I was spending the evening at Elliot's Beach watching the
waves rise and fall. I found this young lady frantically searching for
something. When I went over to help, she said she couldn’t trace her car keys
and started crying. I said, “Do not worry. It must be only here. Let me also
search, but tell me where exactly you were sitting”.
When she showed the place, I dug it out easily from the
sand. She was overjoyed and thanked me profusely. As we walked together to her
car, she said, “I am Sunita and come here frequently. But for you, I would have
been in great trouble today. Can I drop you? “I declined.
The next day, I was at the same place at the beach. She came
as I expected and sat by my side. She was an extremely charming lady but walked
with a slight limp. We met frequently and came very close, cuddling and
hugging, till I felt life without her would be meaningless. I plied her with
lots of gifts. When I proposed to her, she said she would have to wait till her
elder sister got married, and our love had been kept a secret from her parents.
We became intimate soon and frequently spent some evenings
at nearby resorts. It was after three months that she hesitantly asked for some
big money as a short loan. I readily promised to give it to her on Valentine’s
Day, a few days ahead. I also wished to surprise her with platinum earrings and
a pendant
Meanwhile, I had gone to attend my cousin’s marriage one
day. A lot of my good friends and relatives had gathered there. There was a
cocktail party with dancing, with drinks aplenty. During the binge, we were all
regaled with funny and rib-tickling incidents of how they were duped and turned
into suckers. I was laughing till I heard one friend relate how he fell into a
trap by a wily woman. He was recounting how he was conned to part with heavy
amounts by the young woman pretending to be in deep love with him and how she
moved intimately with him to make him a sucker.
Something made me ask how he met her initially.
“It was like this. I was at Elliott's Beach, sitting in a
secluded spot. It was then I found her searching frantically for her car key. I
helped her retrieve it. We became friends since then,” he said
“Can you describe her?” I asked
“Why do you ask? This lady was very fetching,
tall and about 27”
Curious to know more, I asked him, “Any distinguishing
features?”
“Nothing except the poor thing had to walk with a slight
limp”
My dream was shattered, and anger surged in me. I would do
anything for love, but not be cheated
Valentine’s Day arrived. Sunita was waiting for me at our
usual spot on Elliot’s Beach, looking more radiant than ever. She wore a lovely
pink dress and greeted me with a warm embrace.
“Darling, did you remember what you promised me for this
day?” she whispered.
“How could I forget?” I replied, smiling. “After all, today
is a very special day.”
I took out a beautifully wrapped velvet box. Her eyes
sparkled. She opened it eagerly and found a pair of glittering earrings and a
matching pendant.
“Oh, darling! Platinum!” she exclaimed, throwing her arms
around me.
“Not quite,” I said gently. “They are imitation platinum.
But don't be disappointed. I have something more valuable for you.”
I handed her a colourful envelope.
Her face lit up. She must have imagined it contained the
cheque she had been waiting for. With trembling fingers, she opened it.
Inside was a photograph.
It showed her standing beside my friend at the same beach
with her arm lovingly entwined with his.
Her face turned pale. “Where did you get this?” she
stammered.
“From an old friend. Apparently, he too was very good at
finding lost car keys.”
She stood speechless.
I continued, “You know, Sunita, I have been wondering about
something. You seem to be adept at losing your car keys often, but never slack
in your ability to find a man and fall in love, willing to part with gifts and
money
She tried to speak, but I raised my hand.
“Don't worry. I am not asking for my gifts back. I consider
them the price of a valuable lesson.”
As I walked away. I warned her, “Keep off the beaches. I
have asked my police friends to look for a young woman with a limp searching
for car keys at the beaches”.
I turned to see her picking up the sand and angrily throwing it at
me.
“Stop it. I forgot to mention. My friend in the photograph
expressed a desire to marry your elder sister if she is still unmarried and a
real person,” I added and walked away as she was making faces at me.
That Valentine's Day, I broke up with a sweetheart, saved a
fortune, and discovered a golden truth: not all that glitters is platinum.
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These days you will find gold diggers every where. Some are lucky as in this case.
ReplyDeleteAh not all is rosy in cupid's land. Nice change from the usual celebration of human goodness, sometimes th opposite is true. Arvind Rajan
ReplyDeleteA close shave!
ReplyDeleteA story with an important message. In these days being credulous is a great weakness! Atin Biswas
ReplyDeleteIt only shows that suckers are easy to find
ReplyDeleteAnd this bluffing game was not even an online dating app !
ReplyDeleteMany such people are out there. Sad.
ReplyDeleteGood narration in the story
Chitra
A good one. Glad you missed the trap by a whisker. You realised at the right time that everything that glitters is not gold. Wonder what makes both men and women behave so!
ReplyDeleteGood one! How do men fall so easily for 'beautiful' women, I wonder. At least he learnt a lesson early!...Sandhya
ReplyDeleteKudos to the author for having presented a story with an unanticipated classic twist at the end.
ReplyDeleteWhat appeared to be a perfect love story at the beginning, ultimately turned out to be a harsh reality check at the end .
What an immaculate plan Sunita had woven to gain some tidy amounts for herself by hooking well to do youngmen.
Her plot got unearthed accidentally because of some casual chat among some youngmen attending a wedding ceremony.
So it was rather providence that the male protagonist could disengage himself from Sunita's trap before the die was cast!
Well narrated.
ReplyDeleteI have a question. When a young lady loses her car key many young guys go to help her. If a young man loses his car key how many guys will volunteer to help him?
ReplyDeleteVery good sir ramakrishnan.
ReplyDeleteNice one..con lady vs clever guys
ReplyDeleteThat last line too good
ReplyDeleteStories by the beach are always interesting, especially those centered ostensibly around romance! This one takes the cake in bringing forth the essential nature of man! Thankfully, it did not take a very devious turn!
ReplyDeleteExpect the unexpected! That on a Valentine Day. That on a beautiful beach. And an escape by a whisker. Great imagination. Good read! Salutes to you, sir.
ReplyDeleteVery nice story. One should be very careful with ladies now a days. It is good that you escaped. 🙏🙏
ReplyDeleteHa ha...interesting one, hasten to add that this has become quite common these days! Enjoyed the last paragraph which is replete with twists and turns and googlies!
ReplyDeleteIt's difficult to find true love , but when you do, it's equally important to cherish it.
ReplyDeleteHappy that he learnt his lesson before losing his fortune!! Feel trust has lost its value and we have to be very very careful in making friends. Liked his friend proposing to her elder sister if she was a" real person"!
ReplyDeleteWell crafted story with some memorable lines. Goes to show that we often believe what we imagine not what is real. (JJ)
ReplyDeleteInteresting story. Does get one thinking, on various aspects
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