As the sky was cloudy, Shanmugam
wished to reach home before it got dark. He chose instead of a proper road, a shortcut
from the temple through the mini forest that saved his walk by two kilometres.
As he walked hurriedly through a narrow winding path amidst bushes, he found it
very lonely with not a soul visible. He increased the pace to get out of the
forest soonest. Luckily the sun had not yet set and it was not dark as yet.
When he turned on a bend, he
saw to his relief a little away on this desolate stretch a man
standing at the edge of the pathway looking at him. As he neared the man, he
found him to be tall, lean and dark and also appeared somewhat strange. His
face was elongated horizontally between the ears and the head above narrowed at
the top reminding of an inverted rhombus. His eyes were narrow but flitting
brightly from one side to the other.
Shanmugam felt uneasy but
still welcomed company in this deserted area.
The man saw a flask
hanging on Shanmugam’s shoulders and requested him for water. The flask
contained toddy, an intoxicating local liquor, that Shanmugam was habituated
to. He readily gave a cup. The man drank with gusto. Shanmugam became less
apprehensive of the guy and prodded him to walk faster. But he could not keep pace with Shanmugam as
he walked rather wobbly.
When they came out of the forest,
they both sat down on the mud to rest and finish the remaining drink. Both soon
became inebriated and lay on the ground prattling loudly. It was then the
strange man gave Shanmugam a marble-sized stone saying,” You have been very nice
and friendly. Keep the thing carefully for it is very precious.”
Shanmugam accepted the elliptical
stone that was covered with mud and said,” Thank you very much for the gift. My
house is nearby. Do come with me and have your dinner,”
“I will come with you up
to your place but will leave immediately without having dinner,” the man
replied.
“You must have something
to drink at least if you are not ready for dinner. What about coffee, tea or juice?
“I will have a small
quantity of cold milk. Preserve the precious stone very carefully and you will soon
be rich,” he replied.
When they reached the small
tiled building, Shanmugam’s wife saw him drunk in a dishevelled condition with
mud all over his body.
” How many times should I tell you not to
drink outside our home and drink whatever you wish to while at home? I do not
want you to fall on the road and create a scene,” she yelled at her husband
without noticing the stranger’s presence near the door.
Handing her the precious gift,
he pleaded with her, “We have a kind guest. Do not get angry and I promise not
to drink outside in future. I met him on the way from the temple and he has
given me this valuable stone that will make us rich. As it is covered with mud,
polish it gently with your sari and you will see it shining in red. Please get
him a glass of cold milk. He declined to have dinner with us.”
She hurriedly swiped the stone
with her sari and found to her amazement a gem shining a shade that was a mix
of pink and red. She rushed inside to the kitchen followed by Shanmugam to get
the milk. When they came out with a glass of milk, the stranger was not to be
seen. Wondering at his mysterious disappearance, they moved towards the front
door when they saw to their horror a long cobra slithering out through the door.
When they gasped in fear, it raised its hood and stared at them for a few
seconds before disappearing into the bushes outside.
Looking at the pinkish-red
ruby (manik) shining stone in her hand, the mysterious disappearance of the odd-looking
stranger and the appearance of a cobra with its raised hood for a brief moment at the front door,
made Shanmugam wonder aloud whether the Lord has, at last, answered his prayers. Inscrutable
are the ways of God, his wife conceded.
This story reminds me of my childhood days - reading stories from Chandamama , Ambulimama and Rathnabala magazines Stories with good religious and moral values Thank you
ReplyDeleteChitra
Interesting! The stone must be real maanikkam/ruby....He was lucky to have met with the stranger....Good times hereafter for him. Well narrated story, Kp.....Sandhya
ReplyDeleteIn my earlier days in the service at Dindigul, Ramanathapuram etc., we have been visited several times by cobra when we had some issues; they never harmed us, but distracted our attention away from the issues at hand. Mysterious are the ways of the Good Lord!
ReplyDeleteJanardhan
The story was gripping and glad you gave a happy ending .
ReplyDeleteAn interesting story. God manifests in most unexpected ways. Shanmugam is truly blessed. The narrative enables you to visualize the happening. Thanks KP SIR
ReplyDeleteInteresting. Thanks.
ReplyDeleteLove the story. Brought back so many memories. Felt like the whole story was unfolding in front of my eyes. Thank you for this story.
ReplyDeleteExperience of a simple faithful soul narrated in a delightful way.
ReplyDeleteExcellent story.
ReplyDeleteNice story. Very nicely describes- I could visualize in my head as I read. Glad to have a happy ending as always.
ReplyDeleteTruly profound. Sincere prayers will always be answered but we have to be patient enough to wait for the right timing. Beautifully written. We are blessed indeed because the story gives us hope. Ranjani Murali.
ReplyDeleteMiracles do happen and God's ways are unpredictable. Heard many such stories in our stages of life. Happy ending as ever !
ReplyDeleteYou have left the readers in absolute awe with this Gem of a story and wondering if we would get to see a sequel as to what happens next. What really stuck out ti me was the eye for details and the intricacy with which you describe the characters right from Lord Shiva to the people, brilliant!
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