Keshav and Kamli were anything but a
‘made for each other couple’. She was an extrovert, fun loving and gregarious
while he was an introvert, a loner and a staid type. She loved eating out, fond
of many cuisines and especially new and esoteric dishes while he always
preferred traditional home made food. She loved friends and kitty parties, and
was fond of travel. He avoided parties and was a home bird. She loved watching
films while he dozed away in cinema halls. She was a great fan of Shreya Ghosal
and Sonu Nigam while he liked only Carnatic music. She loved Soccer and had a
crush on Messi, and Keshav was no sports person. But the silver lining despite
all these differences was that they deeply loved each other.
One Sunday as they were sipping tea at
the balcony, he was nibbling with his iPhone. Kamli broke the silence.
“I had great expectations from the
marriage. But I never expected even in my dream of such a dull life. We are
married for three years. Search your heart and tell me whether you had
surprised me even once with an outing to a far off place for my birthday. Am I asking
you for a hot balloon ride at a hilly resort that my friend R got from her
hubby as a surprise gift?”
“It is not like that, dear. You know my
office and the work they have heaped on me. Believe me, it is want of time and
nothing more.”
“Phew! Just try to tickle your mind to remember of any
gift given for our wedding anniversary. I am not asking for a gorgeous dress. You
could at least take me to a local restaurant. You do not even take me for a
long drive along the beach,let alone thrilling me. You haven’t even shocked me
once doing something different from your insipid routine,”she bemoaned
“I am sorry, Kamli. What you say is
possibly true. I am not giving excuses but the pressure of office work is too
much. But I have given you total freedom to do what pleased you and never
questioned you on what you did or where you went. I have given you a vehicle and
enough money,”Keshav said in his defense.
“Who wants your car and money? Sad, you know nothing about what a woman seeks”
“Who wants your car and money? Sad, you know nothing about what a woman seeks”
“It did not strike me that you get
carried away by the outward demonstration of love. I love you deeply you know”
he replied
“It is not only these. We are like two
islands with no common interest. You do not like anything that I love. I wish
you understand me more.”
“I will try and please you from now on,”
he said patting her in the back
Two days later he told her “I may be
late tonight as I am to submit the annual report in gist to Chairman. Do not
wait for me.”
She went to bed early by 9 pm and spent
some time reading an unfinished novel listening to Suniti Chauhan on iPod. She
switched off the night lamp too and soon fell asleep. Around 1 am when she was half
asleep and turned to one side, she felt the warmth of a body behind her and an
arm over her.. She was drowsy and thought Keshav had returned even as she
snuggled closer. The grip of the arm tightened drawing her closer to him. He
had put his leg over her and ran his hand over her shoulder and arm. She
enjoyed the comfort of the grasp from behind her and the smooches on the
shoulder and her nape that sent goose bumps across her body. Keshav was always gentle
but today he was different as he had promised, she thought. “Keshav” she called
softly and asked “when did you come?”
Instead of a response, she was pulled forcefully.
It then struck her that this was not the Revlon musk that Keshav used daily but
something else pungent. Scared beyond words, she tried to push him aside
Her both hands were now in his clasp in
a scissor hold and her scream was silenced by his palm closing her mouth. It
was dark and she could not see. It was obviously someone else who had
stealthily entered and about to assault her. Praying to God, she summoned all
her strength and succeeded in freeing herself. She jumped out of the bed and
ran to a corner.
It was then the bright light came alive
and she saw Keshav sitting on the bed laughing loudly and uncontrollably.
“What a foolish act is this? You scared the
life out of me. I could have hit you hard with anything I could have got hold of”
she said angrily
“Calm down, Kamli..You wanted shock and thrill.
I hope you had it in ample measure. As a bonus, be ready to fly to
Hong Kong next week. I have some work there for a day but we will spend a week there. I
will make amends for all the lost happiness” he said with a mischievous wink
It was now her turn to hug him in joy.
At last he learnt his lesson...before it was too late! Good narration!
ReplyDeleteThe initial narration was a bit long, but the end was good.
ReplyDeleteDestination Infinity
:D ahh if only it was so easy....
ReplyDeleteAs usual an interesting twist.
ReplyDeleteA surprise can often turn into a shock !! Thank god it was neither :)
ReplyDeleteVery Interesting as well as sweet story. :-)
ReplyDeleteOnly if half the men realised it earlier than later...:)
ReplyDeleteThat was something. I really thought something scary was going to happen at the end.
ReplyDeleteI hate the immature expectations like that of Kamli's not understanding the work pressures of men, I felt sorry for Keshav for having resorted to this kind of a trick to please his wife.
ReplyDeleteNice story. I liked the end.
ReplyDelete:-) Up to your usual surprise twist at the end of the story.
ReplyDeleteBut it works all the time.
Never again will Kamli ever crib about her husband's un romantic ways !
ReplyDeleteCleverly written ! A subtle pointer to husbands and wives !
Vazz
Aha! Interesting and nice...
ReplyDeleteGlad that he didnt carry on with his excuses forever!
That was a scary way to surprise her but at least all ended well. :)
ReplyDeleteThe pungent smell instead of the revlon is still intriguing me...I am just being mischievous..
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