1. Offering
His prayer for job answered, he went to temple to
drop his offering of 100 rupees in the hundi.The
temple was closed but lines of beggars filled the entrance. He could see hunger
in their eyes. Without second thought he distributed the entire offering money
to them. The temple bell tolled as if in approval.
2. Ethics
She lay on the bed staring at him in his clinic.
She looked cute and soft with golden hair. As he examined her belly slowly with
his lingering fingers, she fluttered her eyes. He ran his fingers again over
her body He resisted the urge to possess her, as she jumped on the ground purring.
3. Lonely
path
News papers were awash about recent molestation in
that area. She still chose the desolate park at night being a short cut to her
home. To her horror she saw a stalker walking behind her. She ran to the main gate
and turned to see the new patrol policeman waving at her from the park
4. Violence
What started as banter turned violent. Though 15
feet away, she could hardly follow the quarrel between the two goons. Her heart
missed a beat when one of them whipped a knife and plunged it deep in other’s abdomen.
As red blood gushed, the attacker turned his gaze at her. She quickly shut the
television.
5. Tell me
again
It was their first date. They snuggled closer as beach
wind was cold
“Can I ask you one thing? Do you get angry?” she
asked
“No, my darling “he whispered into her ear
“Tell me again”
“I don’t get angry, sweetheart”
“Say it once more”
“You blockhead! Are you deaf or what?”he shouted in
anger
enjoyed all of them but I liked no. 4 the most!
ReplyDeleteI loved the 5th and then 4th! Nice twist in the stories!
ReplyDeleteAll Good Ones with an interesting twist 5,2,4,1 & 3 in that order
ReplyDeleteHilarous stuff !
ReplyDeleteI liked 1,4,5. They had a good twist in the end.
ReplyDeleteDestination Infinity
Ha ha , You have such ingenuity up your sleeves. Great.
ReplyDeleteThose were all so creative. The punchlines were amazing. And the last one...LOL!
ReplyDeleteInteresting twists.
ReplyDeleteinteresting :)
ReplyDeleteEnjoyed the variety!
ReplyDeleteLoved all the stories but the third one I wish had transpired in reality too.
ReplyDeleteYou are the master of 55ers :)
ReplyDeleteNamaste....
ReplyDeleteAll reverting and amusing.
good exercise 55 words, hmmmmm, i should try my hand at it one day.
KP, Wow! These are all excellent!
ReplyDeleteIt is the first time that I came to your blog.
ReplyDeleteNice post.
The stories are nice here, i liked the 5th one.
4 and 5 were good !
ReplyDeleteSo many different topics & with surprise endings :)
ReplyDeleteNicely expressed!
Enjoyed reading your stories. They are all interesting. I especially liked the third one. You should read my blog . I posted a short story( though it is a bit longer than yours). I have also written an amusing article about my two cats. If you put imaginativelicoriceallsorts as one word into Google search or put into advanced search under These exact words or phrase imaginative Licorice All Sorts you will find my blog. Regards, Verity
ReplyDeleteLoved each one of them...few words but awesome stories.
ReplyDeleteLaughed while reading the last...
ReplyDeleteLoved the 1st...
Very nice compilation GP :)
4th one is the star, though all 5 are good. 55 fiction with a punch !!
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