Saturday, May 26, 2012

55 word fiction

1. My love
I always long to be with you and hold you close to my bosom with my eyes closed. Your music is soft and enchanting sending soothing vibrations all over me. Wishing to sing with you, I draw you close my dainty fingers setting you in action. You never fail to please me, my dear iPad.

2. The stalker
The stalker is unrelenting following me always. I am no young girl, rich or a criminal..But is unfazed even when I am in a group. I told my dad. He advised me not go out or go late in evenings to escape the stalker. The stalker is vigorous early mornings or later afternoons-long shadows

3. Patron
It was hot evening. Only 10 people were in the AC hall.A girl was giving her debut recital. Six members belonged to girl’s family, two hall employees, the mike man and an elderly man the only outsider. At the end family profusely thanked the lone patron. He said it was hot and raining heavily .

4. A suicide?
He saw men walking towards him on the bridge. He quickly climbed the railings, saw the river below and took a deep breath before lifting his folded hands. The men rushed to pull him back and gave money to banish hunger. The next day he waited for some to appear before climbing the railing

5. Who is at fault?
I find the world growing insane. People are intolerant, rigid in views and prone to violence. I avoid such men unless they irk me and many do. When I retaliate, onlookers side with my tormentors making me angrier. To avoid this I become silent making my daughter worried and crying. Tell me who is insane







16 comments:

  1. Hmm so u were busy with this but I beat you i.e I posted first today :P
    Liked all especially the first one
    WhO is at fault, I don't really know. At times I feel all are insane

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  2. he he he IPAD becoming a best friend soon :)

    loved the 55er's thanks for sharing

    Bikram's

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  3. the stalker and patron proved very interesting to me
    thanks

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  4. the stalker and patron proved very interesting to me
    thanks

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  5. So the 55 fiction is here:) IPAD was superb..!!!

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  6. iPad and stalker are both hilarious.. how original.. :)

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  7. Ipad. Ha ha. Amazing fiction. Great Read :-)

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  8. Loved the suicide one...iPad too...:)

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  9. Back to 55 words? Great! Found all good especially patron, ipad & suicide.

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  10. The stalker one I guessed
    And I thought the patron is the best one… so short yet you managed a neat twist :P

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  11. First one is superb! I never guessed! 3rd - Hahaha! Stalker is interesting!

    How do you manage to bring the twist, Partha Sir!

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  12. Each one is a keeper. Loved them all. Wild imaginations and great stuff as always.

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  13. Lovelyy enjoyed reading all the 5 of the them..

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  14. hi! i dropped in here from Deeps's blog. i must say that your 55-word stories are one of a kind and gripping. needs some imagination to churn out stuff like this. i'd love to read more here. gonna follow you!

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  15. hi! i dropped in from Deeps's blog. your 55-word stories are one of a kind and gripping! needs some imagination to churn out stuff like this. i'd love to read more here!

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  16. I enjoyed all. My favorites were the iPad and Patron. All marvelous!

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