It was
a cold night with gusty winds. I wished to reach my home that was five hours
drive away by 11 pm.but was held up here. I could leave only at 9.30 pm.As I was
feeling hungry I had my dinner at a road side dhaba.That took away another 45 minutes
but I was determined to drive through the night though I would miss the sleep
the whole night. The highway was practically empty with occasional trucks. It
looked the drizzle may break into a heavy rain anytime. But I was cruising along
at 70 km as the road was wet. There were occasional hamlets enroute with faint
light from the lonely huts but otherwise the drive was a monotonous one.
I had
promised my wife I would be back for dinner. She might be anxious why I was late.
The battery in my cell phone had run out. It was a little past midnight that my
car abruptly stopped even though I had filled the tank full. It was pitch dark
on the desolate stretch of the road. I tried to start several times but it did
not work. A couple of lorries went by without stopping while one offered a
lift.
Worried
I looked around and in the flash of a lightning, I saw a house a little away.
Wondering how crazy people are to build houses with none around, I walked
towards it. I could see light inside and was relieved by the thought of likely
inhabitant inside. I knocked the door and repeated when there was no immediate response.
After what looked like eternity, there appeared a face behind the window. I was
surprised to see an extremely beautiful woman in thirties with long black hair
falling on her glowing shoulders. There was a faint surprise in her eyes and
the twirl in her lips made her more enchanting.
"I
am stranded with my car having broken down. If I have a torch, I can open the
bonnet and see what is wrong. It is pitch dark outside" I said
"Oh,
oh.I am sorry I do not have a torch. My husband is also not here to help
you" she replied
I
lingered for a while not knowing what to do but I saw from the corner of my
eyes how she was eyeing at me with interest.
When I
slowly turned back towards the gate, she said “I don't want to send you away.
Since no one else is there with me, I was hesitant. But it will be cruel not to
invite you when you are in such a predicament. Please come in. You seem to be a
decent person. You can leave immediately after the day breaks."
When I
sat on a large sofa, she went inside and brought me a pillow." You can
sleep on the sofa. I expect my husband to come only by tomorrow morning and you
would have gone by then. Feel comfortable” she said.
She
looked extremely fetching at close quarters and dignified in bearing. I could
smell a whiff of lavender perfume but she made no wrong move except for her coy
smile. After she left, I could not sleep for a while lost in thoughts of her. I
heard her close the door and the sound of bolt. Must be a cautious lady, I
thought.
I don't
know when I fell asleep but around 3 am I heard a sound of a door being opened.
I was worried whether it could be her husband come earlier than expected.
Feeling drowsy I did not get up from the sofa.When I heard the birds chirping
and saw the light of dawn through the window I awoke and found a light bed
sheet covering me. I could get the smell of lavender. Startled I sat up as she
had not given me any bed sheet when I went to sleep. She must have come in the
night around the time I heard the sound though to what purpose I could not
understand.
When I
heard the creaking sound of some door being opened, I turned to see an old lady,
somewhat ugly and bent with features that looked grotesque. She smiled at me
and asked "I hope you had a good sleep. When I came around three, I found
you lying crumpled and so covered you with a bed sheet"
"Where
is the young lady whom I met last night? She told me no one was there except herself.
Are you her mother by any chance?" I asked in a confused state of mind.
"No
mother. No one else came. I am alone here” she said with a smug smile
"It
cannot be. I saw a very beautiful young woman in thirties and was even
attracted to her. There is some mistake somewhere" I said
"Really?
Were you attracted towards me?"
"What
me? I told you that she is a charming young lady"
"See
now. Is she the young lady whom you saw" the old ugly woman said and
transformed into the young lady amidst eerie laughter. When I looked at her disbelievingly,
I could see the flesh fading and skeleton appearing. I turned and ran screaming
for my life on the road followed very closely by howling voice.
Abruptly
I woke up in the car on the highway that was surrounded by anxious passersby.
Ummmm pretty dangerous dream while driving ha. Enjoyable ofcourse.
ReplyDeleteImagine spending a whole night alone in a haunted house ! Nice story KP.
ReplyDeleteNice one, Partha Sir! It was really a good thriller!
ReplyDelete:) I thought I was reading an episode of fear files. Good one :D
ReplyDeleteThrilling story..hmm..gudd1 with a twist:)
ReplyDeleteHahaha...creepy dream
ReplyDeleteA good way to start 2013, spooky & all. Hope I get to read more & more stories written by you this year.
ReplyDeleteBut I thought ghosts come out only during the night? :P
ReplyDeleteWas I glad to read that you were safe inside your car :)
hahahha :D very scary and in the end superb funny as usual loved it KP :D
ReplyDeletelol..really I did not expect this twist. I thought may be in the morning he will not find anyone there...Good one...
ReplyDeletelol..good twist. I thought he may not find anyone in the morning... to see an old lady....:) Nice twist...
ReplyDeleteHotel Transylvania...!!! Good one! I always liked ghost stories!
ReplyDeleteZee horror show... eerie
ReplyDeletein fact i was expecting a different sort of twist than having to make him wake up from a dream...
ReplyDeleteshould this be just a dream?
ooo sent shivers down the spine
ReplyDeleteInteresting.Is it a fiction or a hallucination experienced by someone?
ReplyDeleteI agree with Jas! this is straight out of Zee Horror Show!
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