(A story that will leave a smile in your face)
It was a day care for
kids. With more than a dozen kids in her care, Lolita was busy daily except
weekends. She had a young maid to assist her. The toddlers and
children came around 8 am and were picked up by 3 pm by one of their parents..
There were many toys, dolls, building blocks, toy trains and even a play
area with slides and swings. They were given materials for drawing, colouring,
and picture books for reading. They could play till 11 am when they have
something to eat and then sleep for two hours on the beds assigned to
each. Though noisy, the kids were generally obedient and never threw
any tantrums. They may sometimes resist eating or going to bed but they typically
yield to gentle persuasion.
Lolita’s neighbour Agnes came this morning with Peter and requested, " Lolita,
I have to leave in a short while on some urgent work to the next town and
expect to return by 5 pm. My husband is on tour. My maid has
played truant today. Would it be possible for you to take care of Peter in my
absence? I am sure he would not give you trouble.”
However, Peter
demonstrated his unwillingness to stay with Lolita. He snuggled
close to Agnes preventing her from leaving till he finally relented after
she sat by his side cajoling and pampering him.
Lolita
knew from his face that he had not taken kindly to her. He didn’t mingle with
other children even when they exhibited interest in playing with him. He stood
glum for a while as he stood uncertainly. Tears were in the corner of
his eyes as he looked at the closed front door. This is perhaps the first time Agnes
had left him behind.
The other
children were enjoying playing games or sliding or swinging. Some were busy colouring the
pages. One boy climbed up the stairs two or three steps and jumped down.
Suddenly Peter jumped on the sofa standing on his legs.
“Peter,
get down, dear. No standing on the sofa. They will get dirty” Lolita
said, her voice gentle but firm.
She
sighed when he ignored her and bounced on the sofa like a madcap. The rest of
the children stopped playing and watched curiously with subdued mirth at his
disobedience. Lolita obviously could not permit this defiance in front of other
toddlers. She grabbed him by his ear and brought him down.
He went
near the front door with a mournful look that showed hostility. He did not
respond when the kids called him. Lolita decided she would no longer agree
to keep him. She was after all doing this day care work as social service to the
community.
When it
was time for a food break Lolita kept some food and milk. While most children
ate with relish, some did unwillingly with grim faces. But no one refused
except Peter. He would not touch the food and instead turned his face towards
the door expecting Agnes to return. When Lolita forced him, he scampered
around and spilt the milk on the floor. Lolita turned towards the children and
asked them to go to the main hall. She forced Peter to stay back.
“C’mon,
Peter, I say eat the food kept for you. You are spoiling other children with
your bad behaviour.” Lolita, who was normally patient with children, sighed in
dismay at Peter's testing her patience to her limit.
He kept
mum even after repeated cajoling. She did not get the obvious hint, that he
was unhappy to be here and wanted to return to his home. There
was nothing she could do to make him eat. It was time for sleep. While
some children went to sleep promptly, a few pretended to sleep while watching
Peter through the corners of their eyes.
It was
around 2 pm the buzzer rang. Surprised who it could be so early, Lolita went to
open the door with Peter following her. On seeing Agnes enter, Peter
leapt into her arms, tail wagging furiously, his bark ‘bow-wow…bow-wow, echoing
through the quiet daycare. Agnes knelt to rub his belly, and Lolita could only
stare, her exhaustion finally giving way to a rueful smile. Lolita heaved
a great sigh of relief and turned to Peter only to see the hostility had
vanished and his tail wagged happily.
This is SWEET! The ending IS the story! A Very pleasant twist!
ReplyDeleteThis surely did make me smile, loved the unexpected twist. Vivid description of the situation makes one actually feel/live it.
ReplyDeleteVery nice. Ramakrishnan.
ReplyDeleteA lovely twist that is very pleasant. Really left a smile to remember.
ReplyDeletePleasant story. Surely I had a smile by the end!@
ReplyDeleteJanardhan N
You kept the secret till the end. Nice one. It is highly admirable that your horizon of story is boundless. Your prescription of one story at least in 2 days is good for keeping the readers spirit well. Thanks and regards. PKR
ReplyDeleteAn unexpected ending. Very nice twist
ReplyDeleteChitra
The ending was a real surprise. Liked it very much.
ReplyDeleteGood ending. Happy surprise. Regards - Mahesh
ReplyDeleteUnexpected ending giving a warm fuzzy feeling to the story.
ReplyDeleteLakshmi Srinivasan
End unexpected. Nice story!
ReplyDeleteAn absolute 'swell'!
ReplyDeleteLovely story, 100% KP vintage style!
ReplyDeleteBeautiful story with a warm ending. And one goes back to read it all again with a smile! Harini
ReplyDeleteHappy end. But it requires lot of patience.
ReplyDeleteBeatiful happy story... Never expected this happy twist😍😍Sandhya
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