It was a
large green lawn with colourful flower plants encircling it. The line of full
grown trees at regular intervals on the periphery provided cool shade, though
after 4 pm they made the place somewhat dark. Arogyasami enjoyed the scenic
beauty daily sitting on the bench and often lost in thought on his many
problems and a few happy memories, sometimes frowning and sometimes smiling. The
frequent cool breeze laden with the scent of flowers made the place a happy hangout.
He preferred to be alone but some days other people came to the lawn like him.
Even when there were several benches, it irked him they always chose his bench to
crowd together.
Today he had
come earlier than usual and luckily there were none in the lawn. The sky was
overcast and the place seemed darker than usual. He saw with interest a little
yonder an overgrown squirrel struggling repeatedly to break a hard nut with its
teeth when abruptly it dropped the nut and hurried into a bush as if it sensed
danger. Wondering why it ran away, he saw to his horror a creepy figure that seemed
like a bent human form flailing its arms and covered in black rushing towards
the bush. It was just about 20 feet away. He crossed his chest with his fingers.
Arogyasami strained his eyes hard into the darkness and saw the figure moving quickly
towards him. Even as he wished to run away, his legs froze in fear and he fainted.
When he
became conscious and opened his eyes, he saw three persons bent over him with
their faces breaking into large smile and exclaiming, “He is alive.”
“What
happened to you?” one asked and added, “You look as if you had met a devil.”
“True, I
saw a ghost clad in black trying to catch a squirrel and failing in its
attempt, it came after me. I could not see its face clearly but I will swear it
was a wicked and violent ghost,” Arogyasami said somewhat recovered from the
shock.
“All crap, why
would a ghost catch a squirrel? There is no ghost here. I have been coming to
this place for years and have never seen one or heard of such a thing. You must
be hallucinating,” said Appadurai, a frail old man with a beak like nose.
“How could
you say like this?” interrupted Rajappa, a tall and stodgy guy. I have heard
that many people have committed suicide on these trees and their ghosts freely
roam here, a few peaceful and most are harmful. They roam sometimes in white robes
too not necessarily in black always. Many have died stricken by them or in
fear. I am told nobody comes here after dark. In fact, I have myself
encountered one such. It had grotesque misshapen features with hollow cheeks,
toothless mouth and protruding tongue much longer than for us. It never walked
on ground and caught me in a trice. I thought my heart would burst but summoning
my nerve, I pleaded with it to leave me alone. It took a hard look at me and
said with a weird smile that was scarier to look, “Sorry buddy, a case of
mistaken identity. I am looking for one Appadurai who is responsible for my
present state.”
The frail
beak nosed guy turned pale and asked in shivering voice, “Did the ghost say
Appadurai? I have never driven anyone to death.”
Arogyasami
interrupted to say to Appadurai, “Ghosts never forget till they wreak their
vengeance. I suggest you avoid this place for a few months. I have heard they
have elephantine memory and haunt the place frequently. You are lucky to have
escaped today.”
Gopanna, a
short and stout guy, who was silent hitherto spoke at last, “I have personal
experience with a ghost. I killed my neighbour who tried to misbehave with my
wife when I was away. I came in the nick of time and hit him repeatedly with a
hockey stick till he died. He said before he lost his consciousness,’ I will
never let you go unpunished. Wherever I am, I will catch you and kill you.’ I
spared my wife as she did no fault. I was let off by police. I have myself
heard strange cries and noises at unearthly hours outside my house. We vacated
the place. I am no more troubled.”
“You are
lucky, “said Arogyasami.
It was already
dark past 6pm on a wintry evening despite the dim lights on the lamp posts. It
was then Appadurai screamed, “Turn behind and see. Three ghosts in white are
rushing towards us. Let us run to safety,” even as the white figures closed in
on them. Arogyasami fainted again. Appadurai started crying hoarsely while
Gopanna tried to run. Rajappa stood still utterly confused.
When the
three men in white uniform caught all the four, one of them shouted at them
telling, “What are you doing here? You are all supposed to be in your cell by 6pm. Come along quietly or I will beat you blue.”
They followed
the wardens meekly without demur to their cells in the mental asylum.
Nice twist in the end ! Liked it .
ReplyDeleteHappy Halloween !
Ha ha ha, that was a good yarn, indeed. Narrated so well.
ReplyDeleteHa ha. A good story in time for Halloween:)
ReplyDeleteA vivid description of ghosts and their targets. Spine chilling experience!!
ReplyDeletei must say, you are more consistent than VK with your humor sprinkled twists!!
ReplyDeletebut what if those in mental asylum have an extra sense to 'feel' the ghosts?!! ;)
The unexpected twist takes it all. Superb narration and thought. Really loved it
ReplyDeleteWhat a twist to the tale ! Sir, you had really ignited our imagination!!
ReplyDeleteWow. You have put all your imagination into it. Though you are known for twist but in this the un excepted twist is marvelous.
ReplyDeleteWonderful ending
ReplyDeleteUnexpected and nice ending.
ReplyDeleteAs I was reading, I could feel my heart thump a lil faster, but finally burst out laughing. You ended with a great twist! Loved it!!
ReplyDeleteI never expected this twist in this tale. Very good one.
ReplyDeleteApt story for halloween. Half expected the three to be the ghosts. Loved the twist.
ReplyDeleteI am not a great fan of ghost stories. But I liked this one!
ReplyDeleteA story with a nice Twist, I liked it. Happy Halloween . . . :)
ReplyDeleteHahaha .. funny twist
ReplyDeleteHaha,enjoyed the story thoroughly,well written...👩⚕️👏👏
ReplyDeleteAha! A wonderful twist. Nice.
ReplyDeleteHahahaha...Good twist
ReplyDeleteEven your ghost stories are so likeable! Good twist in the tale :)
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