Swetha, I am having
high fever and shivering since the evening. Can you please come for a few
minutes to help me”? She deleted that also
Arun was living in the
adjacent block in the same Purva Mantri complex. She never met him after they
broke up. She was happily married to Suresh, both in the same IT line but in
different offices. He was aware of Swetha’s past friendship with Arun and why
they broke up. Her parents never liked Arun from day one; his parents had
separated and married again, and he belonged to a different community with
different eating habits. It was only after striking a friendship with him that
she came to know he had had many girlfriends and ditched them one after the
other whenever a better one came along. She had observed his roving eyes and
decided to sever her relationship, much to his annoyance.
He was now pleading sick
and needed help. It could be a ruse, but what if it were true, she wondered.
Maybe she could go and size up the situation and have a doctor called or have
him admitted to the ER. But what deterred her was that it was past 730 pm and
he was alone in his apartment. Further, Suresh had gone for a party and was
expected only around 11 pm. She gave him a ring, but there was no response.
When she finally went to Arun's place, the door was not locked. She gently opened the door to find him
lying on the sofa in the drawing hall. He had a pillow and had covered himself
with several bed sheets and a blanket. The light was on, as also the TV on subdued
volume.
“What happened, Arun? “she
asked
“Since evening, I have
been having terrible shivering, body pain, and I think I have a fever”
“Why didn’t you go to the
doctor? Have you eaten anything?”
“I took a paracetamol and
hoped it would subside. I haven’t taken any food. Tell me if I have a fever.”
She felt his forehead and
found it warm. She also noticed an electric warmer by his side to keep him from
shivering. “Okay, let me heat some milk and give you along with bread”
She went inside, boiled
the milk and came with a tray containing a glass of milk and toasted bread.
He ate the bread and drank
the milk. “I am having a splitting headache. Would it be too much to ask you to
press my forehead?”
I may have to hurry up as
my husband will be back anytime. I will press for a few minutes.” She sat in a
chair and pressed his forehead as he kept looking at her with a wry smile on
his face.
Suddenly, he said, “I wish
we had not broken up. At least you can keep visiting me once in a while”
She abruptly got up and
said, “I am leaving. There is no point in discussing the past and that it is
best we do not meet. I came only because you said you were unwell”.
As she was walking back to her block, she saw Suresh coming towards her to her surprise and shock.
“The security in our block
told me he saw you walking hurriedly towards the adjacent block. So, I came
looking for you. What was it and whom did you visit?”
She narrated to him all that had happened and that she left him as he was feeling better. As they were
climbing the stairs to their apartment, there was a beep on her mobile. She
turned to her husband and said, “It is again from him asking me to come urgently.
We are not going. Let him take the help of security”
Suresh said, “No, let us
go and have a look. In case he needs medical help, let us take him to the ER”
This time the door was
locked, and after they pressed the bell, he opened the door and said to Suresh
with a big laugh, “What a surprise to see you also along with Swetha”
The sofa was clean with no
pillows or blankets. There was a beer bottle with a glass on the table. The
TV was on. There was no evidence of his sickness, and he was in T shirt and
well-groomed hair. Suresh looked at Swetha questioningly.
“Arun, when I came here a
few minutes back, you were shivering and said you had fever. You had covered yourself
with many bed sheets and blankets. You said you had taken paracetamol. I boiled
milk for you and gave you with bread. How come you seem ok in a few minutes?
Why did you text me to come urgently?”
“Who's unwell, me? Are you
daydreaming? You came to spend some time with me, saying your husband had gone
out. You left abruptly, and so I sent a message asking whether you would like
to come again if free”
“You dirty liar”, exploded
Swetha and dragged Suresh to the kitchen to show the vessel in which she had
boiled milk. The sink was dry and clean with no vessels. She was dumbfounded
and crying fell on the chest of Suresh, telling him, “Trust me, He is lying to
sow a doubt in your mind”
Suresh led her out of the
house, even when Arun was having a mischievous sneer on his face. On the way to
their apartment, he consoled her and said, “I trust you implicitly. I know he
is a scoundrel. Never go to his place again.”
It was two days later that
Swetha went to her parents' place on a Sunday. When she returned in the
evening, there was a commotion outside Arun’s block. When she went to her
apartment, Suresh said, “Do you know Arun had committed suicide? I heard that
he did it, possibly consuming sleeping tablets along with beer. Serves him
right, isn’t it?”
When she turned to look at
her husband, she saw a happy smirk on his face.
Confused, she walked to
the kitchen. As she opened the fridge to take milk for making tea, she froze.
The beer bottle she had at the bottom rack was missing.

A good one. I loved the twist. In my.mind, wondering how devious people like Arun can be and the complicity of Suresh . Maybe to ensure Swetha's safety, he resorted to such an act or otherwise.
ReplyDeleteMy god..the husband had a background role in his death..cruel!
ReplyDeleteThe narration of the story is very good. The twist too
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ReplyDeleteBy that act, Suresh has ruined his wife Shwetha's life too! It won't be long before the truth comes out.
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I liked the duality of her husband's personality! Great story, Mama!
ReplyDeleteThe beautiful narration made the story very very interesting! Arun deserved it! Suresh could have taken some other step to punish Arun. The doubt will harm his future. But this is a story and a very good one.....Sandhya
ReplyDeleteInteresting twist. Felt like a movie plot. Makes me wonder if in real life people will really go to that extent- both the guy pretending to be sick and then clearing everything before the husband came, or the husband putting sleeping pills in the beer. Nice read, nevertheless.
ReplyDeleteThrilling narration!!
ReplyDeleteA gripping tale effortlessly told as to how one psychopath outmaneuvred another one!
ReplyDeleteStealth and showmanship in love have for ever been themes in even normal day-to-day life, and to couch them in captivating narration has equally been an area of prolific storytelling. This one takes the cake in it's simple and yet brilliant script! And yet, Swetha as the choice of name for the central character is poignant! Absolutely lovely!
ReplyDeleteDo men, in general, exhibit higher levels of suspiciousness or paranoia in particular , linked to lower emotional irrational behaviour? Be it a jilted lover or a possessive husband, he might be more competitive and perceive other men as rivals, especially in contexts involving romantic interests, potentially leading to heightened suspicion and extreme violence.
ReplyDeleteOh no😱
ReplyDeleteThrilling prose! (JJ)
ReplyDeleteLoved the twist at the end!
ReplyDeleteWow! How in the world do you come up with such twists! Brilliant read :)
ReplyDeleteThank you Sowmya.P
DeleteLovely twist to the story
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