Chetan rarely received
personal mail. Most of what arrived in his post-box consisted of bills, bank
notices, and glossy advertisements he never bothered to read. In fact, he had
not stepped into a post office in months; life had long shifted to emails and
mobile notifications.
So, when he noticed a
cream-colored envelope tucked among the usual clutter, he became curious.
His name and address were
written in elegant cursive handwriting. The letters were graceful and
deliberate, perhaps feminine, though he could not be certain. Ever meticulous,
Chetan slit the envelope carefully with a pair of scissors and unfolded the tiny
square note inside.
It read:
Please come on the 23rd
at 7 p.m. to the address on the envelope. A surprise awaits you. This is
neither a trick nor anything harmful. Please do not fail to come. You will find
the effort worthwhile. This may change your life in the very way you wish it to
be.
— B
Chetan frowned.
He knew no one whose name
began with B. He had no business rivalries, no hidden enemies, and certainly no
mysterious admirers. His life moved calmly and predictably, like a quiet
stream.
There had only ever been
one great disturbance in that calm, and it is Swati.
He had loved her deeply,
and despite the years, he still did. But Swati had moved abroad with her
parents for higher studies, and distance had slowly hollowed their once-intense
relationship. Their long letters became occasional emails, then just greetings,
and finally silence for a couple of months. Yet Chetan continued writing to
her, confessing his love even recently, though every message remained
unanswered.
It could not possibly be
her. Her name did not begin with B.
Another thought crossed
his mind. He worked for a reputed company, earned well, and was considered
management material. Could a competing firm be trying to lure him away?
Curiosity soon overcame
caution.
On the evening of the
23rd, dressed carefully in a dark blazer, Chetan arrived at the address. Before
leaving, however, he had prudently informed a close friend of his destination
and instructed him to look for him if he failed to return by nine.
The address led him to a
sprawling bungalow with a long driveway lined by old trees. A stern-looking
assistant in a white uniform opened the heavy front door before Chetan could
knock.
“I am Chetan,” he said
hesitantly. “I received this invitation to come here.”
“Yes, sir,” the assistant
replied with a polite bow. “We have been expecting you.”
Chetan stepped inside but
paused.
“Could you at least tell
me who this ‘B’ is?”
The assistant's lips
curled faintly.
“Ms Bhumika, sir. A
wealthy lady. Owns estates across the country. Never married.”
Chetan blinked. “And why
exactly has she invited me?”
“I wouldn’t dare say,
sir,” the assistant answered carefully. “Though I can make a fair
guess. Let me only say this, that you are a very fortunate man to be in her
good graces.”
The mischievous smile
accompanying those words irritated Chetan immediately.
He was led into a richly
furnished drawing room draped in velvet curtains. Sitting on an enormous sofa
was a large woman in her fifties. She had broad shoulders, heavy arms, and an
imposing presence, but her warm eyes and cheerful smile softened her appearance
considerably.
Still, the way she looked
at him made Chetan uneasy, somewhat like a tiger calmly studying prey already
within reach.
“Welcome, Chetan!” she
exclaimed warmly. “How kind of you to honour my invitation. Please sit beside
me. My eyesight is rather poor.”
Reluctantly, Chetan sat
near her.
To his discomfort, she
clasped both his hands affectionately and rested them on her lap.
“You have made me very
happy today,” she said.
Chetan attempted politely
to free his hands, but before he could, the butler appeared with tea and
cookies.
Gathering himself, Chetan
asked, “May I know the purpose of my visit?”
Bhumika laughed heartily,
revealing her yellow teeth.
“My dear boy, surely you
can guess. It is entirely romantic in nature and, with luck, may end in
marriage!”
Chetan sprang to his feet.
“This is absurd!” he
snapped. “There must be some mistake. I have no intention of marrying anyone.
You have wasted my time.”
“Please, don’t be upset,”
Bhumika replied calmly. “I find you exceptionally suitable. I assure you, you
would become wealthier than you ever imagined. In fact, I have no intention of
letting you leave until we settle matters.”
Chetan’s patience snapped.
“This is outrageous! You
cannot keep me here against my will. I don’t care how wealthy you are. I love
someone else, a young woman named Swati. She is abroad, and I have been waiting
for two years. Do you understand? Now, please let me go.”
He strode toward the door.
But
the assistant stepped in front of him.
“Sorry, Sir,” he said
gently, “you seem to be leaving rather quickly. Perhaps you should turn around
first.”
Annoyed, Chetan turned and
froze
Sitting beside Bhumika and
struggling to suppress her laughter was Swati.
For a moment, the room
spun around him.
Then she stood and rushed
toward him with shining eyes.
“Surprise, is it?” she
whispered.
Chetan stared
speechlessly.
“I returned with my
parents two days ago,” she explained. “They know everything about us now. Aunt
Bhumika helped us arrange this little drama. We wanted to surprise you before
announcing our engagement.”
Bhumika burst into
laughter while the assistant grinned openly.
And as Swati wrapped her
arms around him, Chetan realised that the mysterious letter had truly changed
his life exactly the way he had wished.

simple superb and surprising .. fairly good read as usual nice one!
ReplyDeleteWhat a wonderful, heartwarming story! You built up the tension perfectly, and the twist put a huge smile on my face. Congratulations on writing such a delightful and feel-good piece!
ReplyDeleteJanardhan N
Chetan's relief is palpable!
ReplyDeleteSuperb.ramakrishnan.
ReplyDeleteVery nice story. He has openly expressed his love for Swati in her absence to her aunt. Good.
ReplyDeleteA good vibe story. Thank you
ReplyDeleteChitra
Happy ending with suspense all through. Rrgards PKR
ReplyDeleteHappy endings are always something to look forward to. Thanks
ReplyDeleteI always love to read your stories, a romantic thriller.....
ReplyDeleteThe dessert served is absolutely delicious, with scoops of mystery, amusement and romance going into it!
ReplyDeleteA good one . Chetan s steadfast love sailed through Swati s ploy. As always loved the narration.
ReplyDeleteTruthful relations end in happy situation!
ReplyDeleteJagadeesan
A happy-ending story full of expectation, suspense, and romance in equal measure. The narration, as usual, is exemplary.
ReplyDeleteA cute story indeed.
ReplyDeleteI really liked this story. The mystery around the letter kept me curious the whole time, and I honestly didn’t expect the twist at the end. Bhumika’s whole dramatic act made it even more fun. Such a sweet and happy ending.
ReplyDeleteSuspense is maintained till the end Superb
ReplyDeleteA really good suspense story.
ReplyDeleteGood narration made the story a thriller, Kp...Happy ending is always make us readers feel happy...Never expected this turn of events...Good story....Sandhya
ReplyDeleteYou are such a romantic at heart that the stories churned out reflect the beauty of love!
ReplyDeleteA fun and light read!
ReplyDeleteSurprise kept alive till the end and a great twist in the story ,and his life!! Good one in all ! -- Jayanthi
ReplyDeleteGood read :)
ReplyDeleteAn elaborate ruse to get amused! And live happily ever after … (JJ)
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