solomon
Engaging story with an unexpected ending!
ReplyDeleteA ring in hand is worth two in the box!
ReplyDeleteTruly loved it. The best part of the story is that it is interesting from start to end. Lot of twists and turns with an unexpected ending!!!
ReplyDeleteWow....That's quitea surprising twist...
ReplyDeleteBeautiful romance served with a twist of mystery.
ReplyDeleteA gripping tale. Nice!
ReplyDeleteReading your tales gives immense pleasure.....with each story having unique variants :) Surprising tale! Loved the ending....
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