Saturday, June 7, 2025

Whose baby is Neeraja carrying? (236 words)

“Vinitha, are you aware that Neeraja eloped with her lover last evening?” asked Mohana, eyes wide with excitement. Both were in their early thirties, living in the same apartment complex.

“What? How come?” Vinitha gasped. “She seemed like such a decent girl. Barely married a year! And her husband looked like a nice guy, too.”

“How would I know?” Mohana shrugged. “Maybe she was forced into the marriage. Parents push these things.”

Vinitha frowned. “Still, once you’re married, shouldn’t you cut ties with your past, especially an old lover?”

Mohana sighed. “Who cares about all that now? I’ve seen him visiting her a few times. Old values are turning completely upside down.”

Vinitha leaned closer and whispered, “Between us, I must admit—her lover was incredibly handsome. Like a desi Tom Cruise! Her husband, on the other hand… ugh, he looked awfully ugly. If I were in her place, I might’ve run too!”

Mohana burst out laughing. “Wait till you hear this. Neeraja, I heard  she is pregnant!”

“What?” Vinitha almost dropped her teacup. “Whose child could it be?”

Just then, the sound of a car horn blared outside.

“Oh my god, that’s my husband,” Vinitha said, jumping up. “I’ve got to make his coffee, otherwise he would get upset. I’m dying to hear the rest, though! Ever since that financial scam arose, I’ve missed my serials. He’s always glued to the only TV we have!”

 

20 comments:

  1. Humorous and relatable glimpse into the world of neighborhood gossip, highlighting how easily speculation and judgment can arise from limited information. The characters' reactions, particularly Vinitha's evolving perspective, add a touch of irony and human nature to the narrative.
    Janardhan N

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  2. It brings out that the TV serials are nothing but gossip

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  3. Or is it actually a soap they are watching:)

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  4. What a humorous read! The way the gossip built up had me totally hooked.I was totally pulled into the drama and mystery as to whose baby it was. That’s when the twist was woven in. So good! Realizing it was just a TV serial made it even better. Felt super real, like something you’d overhear over afternoon tea. Loved how naturally it all came together

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  5. Looks like Auto Rickshaw driver Vadivelu comedy. 4 iyer Mamis force auto driver Vadivelu to drive faster telling they wanted to be with the pregnant girl when the complicated delivery takes place. It ended that complicated delivery was in a TV serial and these 4 Mamis did not want to miss the TV serial.

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  6. A humorous one beautifully depicting the addiction of our women to TV serials. As I read, was wondering where this going till the twist arrived. Whew how you twist&turn your stories.

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  7. Typical judgemental gossip of no value. It might be on TV. But it is very much part of reality as well.

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  8. For nothing that it ( TV)has earned the name " Idiot Box". Indeed, a humorous read.

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  9. Humorous gossip. The last minute twist was the highlight. Part of our reality in our society

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  10. How tv serials addictions influence their gossip mindsets! Ha ha ha ha

    Chitra

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  11. Nice flow—felt real and fun to read!
    Mohan

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  12. Very beautifully written, keeping the suspense that it was a serial the women were discussing till the end! Very apt for the times. TV serials rule the lives of most people, especially women and the elderly. I have seen an elderly couple actually fight over the possible outcomes of an upcoming episode. -- Thangam

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  13. A very interesting story with twist at the end. A TV Serial!! Atin Biswas

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  14. 😂😂👏🏽

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  15. An absolute masterpiece, igniting wild imaginations of the readers. This bears to reason - length of comments on the story far exceeding the story length itself!

    As for me, the women's gossip is a piece, having nothing to do with watching TV! This is where the author's ingenious creativity unfolds in full effulgence! Bravo@

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  16. typical gossip mongers....Sandhya

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  17. Nice.ramakrishnan.

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  18. I anticipated the end , somehow. But I read and re-read . But i can not pinpoint anything that's a give away . Goodread.

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  19. Nice. :) Short stories seem to really be your forte. You are extremely creative with them :) Thank you for sharing.

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  20. Love that even with such a short story, you were able to set up a scene that got me wrapped up in and not expecting the end!

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