(The readers are informed in advance not to expect any twist or mystery end. This is a story of the sincere
prayers of a devout couple answered)
It was a narrow dusty lane crowded with people, erratically moving
cattle, and small vehicles inching their way. It was not much tiresome for the
Gujarati couple to wade through this as the distance to Banke Bihari temple was
short and the early November weather was pleasant. They let a sigh of relief as
they reached the entrance to Radhe Krishna temple.
Urmila told her husband Pankaj Desai,” I am excited to be here at last.
I have been dreaming of a visit to this famous temple for many years. I
sincerely hope Lord Krishna here known for His beauty and expressive eyes would
turn His merciful eyes on us and grant us our long awaited wish.”
“Surely He would, I have no doubt. I am also thrilled like you to be
here. The crowd inside the temple seems unmanageable and I wish we get a close
darshan,” Pankaj replied.
Once they presented themselves at the entrance, the milling crowd took
over pushing them from all sides to present them in front of the deity. It was
a great ordeal. But what a mesmerizing experience it was looking at the idol
that was at once incredibly charming and indescribable in words. In the few
moments they could manage to stand, they prayed devoutly for a child that was
denied to them for almost eight years. As she was praying with bent head, a
garland that was thrown by the priest fell on her. Overjoyed by this good omen
the couple happily came out of the temple.
All the way up to the end of the lane where their car was parked,
mendicants were pestering them for alms which they generously gave. As they
were walking briskly free of beggars at the end of lane towards the car, they
espied an ash smeared old man in ochre robes with flowing beard smiling at them
and blessing them with raised hands. As he made no demand and his personality
evoked an instant respect, they moved near him and bent down with folded arms.
He blessed the couple with raised hands and remarked with a smile, “I
know the object of your visit. It will be fulfilled by Banke Bihari soonest but
I can also foresee your getting much earlier a Mahalakshmi.”
Confused about the import of his strange statement and yet happy, they
prostrated before him and gave him 500 rupees. He broke into loud laughter and
said, “Don’t you see I have renounced all material possessions. I do not need
your money. Go home happily and accept the joyous things as they come to you.”
he said abruptly standing up and walking away towards the temple to be lost in
the crowd. The visage of the saintly man lingered for a long time.
On the second day the couple came to New Delhi station to board the
Swarna Jayanthi Rajdhani express to Ahmedabad leaving around 8pm. They had come
earlier to the station by 6.30 pm. As they were waiting in the platform for the
train to be placed, they heard a commotion behind them with several passengers
and onlookers crowded just a few yards behind them. Pankaj went near to know
what the furor was about. He found a two year old baby girl crying aloud
calling “Ma, ma” and plucking the sari of a young woman lying on a bench. There
was no movement from her and it was a pathetic sight to see the crying child.
One porter in the crowd came forward and shook her shoulder to wake her up only
to find her inert with the head falling on its side. He felt the nostrils and
said to no one in particular, ”margaya.” One doctor who happened to be in the
crowd examined her eyes and the chest with stethoscope and pronounced her dead.
A gloom fell on the assembled people.
The pitiable baby was still trying to wake her mother by clutching at
her hand and sari. The baby was very cute and looked from her dress as hailing
from a middle class family. The woman about 28 was also well dressed and
evidently came to the station to board the train from the box placed beside
her. There seemed none else accompanying them.
A railway police inspector rushed to the spot and took stock of the
situation. He asked the crowd whether anyone knew her. The box was opened and
its contents rummaged to see whether her identity could be established. Only a ticket
to Ahmedabad by Rajdhani was available. There was no evidence to reveal her
identity and there was strangely no mobile phone too.
Meanwhile Urmila dragging their two boxes came near Pankaj. The baby
was wailing seeing the surrounding crowd of men. With motherly instincts
surging, Urmila held the baby in her arms against her chest and patted it
gently. To the great relief of the depressed crowd, it broke into a smile.
Urmila looked at Pankaj with a meaningful smile.
Pankaj Desai told the inspector whom he took a little away,” I am a
reasonably well to do businessman from Ahmedabad. Here is my card. We came to
Brindavan to pray for a child. I have a humble suggestion to make for your
consideration. Till such time someone comes forward to claim the baby legally
that she is related to them, let her be with us. I will take care of her as if
she is God’s present to us. I am well known in my locality. You can talk to the
SHO to check the veracity of my statement. If no one comes forward to claim, I
wish to adopt the baby complying with legal requirements. The baby as you can
see is already attached to my wife.”
The Inspector gave instructions to have the body removed to a hospital
for post mortem and took Pankaj and Urmila with him to the outpost in the
station.” Do not worry. I will have it in writing from you. I will talk to SHO
of your area now on face time and ask him to identify you. I feel a loving home
is better for the baby than a destitute home and you both are wanting one to
fill joy in your family. Still I need to take the approval of my boss. If
necessary, you may have to cancel the journey and depart after a day or two. We
will still try to rush it through before the departure time. Give me copies of
your adhaar if you carry with you or from the photos in your mobile. But all
these are subject to the condition, the moment someone comes up having a better
claim, we may ask you to personally come here to return the child if we decide
in his favour. I feel it unlikely though.”
Pankaj looked at his wife Urmila, who told him instantly, “Don’t you
remember what the Sant told us and that we should accept whatever comes in our
way and she would be a Mahalakshmi?” This clinched the issue.
The energetic inspector managed things so efficiently and quickly, the
couple could get into the train with the baby in the nick of its departure.
Predictably Urmila in a few months was expecting a baby, firm in the
belief that Banke Bihari had answered their prayers in His infinite mercy. The
little girl was aptly named Mahalakshmi. True to her name, she brought with her
great prosperity and happiness in the family with Pankaj Desai’s business
growing by leaps and bounds. As there were no claimants, Desais legally adopted
baby Mahalakshmi in a grand and gala celebration.
Aha..nice story..with the disclaimer at the start to tune the readers!
ReplyDeleteThere are people who mysteriously come into our lives and then just vanish into thin air.
I had written a poem sometime back and please allow me to share that here https://adsunsri.wordpress.com/2016/04/02/godsend/
We need more nice people like the couple!
ReplyDeleteVasudha
Enjoyed the simple story and this time not having a twist is indeed a twist in itself.
ReplyDeleteHmm...wishes fulfilled.
ReplyDeleteEngaging writing. Thank you for sharing.
But why the caveat at the beginning? I feel that's taking away the fun of reading your blog!
Best wishes and warm regards
Hemantha Kumar Pamarthy
Simple and beautifully narrated.Need to find words for appreciation.
ReplyDeleteHeart warming story , highlighting faith , goodness and kindness among people.
ReplyDeleteWell written
Take care
Chitra Solomon
A nice feel good story. The disclaimer could have been avoided. Strange are the ways of Krishna
ReplyDeleteA happy ending, a happy family
ReplyDeleteEverything sweet and nice.
BTW i came to know about Banke Bihari from you and I am happy i could visit the temple. Thanks a ton.
Sweet story! Good ending for all, except for the poor mother of the child.
ReplyDeleteThanks for the disclaimer at the beginning....we are tending to take it for granted that your inimitable stories will always have a twist....this teaches us not to take you for granted!
The Lord is kind and merciful and if you have immense and unshakeable faith you will receive abundant blessings. Such stories will gladden the hearts of even the non believers.
ReplyDeleteThe Lord is kind and merciful and if you have immense and unshakeable faith you will receive abundant blessings. Such stories will gladden the hearts of even the non believers.
ReplyDeleteWoww..such a nice read full of positivity, kindness and faith in divine lord...
ReplyDeleteBeautiful use of imagery . I could see the couple jostling through the crowds in my mind’s eye. The story serves to reaffirm one’s faith in divine power, coming at a time when despondency looms large
ReplyDeleteWho could be this?
DeleteThe seed of Mahalakshmi was sown at the temple by the saint and so it was easy to decide to take care of this child/adopt this child. Nice story. Otherwise the child would have reached some home. The child was lucky!
ReplyDeleteWell written and a nice story. It is worth appreciating.
ReplyDeleteNice heart warming story. However, something is not kosher. The dead lady had a ticket to go to Ahmadabad in Rajdhani train. Therefore, she cannot be a beggar or destitute. She must be at least a middle class. She had a baby with her. Surprising no one came to look for her in the years to come. This couple, at least, could have given an ad in the local Ahmadabad newspaper.
ReplyDeleteA very beautiful story! What God plans and how He executes is the mystery element in the story😀And such a beautiful emotional story should not have a twist, you nailed every bit of the details
ReplyDeleteVery pleasant story. I like the way you have written💐
ReplyDeleteVery fortunate couple. Very soon after darshan she had her prayers answered in the form of baby Mahalalkshmi making them happy. A simple story as u say but a very neat one.I liked it. Thank you very much
ReplyDeleteReassuring and reaffirming Faith in God !
ReplyDeleteSimple narration and nice story
ReplyDeleteBrought a smile on my face!
ReplyDeleteNice and pleasant story!
ReplyDeleteA nice feel good story. Knowing and having experienced such blessings in my own life, I can empathise with the couple. Truly, God's ways are great and full of bounties.
ReplyDeleteWow. A wonderful and heart warming story. Reminds me about a real life incident that I saw on the news.
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