With no nudge from my side, she came often to my room in the first floor of her own accord. She came many times mostly for a fleeting glance except once
or twice in a day when she lingered close to me for long time. It was clear she
was in love and longed to be with me as her face cheered up whenever she came before
me. I just reciprocated her warmth in equal measure to her great glee.
In her early twenties, she was a fetching beauty with large eyes that
fluttered for no reason in my presence. She was a funny young thing who reveled
in making faces at me, sometimes narrowing her eyes, occasionally twisting her
nose, frequently pouting her wet rosy lips and mostly smiling at me. I just watched
her with interest when once a while she showed off a little unabashedly her beautiful figure,but I never responded in a big way to her overtures. But she was the type who never
gave up.
She came to this house only six months back after having married into
the family. Her husband left for office early in the morning only to come home
late in the night. She had not taken up any job and after the morning chores
she had nothing much to do. Leaving her aged in-laws who could not climb in the
ground floor, she rushed to my room at the earliest opportunity. This has been
going on without any interruption till yesterday
It was 4pm in the evening. She seemed to be happy and in great mood.
She was dressed in style and wore matching jewelry. May be she was attending
some function and possibly would be back only late at night. She came to me and
stood erect before me as if she wanted me to tell her she looked extremely attractive.
When I kept quiet, in a fit of emotion she pressed her lips hard on my face leaving a prominent
mark of lipstick. When she saw me looking at her in utter credulity,
like a crazy woman she did it repeatedly leaving red marks all over
my face.
It was then the door opened unexpectedly and her husband walked in silently.
Even as she was busy disfiguring my face, he came behind her and wound his arms
tightly around her.
”Hey, have you gone nuts or what? What are you doing?” he asked her. As
she froze in embarrassment, he taunted her “You have never been so generous with
me like this.”
Even as she, a bit ashamed, started wiping feverishly the smudges from my
face, he said “I am extremely jealous. Beware, I may break your mirror one day”
I think he spoke in jest and really never meant any harm to me.
Oh gosh... realllly good one..
ReplyDeleteI knew you would twist like this but was not able to guess it though :-) So you won!
ReplyDeleteHa ha ha....knowing your twists, I had anticipated the ending especially because it was said that she stood before me :) Good one
ReplyDeleteha ha cant stop smiling.:) an unexpected end!
ReplyDeleteOh, I thought it was a dog! Good twist.
ReplyDeleteDestination Infinity
now that was a twist for sure .. I thought it wud be usual when the husband walks in ..
ReplyDeletegood one sir
Bikram's
Interesting, misleading and wonderful. The opening para is so well narrated, it is what most of us would do. Appreciate your imagination.
ReplyDeleteKnew there was a twist. Made a guess somewhere half way. Good one.
ReplyDeleteOh my...crazy woman...!! This is an amazing story of a crazy love, insecurity, jealousy and so much more that can’t be described...!! Thank you for a soothing read, Parthsarthy. Enjoyed reading ...
ReplyDeletehahah! the twist in the end was too gud Nana! :)
ReplyDeleteLol:)..i guesses that there is so some twist but couldnt guess the mirror:)
ReplyDeleteNice! I was looking for a twist but didn't expect this twist in the tale! The narration made an interesting read!
ReplyDeleteLOL...I knew from the beginning there would be a twist but a mirror was the last thing I expected. Good one! :D
ReplyDeleteWonderful!!! I knew there was something there but a mirror? That was very original!
ReplyDeleteI was expecting a twist but definitely not a mirror. You are awesome pa!!
ReplyDeleteWow thatha wonderful one :) you're still 25 at heart!!
ReplyDeletevibha
periappa, wonderful twist. I tried to guess the ending, but didn't imagine this!
ReplyDeleteDid not expect a mirror!!! Good one.loved it.
ReplyDeleteWell woven tale of love romance passion with a hilarious twist in the end.
ReplyDeleteNo words can express the smartness and intelligence of words written by you.
ReplyDeleteVery nice story with indeed an unexpected end.
Great choice of words and well narrated story. Keep writing!
ReplyDeletehahaha... enjoyed reading it :)
ReplyDeleteHa...ha...you bamboozled us into thinking that it was one of those tales where the bored housewife has a fling... Totally enjoyed.
ReplyDeleteVazz
Lolz... This was really good GP...
ReplyDeleteI continued to wonder who the narrator would be...
Well written
That's a delightful little twist in the tale..you are wicked 😁
ReplyDeletehehe ;) Mirror mirror on the wall :) Lovely twist, it was :)
ReplyDeletewow...i didn't guess it was a mirror..i thought that must probably be the teddy bear, because i am partial to mine! :P
ReplyDeleteMirror mirror on the wall...who is the fairest of us all...absolutely a marvel ..out of the box thinking juxtaposed with brilliant description..take a bow!
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