Agnes was getting ready to leave for her office. She was near the door,
putting on her shoes, when her mom ran up behind her and tapped her shoulder.
Her mom was a superstitious person. She never called from behind when one was
about to leave.
“Agnes, please say a prayer to the Lord before you leave, “she said
“Why, what happened? Anything you are worried about?” asked Agnes
“No, nothing in particular. I had a bad dream early in the morning,”
she said
Both of them
stood before the huge picture of the Lord and said the following prayer
‘Our Father in Heaven, Holy be Thy Name
Thy kingdom come, Thy will be done
On earth as it is in Heaven
Give us this day our daily bread
And forgive us our sins
As we forgive those who sinned against us
Do not bring us to the test, but deliver us from evil.
Amen.”
Her mom smiled at her and said, “You are a sweet girl, and you always
please me”
The work in the office was very tight. She had no time even for a cup
of tea. She looked out from the third floor of the seven-storey building. It
was dark even at 3 pm, with a heavy drizzle. She did not like it and wanted to
leave for home at 5 pm. It was then she heard a strange rumbling sound with
thuds. Soon, the furniture started moving, and before she could run towards the
exit, the building started to shake and collapse, with the floor leading to the
entrance to the office caving in.
With great presence of mind, she went under a strong table. She heard
piercing screams; the deafening noise of the entire building collapsing, and
the shrieks of the people hit by the falling debris. The power went out, and the
space was covered by darkness. There was a sepulchral silence except for the
wails and distant voices in a muffled tone. She could not move as some heavy
object lay over her. She was cramped in a small space and could not extricate
her legs or one hand. It was aching, but she was not seriously hurt. She could
not locate her handbag and the mobile to contact others. Luckily, the watch
with luminous hands was running. It showed 7 pm, and there was no sign of any
rescue people near her. She could hear the cranes, the firefighters and the
rescue team working, but trapped as she was in the centre of debris, she
remained invisible. Her screams for help were inaudible
It was then she remembered her mother’s dream and her request in the morning
for prayer. That made her recite the prayer again with all devotion. She
pleaded with tears in her eyes “Father, I lift my hands to you. Please
pour down upon me your loving grace, light, peace, mercy, protection, help, and
healing. Humbly, I praise and thank you, Lord. In Jesus' Holy Name I pray. Amen.”
She was thirsty and hungry but tried to remain alert. She tried hard to
fight the drowsiness that was enveloping her, as she did not want to end her
life in a concrete grave. After what seemed an interminable wait, she heard,
around 11 pm, some voices nearby lifting hopes in her heart. With a big piece
of wood or concrete covering her mouth, her shouts were not heard even by her.
As she repeated the prayer again and again, she found the place filled with an
ethereal and comforting light. It was as if the Lord Himself was present there
to care for her. She mumbled, “Lord, in you I surrender. You are my
only resort,” even as a certain calmness descended on her. It was then
she heard the bark of some dog nearby before she passed out.
The rescue workers, who were working from above and avoided horizontal rescue,
heard the dog barking. They rushed to see that It was circling a particular
area. One of the workers managed to enter through a small opening to find a
glow from inside a void, where a victim could remain trapped. The glow
appeared, as if a torchlight was burning inside. It was otherwise pitch dark
around. With help from others, he managed to reach the place to find an
outstretched hand. There was no response to his calls. He slid his hand through
the opening and felt. The hand was warm. They worked carefully, using props and
removing the debris, ensuring that nothing collapsed on the victim.
The source of the shimmering light from the area that attracted the
attention of the dog and the rescue men was inexplicable, as no torch was found
there, and the dial of the watch was black, when she was removed in a stretcher
to the waiting ambulance. What was strange was that the miraculous glow
disappeared once the rescue was completed.

Miracles do happen!
ReplyDeleteA gripping story
ReplyDeleteWonderful! I truly love such stories! I would like to believe that there is a Divine Presence in our lives. It's only a question of connecting to this Divine Grace, maybe, by sincere prayers. Atin Biswas
ReplyDeleteThe catch is that we need to remember Him at such moments of desperate needs. He is always present. Your story beautifully brings out the importance of training ourselves to remember to call out to Him. Thank you.
ReplyDeleteThis was a truly moving read. I loved how you built the tension from the very beginning—the mother’s intuition and the morning prayer felt like a protective 'shield' that followed Agnes into the crisis. The description of the 'sepulchral silence' and the contrast between the chaos of the collapse and the 'miraculous glow' was incredibly vivid. A beautiful uplifting story.
ReplyDeleteJanardhan N
Wow! A Miracle ! We need our faith in God to be strengthened, in this uncertain life
ReplyDeleteChitra
Prayer is not just a religious ritual; it is a powerful tool that provides a sanctuary, a chance to pause and connect with something greater than ourselves. A wonderful story with a lesson.
ReplyDeleteVery very interesting Story. Goose bumps. But this can happen for people who believe in God.
ReplyDeleteFaith can move mountains! Shantha Rao
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