Monday, August 25, 2025

A Kindness at Katpadi (721 words)

 

At Katpadi Junction, the first departure bell had just rung.

An elderly woman, nearly seventy-five, sat clutching a small cloth bag. She turned to the passenger beside her and asked him in a trembling voice,

“Son, this train goes to Bangalore, doesn’t it?”

The man looked at her in alarm.

“No, Patti (Grandmother)! This train goes to Mangalore, not Bangalore. Be quick, where’s your luggage? You must get down right away. Come, let me help you.”

Before she could gather her thoughts, he had lifted her physically down, along with her cloth bag and a small suitcase, onto the platform. The whistle blew, the engine roared, and the train pulled out, leaving the old woman standing bewildered with her luggage on the long  platform.

Her heart sank. Her grandson had, by mistake, put her on the wrong train. Never in her life had she travelled alone. Now she found herself stranded in an unfamiliar station. The platform grew emptier by the minute. Fear rose in her throat, and her eyes blurred with tears.

Just then, a young porter approached, his voice gentle.

Pattiamma, shall I carry your luggage to the waiting hall? Are you expecting someone to meet you?”

She shook her head and spoke in panic.

“No… a mistake has happened. Instead of the Bangalore train, my grandson put me on the wrong train. My son-in-law would be waiting for me at the Bangalore station. Is there another train right away? Please help me onto it, God will bless you abundantly.”

The porter’s face softened.

“Pattiamma, there is no Bangalore train just now. Don’t worry. I’ll inform the Station Master. Till then, sit here. You are wearing gold jewels. Keep your jewels covered as much as possible, don’t talk to or follow any strangers.”

She nodded weakly. “I’ll wait here.. Please go quickly.”

A little while later, the Station Master himself came walking towards her. His voice was calm, reassuring.

“Amma, you seem to have boarded the wrong train and landed here. At your age, such journeys are not to be taken alone. Do you have your daughter’s number in Bangalore? Or your son-in-law’s?”

With trembling hands, Patti opened the small pouch tied at her waist and handed him a folded slip of paper. On it were her daughter’s address and phone number.

The Station Master, Mr. Manickam, took her to his room, along with the porter. He called the number immediately and spoke to her daughter about her mother’s safe presence at the station, explaining how he had planned to resolve the problem. “Please hold the line and listen.’

He turned to the old woman and spoke. “Amma, you are pretty lucky despite the goof-up by your grandson. By God’s grace, you are in safe hands. My own son and daughter-in-law are leaving shortly in their car for Bangalore. Since they live in Banashankari, they will drop you safely at your daughter’s home in Jayanagar. Don’t worry. If you agree, I’ll send you with them.”

On the other end of the line, her daughter was moved to tears.

“Do such good people still walk this earth? I don’t know how to thank you, sir. Truly, God Himself has come in your form. My mother doesn’t eat outside food. Can you please buy her some bananas and a bottle of water? She will pay you. And may I speak to her for a moment?”

When Patti heard her daughter’s voice, her eyes brimmed again.

“Amma, the Station Master has spoken to me. Don’t worry. Come along with his son and his wife. I’ll be waiting for you. Give him money for fruits and water.”

From her pouch, she pulled out a hundred-rupee note and handed it to the porter, who helped her initially.

She turned to the Station Mister and said, “Be well, my son. May your life be filled with blessings. Kindly accept the cost of the fruits and the water bottle,” as she opened her purse.

But Manickam shook his head gently but firmly.

“Amma, as you said, I am like your own son. I want no money. Go freshen up. In ten minutes, my boy and his wife will be here. By evening, you will be home, safe in Bangalore. Ask your daughter to inform me about your arrival. Truly, by God’s grace, all has ended well.”

 

27 comments:

  1. Nice. A feel good story to focus on goodness and kindness.

    Chitra

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  2. Good story. Ramakrishnan.

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  3. Such acts of kindness are from a different world, Mama. But glad to read words of optimism in the wee hours of the morning.

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  4. The old lady has been lucky all along , from the fellow passenger, the porter and even to the helpful station master !

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  5. A feel good story. Do good and it cones back to you in any way whatsoever. In a world where people take advantage of our helplessness, Manickam, the porter & fellow passenger are a blessing.

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  6. Simple. No teist?

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  7. God's grace that Patimma came across extraordinarily good, helpful person one after another. .... Good start for the day......Meka

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  8. What a pleasant feeling after reading two stories successively -A journey not made and a journey made - God's grace and presence revealed under unexpected circumstances.

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  9. I was expecting an abandoned lady by her callous son, but it turned out something else. Still, how could someone make such a mistake, especially while sending an elderly lady alone? But the title is very apt. Kindness comes in so many forms and persons! -Thangam

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  10. Very interesting story.. One must do always good to others.
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  11. This beautiful story reaffirms that the world is very much a livable place because Good Samaritans like the Katpadi Railway Station Master are still around.

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  12. A Very nice story, bringing out innate goodness in people, most specially when help is extended to the elderly hapless souls.

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  13. Felt very happy reading a positive story! Pattima is lucky to have landed near the good people ...very rarely we come across people like them.....Sandhya

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  14. A feel-good story without the customary twist! The world can do with more good people like these.. unfortunately we are unable to trust anyone who offers such help and the old lady was just plain lucky to have found the right people.

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  15. As the Paatti's daughter spoke to the station master, do such good souls are around these days. Certainly God comes through some form and help his bakthas. Very good ending. Shudder to think about what would have happened otherwise. Happy to read this short story.

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  16. Very interesting. Reminds me of a real life story. An old lady missed the train and was waiting at Allahabad station. A porter and station master asked where she was going. She told she was going to Delhi to meet her son. They asked her what is her son's name and what does he do. She said my son works in the railways and his name is Lal Bahadur Shastri. The whole station was turned upside down.

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  17. A simple story well narrated.. no twists and turns but brings out the fact that the world after all has good folks. The Patti was lucky too , to not fall in the hands of some bad guy who would have robbed her of her belongings and left her high and dry. All’s well that ends well! And Luck was on the side of the Patti.

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  18. Such a heartwarming story! Short, sweet, and full of humanity. Loved how kindness and compassion shone through, right from the helpful stranger to the porter and the Station Master. Restores faith that good people are always around.

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  19. No twists or turnings for s change Straight forward story

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  20. Good one. A positive story. It's true that there are plenty of good and kind people around. May be they are few. We need to count on them. And two, we need to pass on the deed to others by being good and kind.
    (My latest post: Real-world lessons from younger folks)

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  21. Acts of kindness are inherent in Man , fostering a cycle of goodwill and positive feelings for both the giver and recipient. While not visible normally, these underlying human tendencies contribute to the well-being of the society and can be seen in unexpected quarters.

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  22. When you expect the unexpected..bang comes one with simple and uncomplicated plot with abundant kindness and goodness personified

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  23. I was expecting a twist at the end that would have twisted the whole story on its head…. Deepak

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  24. Truly a sweet, heartwarming story :) Thank you for sharing :)

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  25. Touching story which tell us there is humanity around us

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  26. A feel good story!👍

    Best wishes and warm regards
    Hemantha Kumar Pamarthy

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