Saturday, May 16, 2026

The Hollow Applause (528 words)

( I have utmost regard for the medical professionals for the noble service they render true to their conscience and the Hippocratic oath they take. As in every profession, there may be a rare crook. No disrespect is meant to anyone. This is a story.)

The renowned surgeon, Dr Chandra, looked at Sunder, about his age, in his late 30s, with a poker face and spoke slowly. His father accompanied him.

” I have had all the tests done. I believe only an intervention by surgery would help, though there is a small amount of risk. If it is not done, there is a greater risk to your life. If both of you agree, I can prepare for it,” said the surgeon.

“What would we know about this? We would be solely guided by your advice, “said Sunder.

“Don’t worry. I will ensure everything is taken care of,” replied the doctor.

After they left, the surgeon’s second man, Dr Gupta, who was also a reputed surgeon with a deft hand, asked him, “Chandra, I am not sure whether the case calls for surgery. It is very risky, and very likely that the man may not survive. This is done only as a last resort when everything else has failed, and the patient is on the verge of death. I am really at my wits’ end. Are you not troubled by your conscience and the oath you took? Why are you resorting to this course? Don’t take me amiss. As a long-time colleague and friend, I spoke out”

Dr Chandra kept quiet for some time and then slowly started talking, “I am aware that surgery is premature in this case. But let me confide in you. I have a private score to settle. This man snatched away my sweet heart with his money and good looks. She was in deep love with me and very intimate till this fellow came into the scene.”

“Is it not murder that you are contemplating?” interjected Gupta

“No, it can at best be a wrong judgment. I am going to perform surgery professionally, and if he still succumbs due to the complications common in this process, can I be held responsible?’ said Chandra. He added, “I am a divorcee, and she is still charming.Who knows what can happen?”

“Sorry, I would not like to be associated with you in this operation”, said Dr Gupta as he left in disgust.

As a true professional, the surgery was carried out with utmost precision. Despite Dr Chandra silently waiting for some adverse development, luckily for the patient, none arose. The young man recovered steadily, making the operation a remarkable first-time achievement for both the hospital and the surgeon.

At the press meet after a few days, the Chairman congratulated Dr Chandra warmly while reporters flashed cameras without pause.

Sunder and his wife thanked the surgeon profusely before leaving the hall. Yet Dr Chandra did not fail to note the smirk on her face.

Standing a little apart, Dr Gupta watched the celebrations in silence. Then he walked up to Chandra and said quietly,

“Strange, isn’t it? You wanted him dead. Instead, you have made him live longer, happier, and more grateful to you than ever before.”

Dr Chandra forced a smile but said nothing.

Gupta looked at him steadily and said, “You still lose, Chandra.”

For the first time that evening, the roaring applause, Dr Chandra got, sounded hollow to him.

 

16 comments:

  1. A very short story. But let us ponder about different things. Good one

    Chitra

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  2. Interesting stories.

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  3. Interesting peek into the human condition… I wonder if it happens in real life…

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  4. An interesting story. It is hard to accept that people in such noble profession would stoop low and too for what reason. I think pure love is to see your loved one happy irrespective of whether you are in the picture or not.

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  5. Wow. A different story from the usual... Good one Sir

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  6. Dr Chandra true to his profession couldn't mess up his surgical process. His mind couldn't regulate his professional hands.
    Jagadeesan

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    1. Looks really scary if drs behave so cheaply with the lives of patients !! Greater truth has to be accepted that we are nobody to change His writings!! Good one!!

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  7. Without meaning to be over-philosophical, I must say most stories by the author carry beautiful moral morals - and this one is no exception. Principles of natural justice at play here! Lovely story

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  8. While it is a rare occurrence for a surgeon to harbour such evil intentions, surgeons taking deliberate revenge on a patient during medical treatment is incredibly rare and highly against both professional ethics and self-interest. While doctors and surgeons are human and experience personal conflicts, several powerful safeguards , like the rest of the assisting medical team present at the operating table, the video recording, and the surgeon’s conscience, prevent any personal feelings from translating into harm in the operating room.And why stake his reputation at that!!

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  9. Another story that leaves the reader pondering over multiple lines of thought. Felt happy that there was no complication by way of loss of life.

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  10. Man proposes, but God disposes!

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  11. A very interesting story indeed. Despite the dishonest intention of the surgeon the professionalism in him eventually triumphed. Atin Biswas

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  12. Professionals in any profession, whether doctors, advocates, or CAS, are human beings, and many of them succumb to emotions. Luckily, in our story, Dr Chandru's action didn't harm his patient. An interesting end indeed.

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  13. Fate had other plans for the Doctor!!!

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  14. Interesting story but I find it hard to believe the surgeon would have ulterior motives. I appreciate the author for making the surgeon perform the procedure to his best ability!

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  15. Interesting. :) Thank you for sharing

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