It was already past noon on a hot day and the sultry weather made it unbearably oppressive. Neela found the busy road outside neither noisy from the honking of vehicles nor did she hear the loud voices of hawkers to attract customers. Neela peeped into her mother’s room to see her sleeping soundly on the bed in the cool comfort of the AC. Neela sat quietly on the recliner by the side of the bed. It was a Saturday afternoon with no office work and she closed her eyes wishing to relax for a while. The steady and soft snore from her mother Shyamala made Neela turn to see her face.
It brought to her mind the
frequent bickering with her over what her mom perceived as her disinterest in
settling down in life. She was highly qualified and had a well-paying job. The
fact is she was in no hurry to marry and had also not found a man to her taste.
She was already 29. With the demise of Neela’s father two years back, her mom
felt responsibility had fallen on her. A month back her mother was pleading with her to allow her at least to find through
her contacts someone suitable for her leaving the final decision with Neela. She
could not bear the pathetic sight of her sobbing mother beseeching her repeatedly
and Neela in a fit of remorse agreed. Ever since the old lady was calm and
satisfied that a big hurdle had been crossed even as she spread word among her
contacts.
The sound of the doorbell woke
Neela up from her reverie and she rushed to the verandah to find a young man
standing outside with a packet.
“There is a packet for Ms.
Neela, possibly containing a book or two. I would need her signature,” he said
holding a form in his hand. He was a tall and sturdy man who looked handsome
despite his clumsy beard and drooping moustache. The dark mole on his forehead
over the eyebrow was prominent.
“I am Neela. You can give it
to me. But, are you in the habit of guessing the contents of the packets you
deliver to the customers?” she asked with a mocking smile.
“Here is the form for you to
sign. I object to the insinuation that I pry into others' packets. It was as
plain as the nose on your face that the packet contained books. You can open
and see for yourself,” he replied in feigned anger.
Aghast at the way he spoke to her but
impressed with the way he spoke in fluent English; she took the packet after
signing the form but did not allow his insolence to go unrefuted. She asked him
in an angry tone,” How dare you speak to me like this? Which courier company are you working for? I would like to speak to them. What is your name?”
“Why are you taking offence at
a simple guess and making a mountain of a molehill? Anger doesn’t suit you,
young lady,” he said with an injured innocence on his face.
Hearing the loud conversation,
Shyamala hurried to the verandah and looked at the young man and the red
motorbike parked near the gate.
“What is the problem, Neela?
Poor man, he has come in the hot sun to deliver a parcel and is perspiring all
over,” she asked.
“Amma(mom), he has the
audacity to guess the contents of the packet and when I question him, he has
the cheek to tell me that anger does not befit my face. I wish to lodge a
complaint with his company about his bad manners,” Neela spoke agitatedly.
“Calm down, Neela. I see no
great misdemeanour in his guessing the obvious content and telling you about
it. He has not opened the packet after all. When you shouted at him undeservedly,
he still paid a sort of tribute to your face by saying that anger spoils it,”
the old lady said to the chagrin of her daughter and to the surprise of the
young man.
Turning to the young man she remarked,” Your
face is familiar though I am unable to place it readily. I think it would be
best for you in your profession to speak to a minimum to the point as you are
meeting various kinds of people. By the way, you are sweating a lot. Do come inside
the verandah and have a cool drink. May I know your good name? Could it be by
any chance Sudhanva?”
He gave a surprised look at
her but drank the Coke hurriedly. “Thank you, madam, for the kindness and for
the cool drink that I badly needed as my throat was parched and dry. I like the
positive way you look at things, a rare trait these days” he said.
Turning to Neela. he said
before leaving,” I am sorry to have upset you. Please do not spoil my
livelihood by complaining to my office I hope you get another packet soon when
I can present it with greater civility and manners,”. As he closed the gate and
got on to the bike, he smiled at her waving his hand. Leela's face turned
slightly red as she watched him speed away on his bike but was confused and
curious to note that there were no other
parcels on the bike for delivery.
She opened the packet and
found to her delight two paperbacks, ‘The Winemaker’s Wife by Kristin Harmel
and Falling in Love Again by Ruskin Bond.’ What a nice choice but who could
have sent these so thoughtfully, she wondered.
Later in the day, Shyamala
told her, “I have already told you about a young man 32 years old who is coming to meet you tomorrow at 4 PM with his mother. He has a doctorate
in Economics from an American University with a diploma in management from Stanford
and is in a very good position in the US. They are happy with your profile and
like you from the photo I showed them. Please do not go out in the sun but make
yourself free for the whole Sunday.”
“Do you have his photo?” Neela
asked.
“No, you are going to meet him anyway tomorrow. I wish that both of you warm up to each other and hope this
alliance fructifies by the grace of God,” Shyamala said. After a pause, she
added, “His mother lives in our locality just two streets away and I have met
her in the park many times. It was only two weeks back I broached about my
search for a match for you when she volunteered her interest in you for her son,”
she explained.
Sharply at 4 pm the next day, a
young man with his mother and two other ladies came as promised and were
received warmly by Shyamala. Neela was in her room waiting eagerly to be
called.
After the pleasantries were
over, Neela was called to the drawing room. She entered demurely in a fine silk sari adorned with
selective jewellery. When she turned to see the young man, she was taken aback
for a moment when she saw the dark mole above his eyebrow and was struck by his similarity with the courier guy she was arguing with the day before. Otherwise,
this man was clean-shaven with well-combed hair in trousers and a casual
T-shirt of good quality. She could discern a faint smile on his face when he
looked at her. He handed her a small box with a flourish making a gratuitous
remark that he was neither aware of the content nor could he make a good guess.
Neela looked at him puzzled by
his remark bringing to memory the tussle had with the courier guy the previous
day. There is something more than what meets the eye, she thought to herself.
His mother broke the
intervening silence and asked her son,” Sudhan, have you met her earlier by any
chance the way both of you reacted to each other?”
“Let me explain, Amma, in a
while. Turning to Shyamala, he asked her “What made you ask me yesterday,
whether my name was Sudhanva?”
“I saw the name partially on a red motorbike parked
in the portico of your house when I visited your mom with the rest of the name covered by a tarpaulin. I remembered your name is Sudhanva from
the conversation I had with your mother. It is one of the thousand names of Lord
Vishnu. Hence when I saw the same red bike on which you came to deliver a
packet to Neela, I surmised it could be you in disguise trying to have a look
at her before the formal meeting. Am I right?” Shyamala explained.
“Smart lady! You are
absolutely right” exclaimed Sudhanva to the laughter of others.
He turned to Neela and asked, "What made you look at me with puzzlement?”
“Elementary, my dear Watson,
your dark mole on your forehead is a dead giveaway. By the way, I thank you for
the two excellent books I was looking to buy,” she remarked as she extended her
hand that was clasped with alacrity by Sudhanva.
Pleasant story. I love happily ever after ending!
ReplyDeleteJanardhan
Mom is quite the Sherlock!
ReplyDeleteA simple and good story with happy endings. It reminds of couple of great stories penned by you wherein you written about NRI grooms. Keep writing
ReplyDeleteMom is really very smart! I like happy ending stories, esp. romantic stories. Loved reading this and felt happy...Sandhya
ReplyDeleteA feel-good story with a romantic hero! It would be great if marriages could be arranged so easily, and girls fell for guys effortlessly.!
ReplyDeleteElgee.
Lovely story
ReplyDeleteLike the building of tension only to ease out into a pleasant ending. JJ
ReplyDeleteSimple pleasant story. Well suited for “Ek Kahani” episodes that we used to watch with pleasure in childhood days
ReplyDeleteVery nicely written. Enjoyed reading. Now off to get those two books to read.
ReplyDeleteA simple feel good story. Thank you
ReplyDeleteKeep writing 🙏
Chitra
Excellent Penn Paarkum Padalam.
ReplyDeleteI love stories with happy endings. Knowing your writing style and your love for twists in the plot, one knows Sudhanva is the prospective groom the minute he appears. But just like one can still watch a movie even though it’s clear how the story is going, it was a fun read anyway! And, Sudhanva is such a nice name!
ReplyDeleteInteresting are Shyamala's keen sense of observation and deduction, Neela's change of stance for marriage and Sudhanva's persistance to follow up his selection of bride with a cool mind.
ReplyDeleteNice.
ReplyDeleteA simple, smooth and delightful story. Eminently likable.
ReplyDelete“ There is nothing more deceptive than an obvious fact.”- is what S.Holmes wd have commented:-)
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ReplyDeleteShyamala,the cool and quite loving mother could change the timid daughter Neela in accepting Sudhanva,the graceful romantic hero. A nice, simple and happy ending tale !
Good story
ReplyDeleteGreat story :)
ReplyDeleteI knew it was him when he came for book delivery :)
Elementary, my dear Watson!
I remember this-
I had written a story where a character had a "mole" on his face - the story was published in Tinkle. A little detective heroine solves the mystery. It was also inspired by Sherlock Holmes.
A sweet story. A delightful read.
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