Ambuja wore a worried look as she brought her young and beautiful 20-year-old daughter to the doctor’s apartment on the upper floor of her building.
The doctor, past 70 years,
had closed his regular practice and confined himself to advising some of his
longtime clients when approached. He charged no fees and kept a donation box
marked boldly FOR CHARITY for the clients to drop whatever they thought fit.
A highly respected and popular person, he was known for his kindness.
The doctor emerged from
the examination room, his expression grim.
“Eight weeks,” he said
quietly.
Ambuja gasped. “Oh my God.
She’s never been left alone without one of us. She’s such a sweet, innocent
child. Barely knows anything! I didn’t even let her watch adult movies. How
could this happen?”
The doctor shrugged. “How
would I know? There’s an old saying you must have heard, “With dogs around,
the bitch is never safe.”
“She never had a
boyfriend. She never dated anyone. I’m sure of it!”
“That’s what she told you.
Were you following her every time she stepped out?”
Ambuja’s face wrinkled.
“She’s in her final year of college. A baby will ruin everything, her future,
our family’s reputation. Please, Doctor… do something. I beg you.”
“Alright,” he said,
softening. “Send her in. I’ll speak to her.”
A few minutes later, the
daughter stepped out and motioned her mother inside.
The doctor met Ambuja’s
eyes and spoke gently. “I’ve spoken to her. Brace yourself. It’s your
neighbour’s son. They’ve been in love for some time, meeting whenever they
could. They didn’t expect this. He wants to marry her. He’s just finished his
final management course. I know his family—they were my patients too.”
Ambuja stiffened.
“Shakunthala’s son? That wily woman has always been jealous of me, of our
wealth. This is her ploy to grab everything through her son! No, I don’t want
this baby. You must terminate it. Do whatever it takes.”
“It’s not that simple.
It’s illegal at this stage without medical grounds, and even then, I’d need the
young man’s consent. Talk to your neighbour, bring them here with your
daughter. We’ll see what’s possible.”
He added gently, “And for
the record, Shakunthala’s family is quite wealthy. I doubt she’s after your
assets. Perhaps she’s just envious that you have a beautiful, talented daughter
while she has only a son.”
The next evening, both
mothers arrived at the clinic with their children and a basket full of fruits.
“Doctor,” said Ambuja with
a nervous smile, “We had a long, honest talk. Shakunthala’s son and my daughter
are truly in love. Our families are compatible, and we’ve spoken to our
husbands. We’ve decided, they’ll be engaged soon.”
Shakunthala nodded in
agreement.
“Wonderful news!” said the
doctor. “When’s the wedding?”
“Soon, but only after we
take care of the baby situation,” said Ambuja. “They aren’t ready for children
yet. They plan to travel, maybe on a long honeymoon. They want the pregnancy
terminated.”
“I need to hear it from
all of you: is this marriage final and non-negotiable?”
All four nodded in unison.
“It’s final.”
Suddenly, the doctor burst
out laughing. The two mothers looked bewildered.
What’s so funny, Doctor?”
asked Shakunthala.
“You’ll have to forgive
me,” he said, chuckling. “I was part of a drama… scripted by your children.”
The women stared.
“They were terrified to
tell you the truth about their relationship, knowing the distrust and dislike between
you. So, they came to me with a plan. No, your daughter is not pregnant. I
never examined her. She just wanted me to say ‘Eight weeks’ to bring a sense of
urgency.”
“You mean…” Ambuja
stammered.
“I never violated my
ethics. I didn’t lie to your daughter or examine her. I simply told you what
she asked me to tell you. The rest? It was all you. But it worked, didn’t it?”
There was a long pause.
Then Shakunthala let out a reluctant laugh. Ambuja followed, shaking her head.
“Kids these days,” she
muttered.
The doctor smiled. “As
they say, all’s well that ends well.”

Really enjoyed this! Really enjoyed this! The fake pregnancy twist was super funny, and the doctor going along with it was perfect. The ending made me laugh!
ReplyDeleteI expected this ending half way thru. But in real life Ambuja would angrily blurt out "You think breaking your mother’s heart is funny?"
ReplyDeleteIt is funny if it happens in someone else's house. Not in your family.
ReplyDeleteReally very good story. Ramakrishnan.
ReplyDeleteA good one. A clever ploy by the youngsters to rope in the doc and get the their parents assent. As you conclude... all is well that ends well
ReplyDeleteStrange are the ways of youngsters. Both mothers had a reluctant laugh, and fathers kept an irreverent silence. And for the reader, " All is well that ends well", 'cause he lost nothing but enjoyed a beautiful Story.
ReplyDeleteSince it ended on a very happy note, eminently liked the tense family drama presented in the story as a reader! Frankly, in a real-life situation like this, wouldn't feel much comfortable at all to be in the shoes of the mothers! All the same, it would have been a great fun to be a part of the team of the 'conspirators'!
ReplyDeleteSuch incidents have been happening since time immemorial. The innocence of traditional ploys of yesteryears have given way to open and brash moves recently, with parents being just abject bystanders. All this in the name of Freedom and Rights! Unfortunate.
ReplyDeleteA heartwarming tale where love didn’t just blossom between two souls, but was tenderly nurtured by the co‑conspirators who believed in their story, making the happy ending all the more beautiful!
ReplyDeleteSurprise twist in the end!!
ReplyDeleteNice, simple and witty... With sweet drama...
ReplyDeleteAs usual fantastic . Enjoyed .
ReplyDeleteA very clever ploy in the story, but not sure it would be a happy ending in real life.
ReplyDeleteHa ha..very good idea to young people in love to set their marriage
ReplyDeleteWOW,Just say Eight Weeks and mind starts wondering
ReplyDeleteNice Story