A friend had asked me to write a horror story. This is an old one
repeated for his reading pleasure and for the new followers.
It was late evening. I was
sitting in the lounge of a hotel in an interior African city.
” Hey, new to this place? Would
you like to see a cannibal?” asked a tall and big man from the adjacent sofa.
I had nothing specific to do and readily agreed curious to see something strange.
In a few minutes we drove outside
the city to what seemed a forest and were face to face with a bare bodied black
tribal man with shrunken face, matted hair, unkempt beard and beads on neck seated
before a bonfire to ward off the cold. There were lines in white and orange on
his face and body.
There was a look of surprise and
his eyes glistened as he smiled showing his yellow teeth. He made no attempt to
talk but made some gestures that I could hardly comprehend. A shudder passed
through me as he looked at my white skin with interest.
I looked around for my companion.
He was not seen. A lump arose in my throat when I heard a loud thud. My
companion had hit the black man hard on his head.
“Don’t worry” he said as he
plunged his sharp teeth with relish on the black man’s shoulder and added with
a large grin showing his blood filled mouth, “I am lucky today. Black and white
would make a great combo.”
As he slowly stood up with a
vicious look and blood dripping from his flesh-filled mouth, I stood frozen still
and dazed like a deer caught in the headlights.
” Trinng, trinng, trinng,” the
phone came alive with the receptionist in her sweet drawl announcing, “Good morning,Sir.
This is a wake up call. It is 4 am and your flight is at 6 am.” Highly relieved
but still dazed, I thought of the terrible nightmare looking at my sweat
drenched shirt.
Good that was only a dream.
ReplyDeleteSuper triller to the end!!!!
ReplyDeleteWe could visualize his nightmare as we read. Good one
ReplyDeleteThis story sent a chill down my spine. Good that it was just a dream
ReplyDeleteWhew!fortunately just a dream. Superbly written.
ReplyDeleteNice thriller. Glad it was a dream. Lesson learnt is never travel with a stranger.
ReplyDeleteYour signature twist to the tale! Nice one.
ReplyDeleteMy God!!! It was really scary! I am glad it was only a nightmare
ReplyDeletehavent I read this before?
ReplyDeletethough you say it s a repeated one, the only thing i remember is I knew it was dream yet the 'dream' still kept me going.
I vaguely remember this story but enjoyed reading it again! The narration makes me read again and again, thank you, KP
ReplyDeleteGood one. :-)
ReplyDeleteI had not read this before, quite a thriller!
ReplyDeleteIt sent a chill down my spine !
ReplyDeleteA thriller..... but what if it is true....
ReplyDeleteWhat a scary dream. As usual well narrated story Parthia sir.
ReplyDeleteBrrrr. Good one.
ReplyDeletePhew! Nightmare indeed :)
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