Every evening, after closing his small business in town, Ramu walked the two kms back to his village. The bus route was longer, and after eight p.m the buses stopped running altogether.
This stretch he used was short, lonely and dreaded. On
one side lay an old burial ground where funeral pyres often smouldered into the
night. There were no streetlights, only the pale glow of the moon on fortunate
evenings. Though not a timid man, Ramu would quicken his steps as he passed the
place, his lips moving in silent prayer.
Often, he had the uncanny feeling that someone was walking
close behind him. As a boy, he had been warned never to turn around or answer
strange voices on lonely roads at night. So, he would walk faster, his heart
pounding, clutching the little book of God’s thousand names that he carried in
his pocket like a shield.
At times, he glimpsed shadowy forms near the burial
ground—figures draped in white, standing motionless or gliding silently through
the darkness. They never approached him, but they were enough to make him wish
he had started for home much earlier.
One evening, heavy rain lashed the countryside. By the time
Ramu left town, the sky was black and a fine drizzle still hung in the air. The
path was slippery, and he moved cautiously, praying more fervently than ever.
Then he saw him. Standing a little ahead was Govind.
Ramu stopped in his tracks.
Govind had died in a terrible road accident a few months
earlier.
The two men had been friends since childhood. They had
walked this road together countless times, laughing, talking and comforting
each other through its eerie darkness.
A few days before his death, Govind had borrowed ₹5,000 from
Ramu. After the tragedy, Ramu had never mentioned the loan to Govind’s widow, unlike others who had recovered their money from her.
“Govind,” he called softly, “why are you stopping me? We all
miss you. Your wife and children still weep for you.”
The figure did not speak.
For a few moments, it remained perfectly still. Then it once
again raised its hands, firmly directing him to turn back.
A strange feeling came over Ramu. Without understanding why,
he decided to obey.
He set down the bundle he was carrying on a culvert, stepping
away from the bridge.
At that very instant, a deafening crack and lightning split
the night.
The wooden bridge gave way and crashed into the raging creek
below.
Ramu stood frozen.
Slowly, before his astonished eyes, Govind’s figure faded
into the darkness and disappeared.
Had he taken another step, he would have been swept away.
Long after the rain had ceased, Ramu remained there, staring into the night, hoping his friend would appear. He never did.
Taking the longer route home, Ramu finally reached his
village and narrated the strange incident to his worried wife.
Then, with tears in his eyes, he said quietly, “What a noble friend Govind was. The money I lent him was a small debt. Tonight, he repaid by saving my life.”

தர்மம் தலைக் காக்கும் nice story
ReplyDeleteChitra
Very nice story!
ReplyDeleteSpooky, yet captivating story!
ReplyDeleteEvery good deed has its rewards, returns to you multifold later!
ReplyDeleteJagadeesan
My wife and I used to have this conversation. My mother died 20 years ago. My wife asked me suppose there is a knock on the door at midnight and you open the door and there stands your mother. Will you be afraid? I said NO. My wife asked me why. I said it is my own loving mother. Will she harm her own loving son?
ReplyDeleteGood to read. True friends have feelings for each other. Which gets reflected even after the demise of one.
ReplyDeleteSuch stories make one wonder about the miraculous , those seemingly unnatural, ethereal happenings in life. Should we believe them or should we not? Perhaps we believe them when they suit us!
ReplyDeleteThe author revels in the stories of the supernatural !
A spooky story but an emotional one, nevertheless. It brought tears to my eyes. Thank you for a lovely story.
ReplyDeleteYet again a lovely story of friendship which never dies.. Whether such super natural things happen or not is based on one's beliefs and circumstances. To think of it , if I had faced a similar situation, would have been petrified. Great narration.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful setting for a very nice story! The only important thing is Ramu's state of mind. No matter what the mercenary issue is, Ramu is happy. And that's the best retribution.
ReplyDeleteEnjoyed reading the truly gripping horror story for its positive character.
ReplyDeleteChilling narration (JJ)
ReplyDeleteUtterly riveting.🫡
ReplyDeleteVery nice story. Ramakrishnan.
ReplyDeleteGhost stories usually end badly for the protagonist but glad this one ended well! Lovely story!
ReplyDeleteNice story. As I’ve said many times before, one actually see the story play out and vividly imagine the settings in one’s head as the author describes it so well and in detail!
ReplyDeleteGreat.
ReplyDeleteSaved by his friend.
Both friends knows that money is not repaid. Life is saved.
The lesson of the story is help someone in times of need and you will be get back in some form or other. PKR
ReplyDeleteGood story. It hapens in real life also. Namaskaram Sir.
ReplyDeleteYou have written few ghost stories earlier but this is different..... Very interesting... Sandhya
ReplyDeleteInteresting :) Thank you for sharing :)
ReplyDeleteA gripping story, as usual and the author has kept the interest going right till the end. And there is also the deep message, again as usual from the author. Lovely.
ReplyDeleteAn eerie feeling leaves you after reading your story
ReplyDeleteVery nice story Sir
ReplyDeleteLoved the title and how you weaved the story around to create the settings of an apparition yet mystifying to be a good ghost:)
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