Friday, February 28, 2020

The portentous giggle

(An old unfinished story edited and presented here)
Kesava Marar dabbled in a small way in stock market. He did not have much resources to invest big. He used to spend some time on most days in a broking firm and make a few hundred buying and selling the same day. Some days he would lose also. One day when he decided to invest a tidy sum on what everyone thought was a blue chip stock that was expected to zoom, he felt he heard a wisp of laughter behind his back. He turned round to see none. A fortnight later the stock crashed when there was wide exposure in media about fudging of accounts of the company and the cases filed against management.
There was a long standing dispute in the court on an ancestral property and he had spent considerable money towards lawyer and court fee. Marar was told by his lawyer his case was very strong and that judgment was to be delivered that day. He left early morning for the district court in another town. As he entered the court precincts he felt he heard again the same old giggle behind his back. Startled he turned back to see none behind. There was a lump in his throat with a tinge of fear. He hurried inside as his name was called only to get the shock of his life when the court decided against him with costs to be paid to the other party. Even as the memory of the mild laughter came sharply in his mind, a rationalist he was, he chided himself for being superstitious.
He was already 28 and his aged mom pressurized him to marry. He had a permanent job and there was no reason to put it off. When he expressed his willingness, his mother went into raptures. Soon she found a good match for him. The bride Smita was good looking, more qualified than him and had a better job. Both liked each other and agreed to marry.
It was the wedding day and there was a huge crowd of relatives and friends. The auspicious time for tying the knot had arrived and the purohit started chanting the mantra in loud voice. Even as Marar with the mangal sutra in his hands neared the bride  to tie the knots, the nadaswara vidwan (piper) played the music briskly and loudly accompanied by melam(drum). The noise was ear shattering. As Marar bent to tie the knot amidst the smiling faces that surrounded him, the poor chap felt again that he distinctly heard twice the very same mild laughter despite the noise all around. His face became pale, he started perspiring heavily and his knees seemed to go limp with fear. Urged by the purohit, he tied the thread hastily with three knots amidst the cacophony of congratulations and greetings from those around. To the bewilderment of many, the smile had faded from his face and he looked ashen as if struck by a ghost. The bride looked at him with concern. Someone brought a Pepsi.
That night when they were together in the bedroom, the young wife asked him “Can I ask you one question?”
When he nodded, Smita asked “Why did your face turn pale and you started perspiring heavily when you bent to  tie the knot. Your face was grim with no smile at that happy moment? Are you not happy with me?”
He smiled at her with effort and said “It is nothing.”
When she prodded him further, he narrated the earlier two incidents and said “I thought I heard again today the vicious laughter not once but twice behind my back just as I bent to tie the knots. That put me off.”
Smita broke into laughter and teased him saying, “How naïve and superstitious you are? I know that case of that famous company and how in collusion with promoters the accounts were fudged to present a bright picture. Not only you, I had lost quite an amount along with my dad and many of my friends. Banish such superstitious thoughts of the giggle warning only you and not thousands of others.”
“What about the dismissal of my property case?” he asked
 “The judges go by the facts of the case and concrete evidence. Where does the giggle you heard come to adversely change the case? I do not want a credulous and irrational village bumpkin for my husband. Promise me you will be a sensible and rational guy,” she remonstrated even as she embraced him running her hand on his head.
It was exactly a year later when he was anxiously waiting in the lounge, one nurse opened the door beckoning him inside. As he waited anxiously outside the delivery theatre, a glum looking nurse peeped out calling Marar.With no clue of what awaited him and with racing heart, he went in to see a smiling Smita with two babies, a girl and a boy.
 Pleasantly surprised he went near the two babies to have a look when Smita teased him by telling, “Now I know why there were two giggles instead of the usual one behind your back as you bent to tie the knot.”


27 comments:

  1. Just donno what to say. How can you be so cruel to end such a gripping story? 🤔😔😎🤣

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  2. Sir, make a variation on this based on ghosts. You do that soooo well.

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  3. Your description of characters and expressions is spot on. I can visualize the scenes in my head. Fear and superstitions can ruin someone’s life. Thankfully Marar did not let the giggle stop him from marrying a sensible girl like Smita. The giggle preceding the most momentous events in his life makes me wonder was it portentous or prophetic!!!! Interesting story written beautifully.

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  4. Marar thought was portentous but turned out to be prophetic 😉

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  5. Wonderful ending. Anything else would have spoiled the story

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  6. Beautifully narrated... It is like living the scene. Too good. Loved the twist

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  7. Haaahaaa.from an eerie beginning.what an end..when I was expecting apocalypse for Marar..this is in tune with the times we live in and the stock markets crashing.
    A cool story but did send shivers down my spine:)

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  8. Your classic style of narration with a good twist in the end. Well done, Periappa

    Take care
    Chitra Solomon

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  9. Woww...what a nice narration with such a beautiful ending adding a dash of humour...could visualize all the characters..a good read indeed..:)

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  10. Cool! Double good news then :)
    Interesting. I thought he would recover all his money from the stock-market!

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  11. Gripping story. Now, when I hear a giggle, wonder how I will react:)

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  12. He got lucky to get a sensible girl for a wife otherwise the girl would have stood up to say stop tying the mangalsutra😀 nice cute ending!

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  13. Very well narrated nd interesting story till the end written beautifully.

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  14. Never thought a harmless giggle could be so eerie!

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  15. Good ending.. glad to see a sensible person like Smita to put things in perspective for Marar!

    Vasudha

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  16. Nice ending, liked the story

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  17. When I started reading the last para of the story, I heard a mischievous giggle and then I read the rather matter-of-fact ending. Then I detected just silence all around. Superstition had made a hasty retreat.

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  18. Sometimes we imagine things vividly when our subconscious minds are expecting adverse results. That could have been his case too, but fortunately the girl he married not only managed to bring him back to his senses, but also a sense of humour into their lives. Good story, KP!

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  19. The number 13, black cats, breaking mirrors, or walking under ladders, may all be things you actively avoid but a mysterious giggle ?? Sends a chill down the spine!!

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  20. Wonderful ending.The beauty in this story is the narration. Loved it.

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  21. Very well-narrated, gripping story, Kp! Kesava must have been under stress because of the court case and it must have pushed the mind to look for some area to blame for the draw back. Mind was playing games, I feel. The twins...it was a happy incident and the giggle compensated for the earlier set backs. Now he can live ever happily...

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  22. Avery well narrated and gripping story KP!

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  23. Superstitions are nothing but joining of some select dots based on our perceptions. Try joining some other dots, and there will be not superstition.
    So much for what Marar thought was superstition.

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  24. Wow! What an end to the story! Love the twist.

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  25. Being intuitive by nature, I was expecting the story to take another turn. The charater development is fantastic. It goes ro show what a positive partner can bring to one's life. Great one, Chittappa

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