Kokila had an early dinner, afraid that the incessant rain might cause
the power to be cut at any time. She had the candles ready on the dining table.
Luckily, her fears seemed unfounded as there was no power cut and she could see
her favourite serial till the end. It was 8 pm.
There was a knock at the door. She wondered who could call on her at
this time. After her husband’s demise, she continued to stay alone in this
house. Her only daughter, who was abroad, had come to visit her old mom and
left only the previous month. Kokila opened the door, keeping the safety chain
intact, to see a young lady of about 35 standing there drenched in rain. Her
clothes were completely wet and her hair dishevelled.
When she saw Kokila, she said, “Sorry to trouble you. Can I stay in the
portico till it stops raining? I should have left my office a little
earlier.”
It was dark outside, and she saw the lady alone. Taking pity, Kokila
said, “Please come in and dry yourself.”
The lady smiled with profuse thanks and entered the hall. Just as
Kokila was about to close the door, there was lightning, and she saw in the
glimmer of light a car parked outside the gate. She immediately felt she had
made a mistake in allowing a stranger inside, but did not show it on her face. She
gave her a towel, asking her to wipe herself while she made hot tea. She
started making tea and decided not to betray her scare. In the rain, no one in
the adjacent houses would hear her scream for help. Newspapers were abuzz daily
with the news of old people who were alone being mercilessly killed for
monetary gain, and warning against letting strangers in when alone.
She gave the hot tea to the lady who was comfortably seated on the
sofa. She looked strong and well-built woman. Kokila’s mobile was on the dining
table. She wanted to get it, but did not want to create a doubt in the lady’s
mind. Instead, she chose another sofa a little away from her.
“Thanks a lot. Do you live alone? Any servants staying with you? I do
not see any. Any children living with you?” she asked softly.
“I am not alone. I have a cat to give me company. My maid’s daughter
comes to stay at night. I think the rain is almost gone. Do you have far to go?
Did you come by walk?” asked Kokila, wanting to test whether she would tell her
about the waiting car.
“I came by walk and will presently leave in a few minutes. I have a
question to ask. You don’t know me. You are old and alone. How could you trust
me and let me in?” she asked.
“Your face looked innocent, and your bearing indicated that you are from a
decent family. You were completely drenched. I did not think about anything
then except to make you comfortable. I think I have not made any mistake in my
judgment,” she said with a laugh.
“Oh, I am sorry, madam. You were not wise, but you have been very nice
to me. I would not like to hurt you. You are like my mom. Please hand over the
cash and valuables without any protest. Any attempt to draw the attention of
others would invite immediate death to you. I hope you understand,” she said,
like a snake hissing.
Kokila did not lose her cool. She said, “Please do not do any physical
harm. Whatever you want, take it. Let me get up and fetch the keys in a few
minutes. The shock makes my head reel. Please give me just five minutes. I will
cooperate with you fully.”
In three minutes, they heard the shrill blaring of sirens from police
cars and one screeching to a halt outside. The lady was struck with fear and
asked whether any exit was available on the rear.
Meanwhile, there was loud knocking on the door and a voice over the
microphone that the house had been surrounded by police. As Kokila opened the
door, a constable with a gun in hand walked in and asked in an amiable voice,
“Where is our intruder?” The young lady was promptly handcuffed.
When the young woman, as she was being led to the police car, turned
towards Kokila with venom and anger in her eyes, Kokila triumphantly smiled at
her without letting her know of the hidden buzzer under the sofa and the security
arrangement made with the police.

Did not expect this twist.. nice ending!
ReplyDeleteVery very sneaky Patti !!! LOL
ReplyDeleteNice twist in the end and also a subtle suggestion to senior citizens to maintain their cool and also be prepared with some way of protecting from intruders!! Nice one!!
ReplyDeleteNice ending.ramakrishnan.
ReplyDeleteNice one, that! I do come across many such anecdotes where the wit of the old ones is exhibited in unique ways! Indeed, Kokila Mami is cool!
ReplyDeleteA very timely post as an alert and warning for old people living alone in big houses. Most police departments in metros have this kind of arrangement to give protection to elders. Good read. Thank you! -Thangam
ReplyDeleteAn interesting twist to the tale
ReplyDeletegood story. true reflection of the times we live in. pretty sad to see that niceties seem to have no place in these times. very sad indeed. making some sort of arrangement for security is becoming essential.....meka
ReplyDeleteShe was well prepared. Good! 👍
ReplyDeleteChitra
Such a gripping little story! The lady thought she found an easy target, but Kokila turned out to be way smarter than she expected. That twist at the end was awesome!”
ReplyDeleteThat's a smart patti. Not many can stay calm in such a situation. All who stay alone young or old should have this facility of alerting the police in case such circumstances, perhaps it exists but not known to all.
ReplyDeleteKokila Mami's calm demeanour saved the day—and even the night! A pleasant story for repeat reading. Thanks .
ReplyDeleteThe reader got introduced right away to Kokila Mami, an apparently vulnerable old lady living all alone, who, in a moment of terrible indiscretion, had let a complete stranger inside her house on a rain drenched night! Given the kind of setting, there cannot be any prize for the reader to anticipate that the stranger intended to rob Kokila Mami!
ReplyDeleteIt also did not come as a surprise that Kokila Mami would have an outward display of composure even in such a desperate situation.
What caught the stranger (as well as the reader) on the wrong foot was the way the 'cool' Kokila Mami would save the 'day' with her secret arrangement of an emergency alarm to alert the police!
Warm congratulations to the writer for presenting such an interesting story.
I am glad police responded immediately.
ReplyDeleteVery good story telling. We have experienced such situations in our own life. We repent after being sympathetic to few persons . Good that presence of mind of Kokila saved her from tricky situation.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful story with a surprising twist at the end. I didn’t know this facility with the police was available in India.
ReplyDeleteGone are the days when my Patti used to ask me “Thinnaila yaaraavathu Ukkandirukkala” - meaning find out if some stranger is sitting in the porch waiting to be served dinner.
Relieved now...tension gone! I didn't guess the arrangements already available. The senior lady is smart. She was able to use it without giving any clue to the intruder. Very well narrated story, Kp ....Sandhya
ReplyDeleteEveryone has to take responsibility for themselves. Age and gender do not matter. Forethought on part of kokila is such a good reminder to all of us. Bringing out the calm attitude showed Kokila's strength and experience. Well written.
ReplyDeleteAh ….a pleasant twist to the tale!
ReplyDeleteYou maintain suspense till the end..
ReplyDeleteKP sir! You have shown beautifully how the seniors of the present generation have learnt to cope with the current challenges in society. Coool!!
ReplyDeleteHmm... interesting.
ReplyDeleteBest wishes and warm regards
Hemantha Kumar Pamarthy
As I commented in another story of the author old persons, particularly the single ones, are very normally scared of being robbed and harmed by strangers and sometimes even by known persons. It was very wise of Kokila to have taken certain precautionary measures to effectively deal with such situations.
ReplyDeleteI must say that through such interesting stories the author is alerting senior citizens to take adequate precautions about the safety of their property and self. Atin Biswas
A must have SOS gadget for us in this age! A nice twisty tale of a gutsy woman who stayed calm despite the adversity and teaches us a lesson too on how we need to manage situations... and loved your narration that brought thecharacters alive on my screen!
ReplyDeleteCaptivating story. Patti character with good presence of mind.
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