Nagaraj was held up in the city till late at night. The deal could not be clinched easily, as negotiations proved tough and lengthy. It was only when Nagaraj mentioned that it was getting very late and his home was far away that the other party relented and agreed to meet two days later.
It was already 11 pm, and
it would take an hour or more to reach home. He was very hungry and luckily
found a wayside eatery close by. He had Chole Bhature with a large cup of
strong tea. It was nearing 12 when he started the motorbike, and he knew his wife would
remain awake waiting for him. He wished to reach home early.
The road soon stretched
into a lonely, unlit path. Its poor condition prevented him from riding fast.
Tall trees crowded both sides, their branches blocking out the moon and
deepening the darkness. Though Nagaraj had travelled this road many times, even
late at night, an uneasy feeling crept over him. To worsen matters,
a slight drizzle began to fall. Scattered hamlets appeared here and there,
faintly illuminated by hurricane lamps. For the first time, Nagaraj felt a
strange, unfamiliar fear. He was a strong, well-built man, but the silence was
unsettling. To distract himself, he began humming his favourite tune as the
bike thudded along at moderate speed.
It was then that he saw,
at a distance, a woman standing by the side of a post box outside her lone hut
on the roadside. There was a cluster of huts slightly away. She was frantically
waving her hand to stop. He saw a man sitting on a cot outside the hut. Both
appeared young as he neared them. He was torn between stopping the
vehicle and rushing past. Being a kind-hearted man, he felt there must have
been an emergency, as otherwise a young woman would not come out of her house
at this hour and wave a vehicle to stop.
As soon as he stopped the
bike by her side, she asked Nagaraj whether he would allow her to travel on the
pillion up to his town. When he looked at the man, he signalled him with his
hands to refuse.
Puzzled, Nagaraj turned to
her and said, “I do not mind, but your husband is not agreeable. Get his
permission. I am in a hurry.”
She replied, “Who is he to
permit me? I told him yesterday that I am leaving him once and for all. He is a
drunkard and always suspects me of having an affair with every passerby. Living
with him is torture, as not a day passed without his beating me mercilessly
each night on his return and falling on me shamelessly when the influence of
the alcohol faded. Please take me now so that I can live with my mom
peacefully. I hate to be on the same ground with this wretch.”
The man ambled his way
towards Nagaraj with the help of a heavy stick and said, “Don’t trust her. She
is a common whore and will seduce you. I have been putting up with her in my
compassion and have no mind to part with her. I like her immensely. Leave her
alone and proceed on your way. If you don’t listen to me, I will break your
backbone with this stick.”
Nagaraj could easily
surmise that the threat was real if he went against the man’s instructions. He
started the bike, and the woman came rushing to get on the pillion. The man
swinging the stick came rushing and drew the woman away from the bike, even as
he rained blows on her.
Nagaraj felt sorry for the
woman, but decided it was not proper to interfere in a quarrel between
spouses.
Nagaraj told the drunkard
to stop beating her as he was not giving her a lift. That inebriated man,
without understanding what Nagaraj was telling him, came rushing towards him,
swaying the heavy stick.
Nagaraj sped away at full
speed, not turning his head even once. He saw from the rear view mirror the dim
figure of the woman pushing her husband away from his clasp to no avail as he
dragged her inside the hut.
When Nagaraj’s wife asked
him why he was so late, he told her,” The story is long and sad. I am very
sleepy now and will tell you in detail in the morning.
The next morning, he
recounted the story of the unfortunate woman and her cruel husband. He said he
felt very sorry for not being able to help her.
It was then she said, ‘Did
you not know that our maid Ponni’s sister was living with her alcoholic husband
in the exact spot you mentioned and that she committed suicide two days back by
having poisonous weeds. Her husband was always suspicious and assaulting
her daily. She was a virtuous young woman and tried in vain to change him from
his drinking ways. When she failed to mend him and things became unbearable,
she put an end to her miserable life.”
Nagaraj’s blood ran cold."My
God, whom did I then meet today? Could it be her ghost? It is puzzling to
see him fighting still with her ghost,” I said
“You haven’t heard me
fully. Stricken with remorse, the drunken fellow had also followed suit by
eating the same weeds she had left behind. You saw yesterday that both
of them were continuing their quarrelling routine. People are advised not to travel
in that stretch after midnight. Thank God, you wisely escaped from any harm,” his wife happily concluded.

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ReplyDeleteKnew it was another ghost story.
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ReplyDeleteI knew it was another ghost 👻 story 😆
Looks like Nagaraj took the phrase ‘dead tired’ a bit too literally—some midnight rides come with unexpected company!
ReplyDeleteJanardhan N
Should have read it bright daylight, chilling! (JJ)
ReplyDeleteA sprited one. I loved the way you depicted the environment. I'm glad Nagraj refused to help, but I'm just imagining what would have happened otherwise..
ReplyDeleteStories about the countryside are very interesting, especially when the environs are captivatingly captured! Added to that is the spirited (!) description of the ostensibly departed souls! A nice, breezy one, aptly accentuated by Nagaraj's hurry!
ReplyDeleteThe ghosts are still there. It is said that normally the souls of the dead remain in the place for 13 days. Here the souls of the dead are fighting.
ReplyDeleteOur hero was already dead beat, the lonesome rider prime target for getting sucked into the eery, the uncanny and the macabre :-)
ReplyDeleteVery nice story. Ramakrishnan.
ReplyDeleteYour signature twists to end the story. Narration of the story is good 👍
ReplyDeleteChitra
🙏🙏👍nice story
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ReplyDeleteI have heard of a similar para-normal experience. But not physically meeeting someone who has passed away (like you have described in the story), but seeing someone resembling a person who had passed away a few hours earlier.
ReplyDeleteI don't believe in ghosts. But people do experience such para-normal phenomena. It's difficult to scientifically explain.
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Nagaraj escaped from the two ghosts -- Thank God!
ReplyDeleteWhat an incredible dexterity! The author could effortlessly convert an even otherwise out of the ordinary experience for Nagaraj into a totally unanticipated encounter with ghosts for him!
ReplyDeleteChilling ghostly story in the wee hours of the morning! Boo!
ReplyDeleteAn interesting turn of events
ReplyDeleteYour narration makes the story more interesting! Good to know that both of them are ghosts:)
ReplyDeleteThank you Sandhya for your comment
DeleteGuessed that the two were ghosts- but nice to know the background. An interesting one as always
ReplyDeleteWow!
ReplyDeleteSpooky and chilling tale and Ghosts..
ReplyDeletedo they really exist, or are they just echoes of our fears and imagination? Either way, such stories always leave us wondering about the paranormal and supernatural...
Spooky and chilling tale this one...Ghost...do they really exist, or are they just echoes of our fears and imagination? Either way, such stories always leave us wondering on the paranormal and supernatural..
ReplyDeleteWow! I was expecting one ghost but there were two. Loved the twist! :)
ReplyDeleteGood story to know there are ghosts where people encounter them
ReplyDeleteNow, that's an interesting yarn, I say!
ReplyDeleteBest wishes and warm regards
Hemantha Kumar Pamarthy