The show was scheduled to begin at 6 pm. Uttara clutched two tickets in
her hand for this film that she had waited for a long time. All tickets have
been sold out, and the theatre was filling up fast. She was standing at the
entrance for her brother to join her. She was surprised when her brother,
unusually, asked her in the morning to come in a blue dress. However, she
respected his wish by choosing a gorgeous blue sari.
He had promised to be there at 5.45 pm sharp. There was no trace
of him. It was 6 pm and the bell had rung. Just then, her mobile came alive. It
was her brother pleading inability to be present as his boss had detained him
on urgent work. ” Uttara, I am sorry. Never mind the extra ticket. Please go in
and watch the film. Hurry up lest you miss opening scenes,” her brother
implored.
Disappointed, she turned towards the hall. At that moment, one young
man came rushing to her and said, “Sorry, madam, I see two tickets in your
hand. Evidently, your friend had not turned up. Can I use the spare ticket? I
will pay even double the cost. I could not book in advance as I came to this
city only this morning.”
She looked at him. He was a tall, well-dressed and handsome fellow and
seemed well educated.” By all means, you can come. The ticket would have gone
to waste anyway. You don’t need to pay. Just come along”, she said with a
smile.
They found their seats in the dark. The picture had just started. A
soft fragrance from his perfume gently drifted towards her. It was very
soothing and light. He looked good. Would he be an unattached single, she
wondered. Unexpectedly, his hand brushed her hand on the common side rest. She
instinctively pulled away her hand and made sure not to use the side rest.
After a few minutes, he mumbled, “I am sorry my hand came in touch with
yours inadvertently.
“Never mind. It happens by mistake,” she replied
When the intermission lights were switched on, he turned to her and
said with an innocent smile,” I am Surinder from Hyderabad. I arrived in
Bangalore this morning for work and will be staying here for a week at Hotel
Stay Longer. I am an engineer working for an MNC”
“I am Uttara. I am a software analyst. My brother was to join me, but
could not. Lucky that ticket was not wasted and you could come,” she replied
“You consider it lucky. I think that I am lucky too to find a gracious
new friend,” he said.
There was no conversation thereafter as both watched the film till the end. Surinder then turned to her and said, "I have a request.
Can we have something to eat at the big restaurant opposite the theatre, a small recompense for your kindness?"
She smiled shyly with a nod.
That night, as Uttara entered her brother’s room, she heard him talking
and stopped to listen, ” Surinder, it is good that our ploy worked. You
could easily identify her in the blue dress. My God, I didn't expect that you
would so quickly cast a spell on her, making her agree to eat with you in a
restaurant. A lucky bloke you are. She is a gem of a lady for
you."
She realised now why her brother wanted her to dress in blue
Uttara heard her brother laughing as he listened to Surinder and
exclaimed suddenly with uproar, "You wish to meet her again to take things
forward. Ok, let me talk to her and wangle an invite for her birthday party
tomorrow."
Uttara moved away before her brother came out, wondering at the likely
denouement.

A simple story. Nice
ReplyDeleteAlso , I learnt couple of new words from the story. Thank you.
Chitra
"With every new person, a world of possibilities opens."
ReplyDeleteVery nice story
ReplyDeleteIt is a good story. A brother arranging a date for his sister like this is not possible in earlier days. These days, yes, it is possible.
ReplyDeleteA clever ploy, that left her absolutely tickled pink!
ReplyDeleteWhat a title to the story! The bolt was aimed at the blue, which was the nut into which the bolt had to fit! This is such a unique combination! Can't applaud the creativity of the author enough! JUST LOVELY
ReplyDeleteBeautiful story and the characters coming alive as always..felt the title to be a misnomer as I expected something untoward and shocking to happen but this was like and they lived happily ever after;)
ReplyDeleteThe phrase “ a bolt from the blue” is commonly used to express an unexpected surprise. Watch the word surprise. It is not a shock though many use it in the negative sense also.
DeleteI used the phrase to connect with the blue colour that played a part in the story. Thanks for the kind comment.
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Enjoyed reading this beautifully narrated simple story! They will be good pair.....Sandhya
ReplyDeleteA nice story with a clever ploy. All is well that ends well.
ReplyDeleteWhen the brother asked her to wear blue I suspected the story would go in this direction. A fun read, nevertheless! Proud of our very own family Shashi Tharoor!
ReplyDeleteA nice read :) Thank you for sharing
ReplyDeleteWhat an ingenious ploy by a loving brother to fix a match for his sister!
ReplyDeleteAlong with the lead character Uttara, this reader also fell hook, line and sinker for the utterly clever but a very decent plan!
Time is on its relentless march and the parents and grandparents has hung up the boots and is more relaxed nowadays. Uttara's brother has taken over and could arrange a suitable partner to her happiness. It's a time to revel in their smiles, and generally enjoy their innocence. Appreciate the writer's experiment in creating a new story and move with the GenNext.
ReplyDeleteHe thought he is helping his sister by arranging a blind date. I think he may have crossed a line by not checking with her first. Thankfully, it all turned out for the best.
ReplyDeleteYou are an expert at such feel good stories !
ReplyDeleteA sweet short feel good story.
ReplyDeleteRegards PKR
Good intention, not so good method. Many an Uttara would be annoyed enough to move on from Surinder. (JJ)
ReplyDeleteHappy to know Brother is interested in her Life.
ReplyDeleteLovely
The moment the blue saree stuff came into the picture, the cat jumped out of the bag. The story could hold no further serious interest for me!
ReplyDeleteBest wishes and warm regards
Hemantha Kumar Pamarthy