This is a story of mine published in January 2011 under the "Timeout" op-ed page of The New Indian Express
It was dusk and getting
dark. I was standing on the bridge over the river watching
the gurgling water and enjoying with a tinge of sadness the fading
skyline. The park in the distance, with dazzling lights and varied plants and
flowers, looked alluring. A boat was seen swiftly moving down the river,
splashing water along. I had no interest to rush home as my wife was away
at her parents’ place. She was expecting.
I heard a soft voice by my
side,” Sir, sorry to disturb you. Are you inclined to see a little magic?”
Startled I turned around
to see a middle-aged man in much-worn jeans and a faded T-shirt with a coat
that had seen much decay. His face was slightly long but there was a twinkle in
his eyes suggesting a pleasant personality behind. He wore a Hawaii chappal
that must have been in long use.
I asked him “What do you
want?” even as I put my hand in my trouser pocket looking for small change.
He smiled at me, saying,”
Please don’t bother. I am not a beggar seeking alms. I just wished to show you
a magic if you are in the mood to witness.”
Feeling bad that I had
hurt him, I said, “Why not? I would love to see your trick”
“Good. Give me a ten-rupee
note. I will transform it into a beautiful butterfly,” he said with a faint
wink of his eye.
Intrigued as I was as how
he could change a ten rupee note into a butterfly, I played along and proffered
a ten rupee note, watching his movements carefully. I thought I heard a
sweet humming tone, and as my attention was distracted for not
more than a second, he produced a multi-hued butterfly in his hands with the
tenner vanishing in thin air. The insect fluttered its multi coloured wings as
he handed it over to me. I was bemused and totally taken by surprise by the
sleight of his dexterous hands.
I asked him, “Where is the
ten-rupee note?”
“It is in your hands, sir
in the form of a butterfly” he replied with a smile.
As I sheepishly smiled
back at my naivette, he said he can transform a 100 rupee note into a 500 rupee
one. I thought he did produce a butterfly as promised for a tenner and why not
trust him for a 500 rupee note that surely would be in my hands. Greed overpowered
my caution. I parted with a hundred-rupee note.
But this time I decided I
would be extremely careful in focusing all my attention on him. As he took the
100 rupee note and asked me to watch carefully, I heard for a second
a hissing sound of a viper by my feet, and involuntarily I
jumped to see nothing near my feet. Meanwhile, he held in his hand
a crackling new 500 hundred rupee note. I took it with eagerness and
turned it several times. When I asked him whether he can change one more
hundred rupee note, he declined, saying, “It is my promise to my guru that I
would not use this magic for profiteering or for personal benefit”
I walked back home happily
thinking of my good fortune. I rang up my wife and told her of my good luck.
It was three days later
when I met my good friend at Adyar and related to him about the man
transforming a tenner to a butterfly, he interrupted me and asked whether I got
a 500 rupee note in lieu of a hundred. Surprised I asked him whether he had
spoken to my wife, he chuckled and said, “You are a sucker. That
fellow has been cheating all gullible folks like you. The 500 rupee note you
have is a counterfeit one. Go to the bank and check it”
It was then that I
remembered the sounds of the tune and the hiss, and became aware he was a
ventriloquist too, besides possibly a magician.

I hope you can publish your short stories as book series. Best wishes for that
ReplyDeleteChitra
The story is very well written. An encounter with a con man is a common experience for all of us. With maturity we understand that our greed is the main cause of our fall. The conster may not have been that good.
ReplyDeleteMan’s greed is insatiable!
ReplyDeleteHa ha! A good one! the con man richer by 110 rupees and the victim wiser for his loss! Good that he didn't try to use the 500 rupee note as he would have been arrested had he done so!
ReplyDeleteLooks like a real cheater..
ReplyDeleteA very good, engrossing story. Just like the hero, i was also craning to catch the trickster :) :) :)
ReplyDeleteAn eminently likeable tale on getting conned by a disarming magician cum ventriloquist!
ReplyDeleteThey should learn to divert our attention first and then cheat...He 'earned' his daily income:) ...Sandhya
ReplyDeleteWow! A really sweet one! As I read the title before the story, I thought the 'note' meant the author's journal! I guess the 110rupee loss was worth the learning it provided besides the entertainment
ReplyDeleteIt gives a feeling while reading that it really happened. But then I realised it's a story. Regards, PKR
ReplyDeleteA fool and his money is soon parted, the adage brought out beautifully through this story! Adored the description of the characters!
ReplyDeleteHmm! Beautiful narration! Feels very real! Thank you for sharing.
ReplyDeleteSurely snakebitten so to speak (JJ)
ReplyDeleteGood one but still the end was predictable!
ReplyDeleteBest wishes and warm regards
Hemantha Kumar Pamarthy