Thursday, November 27, 2025

The Saviour (742 words)

                           A Story for Thanksgiving Day

He lay twisted on the road with the toppled auto’s side wheel still rotating beside him. The world around him blurred for him with faces, silhouettes and a crowd of about a dozen or more people crowding around his broken body. They stared with wide, anxious eyes, the driver drenched in blood and still flowing, wringing their hands, waiting for someone to take the lead.

The truck that struck him had already disappeared into the distance, a hit-and-run. case. A life abandoned on the road.

He tried to call out, “Help me… please...” but his throat failed him. Not a whisper came from the onlooking crowd. Only the noise of passing traffic that did not halt. He could feel the warm rush of blood under him, the heat fading from his limbs.

People murmured to one another, shaking their heads. “Drunk truck drivers…”

“Police hassles… summons… courts…”

“Taxis won’t take a bleeding man…”

“Hospitals refuse these cases…”

Each excuse felt like a nail sealing him into loneliness. Some watched for a moment before slipping away, glancing at their phones and their watches. Everyone had somewhere more important to be than to help the dying man.

He felt panic rising. The minutes were slipping away even as he needed to be at a hospital without loss of time. He needed someone—anyone—to come to his rescue

His vision wavered, and drowsiness was slowly setting in. Sweat streamed down his temples. As he drifted in and out of consciousness, memories rushed in.

His daughter’s voice echoed through the house that morning:

“Appa, come home early today! We have the birthday party, remember? You promised!

He saw her bright eyes, her small hand tugging his shirt, her excitement bubbling like music.

He saw his little boy, clinging to his legs with chubby arms, pleading silently to be taken in his arms.

And then he saw his wife, her shy smile as he hugged her before leaving, the way her fingers lingered for a heartbeat longer, as though unwilling to let go.

Will they be waiting for me now?

A crushing thought: Will they have to wait forever?

He felt the darkness curling around the edges of his mind. There was still no policeman. Only bystanders. Watching him die and not a single hand reaching out.

Somewhere in the crowd, someone casually mentioned that they had already called the emergency number. He heard the remark faintly. A social task completed. A conscience soothed. And still he lay on the road, life ebbing away grain by grain.

Just when the world began to shrink into a small tunnel of fading light, a sudden voice cracked through the air, a loud, urgent shout commanding the crowd to move aside.

“Give way! Let him breathe! Move!”

A young man, no older than his mid-thirties, pushed through the ring of onlookers with fierce determination. He knelt by the dying man without hesitation, his eyes blazing, not with fear, but with purpose.

“Brother,” the young man whispered, “I’m taking you to the hospital.”

With the help of one other soul finally stirred into action, he lifted the limp body and rushed him into his auto rickshaw. The engine sputtered, then roared to life. In seconds, they were flying down the road, faster, louder and braver than the silence of the crowd had been.

At the hospital, doctors and nurses raced to their stations. They worked quickly, voices sharp, hands steady. Later, they would admit quietly among themselves that if the man had arrived even a few minutes later, he would have been gone.

When they turned to thank the auto driver, he only offered a small nod. His clothes were splashed with blood, and the floor of his rickshaw was soaked. But his face… it glowed with a quiet, humble happiness.

“I just did what anyone should do,” he murmured, already stepping back toward his vehicle. He did not expect any praise. No desire to be remembered.

He simply wanted to clean his auto and go home to his waiting children and wife.

But in that moment, in that simple man, lived a truth larger than the crowd that had watched without moving:

Blessed are those who give without remembering and those who take without forgetting.

And somewhere in a hospital bed, a father, a husband, a man who almost slipped away drew another breath, because one stranger refused to stand and watch. A sense of gratitude enveloped him

 

20 comments:

  1. A poignant story , beautifully told !

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  2. A beautifully narrated Thanksgiving story. To give without expectation is noble and not to forget gratitude received exemplary .

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  3. A lovely story. May we all be the Good Samaritan!

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  4. What a beautiful narration of the thoughts of a vulnerable person in a helpless situation.

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  5. A good story for the season.
    Nice
    Happy Thanksgiving week!

    Chitra

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  6. It is a common sight the onlookers don't care to help The story depicts the true situation

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  7. Beautifully scripted! I had to read the story twice to unearth any missed twists, but couldn't find any. Just one auto driver helping another, as much as I could make out. Masterful writing at its best! Whipping up so much in under 800 words is incredible skill.

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  8. Very good story. The drunken drivers are responsible for all the accidents. Atleast few good and helping citizens are there.

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  9. Touching story told with very insightful emotional narrations

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  10. Every single word in the story so truthfully reflected the way the real world works!
    Although the saviour never hankered for any appreciation from anyone for his noble job of saving a life, heartfelt thankfulness from the near ones of the accident victim, albeit undelivered, would surely be there for him for all time to come.
    It may even be an understatement to say that the story is absolutely apt on the occasion of the Thanksgiving Day.

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  11. An amazing story of a person who was almost taken away from life, comes back saved by another who never expected anything in return. Society is not deprived of such persons is an assurance on 'THANKSGIVING DAY'.

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  12. This was emotional but hopeful story. It proves that even when many stand back there is always someone who chooses compassion. What an apt story for the season of giving and gratitude!

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  13. There is brotherhood among the auto drivers even if the world at large is heartless. Very nice narration and a satisfying ending. Thank you! --thangam

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  14. My heart is still heavy after reading the beautiful narration...Some Godly humans are still there who have got guts to help others....Superb narration, Kp....Sandhya

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  15. The story truly reflects the apathy of the general public to situation like this. It's no doubt very comforting that there are still some good human beings, as in this story, who are willing to help in such situations without looking for any considerations. But unfortunately such good samaritans are gettingly rarer day by day! Atin Biswas

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  16. The narration of the accident scene and the thoughts of the person is superb. Felt like seeing the situation by myself. Finally the kind man emerged and story came to a happy ending and as a reader I’m relieved of the tension working inside me. Regards PKR

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  17. That auto driver is an angel.

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  18. Never lose hope in life. Sun shines through even through the clouds.

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  19. Good read.

    Best wishes and warm regards
    Hemantha Kumar Pamarthy

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  20. Poignantly conveys how ordinary people are capable of extraordinary acts when their minds are not steeped in rationalizations, excuses, and cynicism. (JJ)

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