This park
with its best-laid pathways for the morning walkers drew a large crowd daily
both mornings and evenings. One could see joggers running, old men and women
walking briskly, yoga sessions on green spots, children playing in the playing
area on the slides and swings and young romantic couples hiding in secluded
spots under the trees watching the ducks swimming in the large pond in the
centre. Vendors were seen busy selling to the young and old jal mudi, gol
goppas, alu tikias, ice creams of different brands and fluffy sugar candies in
pink colour.
Madhav Ji
invariably spent Sunday evenings at the park watching the people and the
playing children. The children all well-dressed from well-to-do families
flocked to the ice cream vendors and were busy buying cones and cups of ice
cream in different colours and tastes. What saddened Madhav Ji was the sight of
ill-clad poor children in tatters watching with drooling mouths from afar the
rich kids licking the cones and slurping from the cups. The hapless kids did
not approach the vendors but kept staring hungrily at the fortunate children
with mouths open. Madhav Ji had not forgotten his early childhood days in
poverty with his mom working in different households to make a living.
It was
perhaps the first Sunday he had visited the park. What he saw disturbed him and
when he found he had not brought any money with him, it upset him further that
he left the park abruptly.
The next
Sunday Madhav Ji was seen sitting in his usual place. Not yonder from him stood
one man with a tall stool with large cubes of ice covered by a gunny bag and a
carpenter tool like planer on the stool to shred the ice cubes. Mounted on his
stool was an array of bottles with coloured sugar syrups in red, yellow and
green and in different fragrances like rose, sarsaparilla, lemon, and orange.
Little
away was the ice cream vendor ringing the bell to attract the children. Soon
the rich children gathered around him buying and having cones and cups of ice cream,
Madhav ji invited the poor children to come
near him and asked them to have one or two as they desired of ice cream made of
raw ice from the man by his side. The glee in the children’s faces, looking at
the man shredding the ice, fixing it over a stick and pouring coloured syrups
of their choice, should be seen to be believed. Their joy multiplied when their
demands for repeated helpings of sugary syrups were willingly met by the man. Madhav
Ji was a picture of contentment when he saw these kids were no longer eyeing
the affluent children on the other side. Satisfied at the unexpected treat,
they all gave him a shy smile before scampering.
This
became a hardy Sunday ritual with the number of kids growing and Madhav Ji did
not mind. He surprised them frequently gifting them T-shirts, school bags, water
bottles, packets of biscuits or some such stuff. Though he did not talk to them
much, the poor children looked upon their benefactor with fondness and awe.
It was one Sunday evening Madhav Ji had not
turned up. The children were all eagerly waiting for his arrival. One of the
kids ran across the road to his palatial bungalow and saw a huge crowd of
people and an array of cars coming one after the other and stopping opposite
the house. Promptly the other children also gathered and stood at a safe
distance watching the movements. They came to know from a security guard who
was shooing them away that the old man had died of a sudden cardiac arrest in
the afternoon.
The body
was kept in the hall for the stream of distinguished visitors and relatives to
file past. It was time to leave for the crematorium. The eldest son of Madhav
Ji who knew his dad’s fondness for the poor children and his Sunday trysts with
them asked the security to send them in to have one last look at their patron.
It was a
measure of Madhav Ji’s compassion when the visitors saw a huge retinue of
poorly dressed children walking past the body in tears and uncontrollable sobs.
“You cannot do a kindness too soon, for you never know how soon it will be too late.” Ralph Waldo Emerson
A beautiful story. Much needed one in this current world. Thank you 🙏
ReplyDeleteChitra
Very touching but predictable!
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Hemantha Kumar Pamarthy
Excellent story. Too bad he had to die at the end.
ReplyDeleteGenuine empathy and generosity much needed nowadays . A feel good story though tinged with sadness . Hopefully the son would continue his father’s kindness
ReplyDeleteI can imagine the park scenes frame by frame the way you narrated. Beautiful,one can understand With a small kind gesture how many hearts you can win
ReplyDeleteBeautiful mama. You narrated the story as if you were sitting in a park and watching such incident
ReplyDeleteSimple and poignant. Reminds us of the line, "Who will cry once you doe?"
ReplyDeleteMoral of the story : Nothing is permanent, situation is bound to change sooner or later. Do good not expecting return favours,will get a berth to the heavens as already destined by the Almighty!
ReplyDeleteHow vividly you capture scenes that are so relatable :)
ReplyDeleteAnd connecting it to Emerson’s quote! Wow!
- Srinivasan Raghavan
Children deserve kindness in every possible way and the best start in life.
ReplyDeleteWonderful and practical story.Such incidents are happening in all our lives.
ReplyDeleteA beautiful story. A little kindness takes us a long way in life, what could be small for us would mean the world for the benefactors. Loved thd gesture of the boys and Madhav's son.
ReplyDeleteThe Palatial House and the well maintained Park and the drama unfolded there look like watching a movie where a scene of hyper emotions of joy and misery in quick succession . The director ( Author here), sum up it all an apt quote from R W Emersion. Really great Sri KP. Waiting for the next show !
ReplyDeletePoignant and a very timely message that sets the tone for the day, . I like the title Defer not....
ReplyDeleteWhat a poignant story wonderfully depicted!! It is indeed true that good gestures however small are accepted by children wholeheartedly and be satisfied by it. An adult would calculate and ask for the ice creams which the rich children were enjoying next to them. The last sentence about al huge line of those poor children walking past the body in tears shows how much they enjoyed the golas generously donated by Madhavji.
ReplyDeleteA tale told in a simple way to exemplify the tagline
ReplyDeleteInteresting and touching. Seems to be real life story.
ReplyDeleteVery nice and touching thanks.ramakrishnan.a.
ReplyDeleteSuch a touching story.
ReplyDeleteApt quote at the end.
How many people think- "Who will cry when I die?"
A very sweet heartwarming story, no act of kindness ever goes untouched :)
ReplyDeleteIt is a beautiful and moving story. Your description of vivid pictures in the park is great. As a kind hearted person's gesture of love towards the poor children fills the heart with satisfaction, the sad ending makes one be pensive.
ReplyDeleteThank you for the story GP ..
touching story
ReplyDeleteVery touching story. Compassion is a universal emotion to which everyone responds and more so, small kids.
ReplyDeleteThe above under anonymous is from me
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